Matriarchy: Me, the Master

Isn't it too much for the author to add his own rating? Newbie writing, please take care of me If there is anything you think is not good in the article, please tell me and I will do my best to correct it. Now I am going to change it one by one from the previous chapter, and the issues mentioned in the next few chapters will be corrected. There are some differences between the previously modified chapters and some unmodified chapters later. I hope you understand.

From the front, it looks okay, but from the back, I feel that the male protagonist is stupid and unaware of himself. Couldn't he see that others are plotting against him? He also wants to drink with that man named Hou. He is so drunk that he can't find the southeast, northwest, and northwest. How can I stay innocent and live to this day? Have I never drank?! Wherever I look, I feel like there is nothing to see. I don't understand. Is it writing a single female protagonist? If this is the case, isn't it just to gain points for myself? In addition, can heroines really only be written as yandere heroines? Wouldn't it be better to write him as a normal one than he is now? There's not much to see. Bye-Bye

Let's not talk about the word count and content issues. Just a single typo, smooth sentences and many other basic issues have already left a bad impression. When introducing some states, the words spoken are too stiff, such as whether he used a masking technique, etc., You can just say it first. He used a masking technique on the way there instead of writing it out as if he was asking and answering himself. These questions can obviously be discovered after reading it a few times after he writes it. If he feels awkward when reading it and the sentence is a bit awkward, it means that it needs to be revised.

The pace is a little too fast. It's a very messy plot and I like it very much. But suddenly she became a yandere and didn't fit in. There is no need to write that she is a yandere so early. You can change it at the later turning point, otherwise don't worry if it looks a little bit...

This book is indeed well written, but the author's writing style needs to be improved. I would like to give him a five-star review to encourage him.

It's so outrageous, I was confused when I watched it. The plot is quite interesting, except for the missing words in the dialogue. .

Too many typos. The author should pay attention to it himself and give you a five-star encouragement.

Very pretty.

@ Ice Orange Cat ,

When I read a book, I usually give the author a five-star rating.