Racing Life

Come on, I really want to know when I can get to F1. It feels a bit too slow... My own feeling, and the age is too far into the future, so it's not easy to have a sense of immersion. It will take at least 26 years to get into F1 at this rate. You can't just go to F1 after completing GB3, emmm, anyway, it feels like the pace is slow.

There are basically no details or foreshadowing. The protagonist's background introduction and ability values have no reference significance. The novel is very confusing and has a poor sense of immersion. Regarding the description of the game, basically the plot is all in the author's mind, but when it is actually written, it is basically dull and boring. Many times it appears suddenly, like media interviews or something, just like a red flag crash during a game, it suddenly appears, but The reason, as a result, the details of the protagonist's abilities are basically very pale. I can understand that this is the first time the author has written such a novel. The protagonist's emotions are nothing but anger. The description of life and ability training are too little, and especially the background and identity of the supporting characters in the book are very confusing. The writing is okay, but the writing style needs to be strengthened, and the detail processing is too poor.

Thank you fellow Taoist for adding to the bookshelf. Let me comment on the courtesy exchange. I don't bother to comment on each other. It's not that I am arrogant. I think it is really good if someone is really convinced and satisfied after reading it. I have only read a few chapters. You have professional knowledge and your writing is not immature. It's good to give it five stars. Come on! Because I'm busy with work, I just take the time to type after finishing my work every day, so I'm sorry that I can't catch up on every chapter, but I will read it in my spare time. You are the first author I added to my bookshelf and commented on.

The subject matter is good, the characters have distinct personalities, and the events and conflicts are tense. I will add it to the bookshelf decisively and continue to follow 🤤[send my heart]

Read it in one sitting! Works with such themes are rare! It looks good, please code!

Overall, it is very good. It is a bit like a popular science article. The author still has a lot of room for improvement. I look forward to continuing to improve my writing skills.

What a great idea. Articles like this are really rare in Tomato. Thank you for your support.

Very interesting, the author is very creative, I love reading it!

It feels like fast and furious, but the AI ​​recitation of foreign names is a bit shabby

The subject matter of the novel is new, the language is rich and exciting, the characters are vivid and beautiful. 💕