Pokémon: Sinnoh, the Beginning of a Dream

I like original smart phones, but lately all the time-travel smart phones have given me a headache. The fighting is very anime, which is more novel than the game data system text. Although the emotional line is awkward, there are no emotional scenes in Pokémon Tomato that are not awkward. This head-knocking cp also has some filters, mainly because I like Zhiguang and love kowtow, so I'll use more.

Zhiguang, my favorite! I hope the author will not start a harem. The writing is really good now. Xiaozhi and Xiaoguang are perfect CPs [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

It's pretty good. It's like watching anime. It's very reasonable.

Big cheers for the author ^ω^. I especially like Zhi Guangwen.

The writing is so good, the plot is compact, and the emotional lines are not conflicting. The most important thing is that Master Zhi is not too OOC. It can be said that it is the best description among all the fanfics I have read about Xiaozhi. He is really considerate towards Pokémon and is really stupid about his own feelings, haha.

Like it, Zhiguang is eternal (the author is really an angel. This is the best Zhiguang article I have found on Dangtomato. I hope the author can let Zhiguang travel to other areas together, not just Sinnoh. I will always support it)

This is the best book so far. It used to be about taking over the body, and it seemed a bit awkward and unpleasant. Sure enough, the Xiaozhi is still the same Xiaozhi.

Come on, I'm waiting to see the plot of the Kalos area. I'm looking forward to Semei and the Shura Field of Light Palace. I hope the author can stick to it.

Zhiguang is really good, but I don't know when Xiaozhi will wake up. The author writes very well. I wonder if he will write about going to the Kalos area.

I like Zhiguang very much, and Xiaozhi himself likes it even more. I hope the author can let Xiaozhi cheat on the elves [blowing kiss]

I absolutely love how this book is written. Since you let Xiaozhi be reborn to realize his dream, the companions that Xiaozhi traveled with in the Kalos and Hezhu areas in his previous life have changed. They no longer have the same feeling as when watching the anime. I think that since you want to write about realizing your dream, you should use the original characters to complete the trip and the league competition. Also, it is so absolute that Xiaoguang told Xiaozhi not to talk to other girls alone. I know that the author you are writing is Zhiguang, but this portrayal is so absolute. I absolutely love Xiaozhi. That's not the case. I'm not saying that your writing is not good, you wrote it very well, otherwise I wouldn't give you a five-star review. I just insist that if you want to write about realizing your dream, you should use the original characters to travel with Ash. After all, it's really a pity for Carlos and Hezhong. Come on author, it's really good.

The plot is handled very well, and Xiaoguang is also very cute and coquettish. While reading this, I noticed a few issues about readers, "Ash is not like Ash". If you want to write a good fanfic, you don't treat the readers as fools. Maturity after traveling for so many years is almost inevitable, so TV doesn't need to consider this. The plot is different in each region and the rest is left to the audience's imagination. Can your novel be like this? Ash is still the same Ash. Still wooden, the author handled the plot of comforting Xiaoguang very well. He didn't try to improve Xiaozhi's emotional intelligence, but because Xiaozhi cared about his traveling companions, he unknowingly flirted with Xiaoguang. It's not industrial saccharine. This hazy feeling is a good demonstration of the co-production between the two of them, and it comes naturally. It's strange, is it because of the discontinuation of updates? Why can't I push this book?

It's well written, the emotions and combat are good, I hope it can be updated to Padya. Now that the plot is about to reach the treasure island, can Xiaozhi accept a timid insect and Xiaoguang accept a cute fly? This is my suggestion, I hope the author can adopt it

Originally, I was leaning towards Serena, but since I read this book, I have become obsessed with Light Palace again. The author, the ultimate Zhiguang party, has definitely read Zhendiaan n times. The plot is good + the writing is good + sweet. Zhiguang Saigao [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

I have to say that this is the most emotional and delicate Pokémon article I have seen in the past few years, especially for an omnivore like me, it is not very friendly.

To be selfish, I really hope that the author can keep writing. This is really one of the best books I have ever read. I really like it. Now I realize that although there are more than 400 pictures, I still feel that it is not enough. When I read Pokémon in the past, my favorite was Xiao Guang. The Internet is basically full of harem books. It is rare to find such a good Zhi Guang novel. The author is really great and writes very well. [Cry][cry][cry]

To be honest, although I have only read five chapters, I am already bursting into tears. This is the Ash I love, and my dream has come true. Among all the Ash, I am the most similar to him. I finally see that young boy growing up and becoming mature. I seem to see the little boy who watched Pokémon on the TV, played with the handheld and enjoyed his childhood.

Marvelous! The character written by the author is really in line with the original work. I have seen that the Ash characters written by other fans are not as well written by the author [send my heart], and the emotional scenes are also well written (it was originally about Ash and Serena, but now they both like [smile]), which makes up for the regret. You must write more and don't finish it easily. However, this book also has a shortcoming: it is too short, so the author needs to stand up! [Sinister smile]

Don't worry, this book will definitely get better and better. Although the rating is a bit low, but for the sake of realizing my dream, it's okay. It's okay if the rating is low. As long as I believe that tomorrow will get better and better, stay with the tape, stay with the tape.

