Three Kingdoms: I Am the Prime Minister's Younger Brother

New to authoring? Pay attention to the pronouns. The names of some things are different in ancient and modern times. If you are not sure, look them up. Although the article generally explains the meaning clearly, as a novel, the overall feeling is that there is still a lot of room for improvement. There should be a little more description of demeanor and environment. The article gave me the feeling that the three-dimensional sense is not strong, the emotions are not in place, there are too many language descriptions, and the length is long and dragging. You can look at other high-scoring books. They have a small climax almost every three chapters. The non-key points and climax parts can be explained clearly in one sentence instead of two sentences. The most typical thing is that you write about the protagonist's life before time travel. It is too long and consumes the enthusiasm of reading the book. The first four chapters are really important. If there are no highlights, many people will abandon the book directly. Among those books with high scores and high popularity, which one is not attractive in the first four chapters? Let me be honest, what you wrote is really not attractive enough. I like Prime Minister Zhuge, and I am short on books, so I came in to take a look. Before I saw the title of the book, I was not sure whether you wanted to write about Cao Cao or Zhuge Liang. Until I took a gamble and read the introduction. But there is nothing obvious about your introduction. It is also recommended to divide it into more segments, otherwise it will look comfortable.

The pace is too slow and the title is too biased. It gave me the impression that it was a time-traveling ancient farming novel for the general public. I might as well have removed the Three Kingdoms label and treated it like an Easter egg that I only see occasionally. What we want to look at is the Three Kingdoms, Zhuge, Liu Bei, Cao Cao, no matter how bad they are, they are their subordinates, not some imaginary history of the development of farming by the sons of small landowners in ancient times.