Qin Yi passed away under the continuous pressure of the company's supervisor.
As soon as I opened my eyes, I found that I had one more option in front of me.
The world has also quietly changed.
We'll start over together.
Reader comments
The early pace was too fast. There was no transition period for the spiritual energy to recover, and suddenly various legendary beasts appeared. Humanity also suddenly had a team of strengtheners.
Looking at the timeline from your protagonist's point of view, it only took more than half a month for the spiritual energy to recover, and everything was done in one step. The city wall was built so quickly, and the dragons appeared. What else can you write later.
Travel through time and become a Qilin. Do you want to unite the world or only attack the Chinese? Shouldn't we become Qilin and protect China? Plus the pace is too fast. Spiritual energy revived. To unify, a bunch of young men should not go and see the highest official of China first. Why did you run back into the mountain? [Eating Melon] Plus, doesn't China have atomic bombs and missiles? Is it just a decoration? I don't care about the recovery of spiritual energy. How big a body, how much compulsion? At worst, we'll all die together. Killed by a missile in situ bombing, I think this book is wrong.
The subject matter is good but the writing is not. Besides, I think you should read novels of the same type to gain some experience? Write normally, and the web articles you write are not compositions. In the end, you just try to persevere and it just doesn't cut it anymore, right?
The book is very nice, but the author's writing style is a bit uh. For example, I can't tell which chapter this is, which chapter this is, and it means you, for example, returning to the factory, you may want to say something, if a certain place, a certain city, you jump directly to the place, we will have a sense of isolation.
The more I look at it, the more familiar it looks. Isn't this the one in Douyin? What does it seem to be called? The willow tree begins to evolve.
Not bad, come on ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶з
I hope the author will read more about how other novels are written. The writing style is a bit poor.
? Is this a composition? And it's a bit too confusing. Although I can still understand it after a few strokes, it just doesn't work.
The early pace was too fast. There was no transition period for the spiritual energy to recover, and suddenly various legendary beasts appeared. Humanity also suddenly had a team of strengtheners. Looking at the timeline from your protagonist's point of view, it only took more than half a month for the spiritual energy to recover, and everything was done in one step. The city wall was built so quickly, and the dragons appeared. What else can you write later.
Travel through time and become a Qilin. Do you want to unite the world or only attack the Chinese? Shouldn't we become Qilin and protect China? Plus the pace is too fast. Spiritual energy revived. To unify, a bunch of young men should not go and see the highest official of China first. Why did you run back into the mountain? [Eating Melon] Plus, doesn't China have atomic bombs and missiles? Is it just a decoration? I don't care about the recovery of spiritual energy. How big a body, how much compulsion? At worst, we'll all die together. Killed by a missile in situ bombing, I think this book is wrong.
The subject matter is good but the writing is not. Besides, I think you should read novels of the same type to gain some experience? Write normally, and the web articles you write are not compositions. In the end, you just try to persevere and it just doesn't cut it anymore, right?
The book is very nice, but the author's writing style is a bit uh. For example, I can't tell which chapter this is, which chapter this is, and it means you, for example, returning to the factory, you may want to say something, if a certain place, a certain city, you jump directly to the place, we will have a sense of isolation. The more I look at it, the more familiar it looks. Isn't this the one in Douyin? What does it seem to be called? The willow tree begins to evolve.
Not bad, come on ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶з
I hope the author will read more about how other novels are written. The writing style is a bit poor.
? Is this a composition? And it's a bit too confusing. Although I can still understand it after a few strokes, it just doesn't work.
The pace is too fast and a bit chaotic