Please let me give this book full marks. Your book is really worth reading. Although it is said that it is coming back again, our protagonist is still so passionate. There is only a hint of wisdom in the passion. This can be regarded as a small improvement. Well, and during this journey, well, the author also only chooses I wrote about some key points, such as the moment of evolution, and then, um, the elves of the original owner were conquered, and there are still some that should be there. Furthermore, it means that some new elves were conquered. I didn't read too much, but at least Cocodora was conquered, which gave me a lot of surprises. Then, in this book, Xiaozhi will call his former partners to give his current partners special training. I have to say that the writing is very powerful. The experience of this era is getting stronger and stronger. I hope the subsequent plots will become more and more exciting. I can only say that I don't know if I will write about the Kalos region if I finish writing Hezhong in a while. ╮（＿）╭

Wisdom is eternal, good! It's a very good book. The plot has been slightly adjusted, but the overall story remains unchanged. What kind of brilliance will Xiaozhi burst into when he meets his former opponents again? The girl who also supported him at the last moment, will the relationship between the two take a further step this time? Yes, no problem!

Although I haven't finished reading it yet, I want to say first that I like the author's love for Zhiguang and some of my own views on Zhiguang's feelings. Hahaha, should I say that most people who like Zhiguang are probably detail freaks who love to dig out details? But the official details about Zhiguang did leave a lot for us to dig into. Ahem, I'm going too far. In short, for those who like Zhiguang, I strongly recommend you to watch it. Although the writing in the early stage is not that good, the character and plot development are OK! If you insist on saying something, say it if you don't! What kind of bicycle does this rare pure intellectual Guangwen want? Personally, I only like pure love, and in terms of the world view in Pokémon and Xiaozhi's personal emotions, pure love is the only one that is suitable. Although I have seen a lot of people who are not pure Chiguang watching, well, everyone has their own preferences, and everyone has their own favorite characters. Personally, I just prefer cp that follows the will of the character in the animation. The fact that people who are not addicted to Chiguang can read it already shows how powerful the author is. It is very difficult for an author to retain his original intention and write for such a long time. In short, thank you to the author for writing such a great article, which has solved our regret of liking Zhiguang. I hope you will have no problems in your creation and life!

First of all. When I first saw that it had a single female protagonist, I thought it was another Ash Ketchum rebirth story. I just started reading. I don't know why the writing is too good, but it's also too sweet, and sometimes it makes me teary. I like this couple more and more. There is also Xiaozhi's calmness and Xiaoguang's growth. They are together and grow with each other. I really like this work and hope the author will continue to work hard and have a good rest. Make the work more long-term.

As someone who has watched Pokémon anime for 20 years. The details you wrote are okay, from the journey to pursue his dream to Ash's final journey (Horizon is not counted). After all, this is a sweet article, not a battle article. The battle series does not need to be described too clearly. Just write mainly about life. Update slowly, don't put too much pressure on it Come on [Like] [Learned]

I have to say that the author's description of Xiaozhi and Xiaozhi's love process are very good. The descriptions of battles and other characters are very good. In addition, the compensation for some regrets and competition challenges are also very Xiaozhi style. . However, there are many descriptions of Zhiguang's love affairs, so those who are not pure Zhiguang party members should be cautious. But if you want to make up for your regrets, you can go check it out. It's pretty good. The description of the league game and the victory are very comfortable. I was not very comfortable with Serina's last trip alone and that conversation.

The author opened a separate chapter to analyze Zhiguang when there are more than 100 chapters. It really shocked me. The first few pictures of Hezhong Little Theater are also very interesting. They make up for the shortcomings of the animation and bring out Zhiguang's feelings. I hope the author can stick to it.

The writing is pretty good and not too embarrassing to read. The plot is also very good.

Personally, I don't really like watching Zhiguang, but overall it's really good to watch if I skip it. I have to say, the author wrote it really well. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It's very interesting. It's not a mindless harem story, and it doesn't have a huge golden finger. It feels like we are accompanying Xiaozhi on another adventure and reliving the good times. A very good-looking single female protagonist, who always firmly chooses Xiaoguang and has no ambiguity with other female characters.

This is the best elf article I have ever read. The writing is very delicate. It is the original Zhiye. There is no time travel setting. It is just rebirth. It makes up for a lot of regrets. The style is perfect, and you can tell at a glance that this is a good work Whether it's emotional lines, combat, daily life, or sweet little extras, they are all written so well. I said Zhiguang, what should you say🤓👆🏻 It's really fragrant, the most fragrant grain in the world! ! ! The author teacher is simply an angel! Can produce such delicious rice w