Mythology Ends, and I Create a New Myth

The settings are good, but the details are a mess. The dialogue between the characters is dry and there is no logic in their actions. There is no psychological description either. That Lin is his father. He is a big shot, but when it comes to his daughter, he can only talk about it in two words. It's really hard to describe what kind of temptation the author wrote about. Can you tell me what the temptation revealed? And the heroine's friend, who is an important character after all, has no sense of autonomy at all. Completely go with the flow. I really can't go into details. To be honest, the setting is quite attractive to me. But it's too dry. Once the writing is dry, the substitution is poor. Dozens of chapters can still be sustained by the setting. This has always been the case, and nine times out of ten, he will fall into the street.

What kind of overbearing president is this rubbish article about cultivating immortality?