Star Train: but the Heroes and Herrschers Are Here

It's really well written, the characters are well maintained, and the plot of the story is very reasonable. It's all a dream come true [laughs]. However, please note that the main plot is mainly the protagonist's route and the layout of the star core hunters. Don't write too biasedly. Five-star praise! I said that there are some places where the reading is not smooth. It always feels unreasonable and the plot is missing. It turns out that you are digging a hole but not filling it [punch out] [punch out] [punch out] [punch out]

Oh, my friend, hurry up and update. I can't wait to see what's next. If you don't update yet, you will bear my wrath. I will kick your ass hard with my size 42 feet.

The author may not have a particularly in-depth understanding of the background story, but his writing style is very good. Personally, I don't think it deserves this score.

This book is really well written, which is an understandable fact. Some of the author's ideas are really awesome. If it could be written all the time, it would definitely be a masterpiece. It's a pity that there are a group of unknown creatures who don't understand the plot and still think they are right. I hope the author will continue to work hard to reach the altar as soon as possible. Finally, I hope this trip will reach the stars

Hey, I suddenly thought of something. The real Ellie died 50,000 years ago. It was the memory in Paradise that remembered Mei, but the memory also disappeared when the erosion was suppressed. After resurrection, Ellie remembered Mei. In other words, the real Ellie synchronized the memory of Paradise? [Thinking][thinking] And the twisted Ellie Kitchen - Erosion

The quality of the Star Iron fanfiction I have read is relatively high, and the character of Kevin was not written down (Kevin's character is difficult to write). The children like it very much.

This book is okay, the subject matter is relatively new, and the author has done a good job in controlling the characters' personalities. The shortcomings are that the settings of Beng San and Beng Tie are a bit biased. If you only play Beng San or Beng Tie, you will inevitably feel a little uncomfortable when reading some details of this book. It depends on how the author changes it later. Secondly, the author is great, you have too many typos, remember to correct them. Finally, come on, I am optimistic about you.

It's very well written, I hope it doesn't stop. [Praise]

Seeing that you are quite proud of your creativity, I will give you one of my own. However, I know that my writing skills are not good, so I have never started writing. If you are interested, you can write about it. Most of those who play Xingtie have played Genshin Impact. Have you ever thought that Hu Tao's temperament would be quite strange in a post-apocalyptic story? Total weight of life and death, but are zombies considered life and dead bodies? In this case, would Hutao want to bury all the zombies in the world? If Hutao herself becomes a zombie, will she commit suicide directly or bury all the zombies before committing suicide? If Hutao saw someone experimenting with zombies, would it be blasphemy against zombies in her eyes?

It looks good and suits my taste. I found the character descriptions to be very delicate, and the Belloberg episode had a cold and cruel feel to it. That was the disaster, not the game's play-acting. I'm really upset about Qianlu and Xiaoxiu in the back, I hope there won't be any knives.

It's okay. I don't know if the author writes about other Yingjie in capital letters. After all, it says that only lawyers can get on the bus. Anyway, I came here for the Yingjie reunion.

It looks good so far, but the previous chapters require a little getting used to. The most comfortable thing is to see that everyone is still there, and their stories are still going on. This is not bad, but it is painful for Lao Yang (Hengkai is still chasing me, tmd! [Laughing]) But now it seems that returning to Earth will not be difficult. By the way, I look forward to the cooperation of the Honkai Big Three (Know Your Defenders [smile])

I don't know what my physique is. I read fanfics and send them one after another. If I don't send them, I will update them weekly or even monthly. I hope you, the author, can carve out your own world in other fields [currently working on the manuscript]

Just read it in one sitting, you can't stop at all. Ah, it's so beautiful, so beautiful.

I stayed up late to watch it, it was so good! The quality of Tomato is considered to be first-class, and there are no messy bad jokes (you can have jokes but you can't talk about them all the time, otherwise it will be really annoying), and there is no vulgar plot about nymphomaniacs and invincible people (but in the early stage, many people criticized Kevin for being too weak and disgusted with the setting, but I feel okay , I think the comment section will be less aggressive after I finish reading the ones I don't like), and the character design is not too OOC. It fits my imagination of a retired Kevin who is still a thirteen-year-old hero. It's just that the author is a bit crazy and neglects the readers. Just selectively omit it.

Although, I don't agree with the point that you can't use force. Ellie, my Ellie [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

It's okay at this stage, let's keep writing.

It's really good, but first you need to sort out the relationship between the previous chapters. This is very important.

Pu Songling engraved the couplet "Those who have a will, things will come true, even if the cauldron sinks the boat, a hundred and two Qin passes will eventually belong to Chu; if you work hard, the sky will not fail you, if you lie on the firewood and taste the courage, three thousand Vietnamese troops can swallow Wu" on the Zhenchi to inspire his confidence to move forward without hesitation, which is called "Chi inscription". Come on [snickering] [snickering] [seeking attention]

The book is very good, I hope the author will continue writing

It's not bad, but the first few chapters are a bit uncomfortable.

Nothing else, I just think it's beautifully written.

Ah, I even stayed up all night to finish reading hundreds of chapters in one day. I can't say that the plot is as good as Star Iron Shell, but the original train crew's scenes are a bit lacking. And if there are too many people, it will be messy, but it doesn't matter. After all, the author's intention in writing is to have a pleasant line of writing. The plot is very interesting, and there are many places that are well integrated and feel very good to me. It's quite a trap. I personally feel that I can still catch up with the train of thought after reading it for a while. Anyway, the book is good, ah, ah, even though the author's mentality exploded after reading it, I also felt emotionally split. It's really annoying to have a good book that is stuck in the text. Anyway, I'm on the author's side, and I've apologized twice. What's going on? Who writes something without others' approval when they don't have the courage to do so? Why do some people always think of themselves as masters? If you are so awesome, you can offer a reward for writing. A chapter starts at 200 yuan. I think there are a lot of people who will take the template. It really is. . .

It's great, but I didn't watch it for a while, and when I found it again I realized it was finished. The previous impression was a little blurry, but Yalino gave me a surprise. This is the only book I have ever seen that chooses the path of the new world. The Immortal Boat Chapter is also great. I like the warmth after the battle the most. Finally, I personally don't like Xiao Eclipse being molested by Mebius. Of course, this is just an accident.

All in all, your book is the only one that can combine Beng San and Beng Tie without any sense of inconsistency. The plot is not bad and the writing is excellent. Although the author is a little arrogant at the end, I think it still deserves five stars.

I don't know what to say, but this book is great

I don't know what I should say, but I can at least support you mentally. In addition, I personally quite like this book.

Come on, author, hold on strong

It looks great, good luck to the author!

It looks good. I love watching it. Please order more.