Condemned: Divine Descendant
断罪：神裔
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 203k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban High-Concept
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
83Chapters
3.6kReads · all time
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The author himself must think that his work is pretty good. Family members who can't adapt to the slow start can read the first six chapters (which is almost enough to explain the characters) and go directly to chapter 20. If you find it interesting, come back and read the previous chapters. After all, the slow-burning type may be boring at first and give up early. Don't do that! (Alan cries) Everyone is welcome to give book reviews and suggestions. I hope to gain experience in the process of writing this book and slowly improve it. After all, only in this way can I grow. Please, this is really important for new writers! [Seeking attention]
The opening chapter is quite eye-catching, and the transitions are very natural. I am looking forward to the future development of the protagonist. Senior Ye is inexplicably cute hahahaha. I would like to give the author a little immature suggestion. You can divide it into more paragraphs. For people like me, the fonts may be relatively large. Reading a long paragraph of text is indeed a bit visually tiring.
The character setting is good, but the beginning is a bit slow, so be patient and you will be surprised. Exploring ruins, hunting monsters, the Blue Clan... The author has a very wide-open mind, which is very interesting.
Wow, this book is so good. I was so absorbed in reading it that I even forgot to eat. Order a takeaway and continue watching 🥰🥰🥰
The author writes very wonderfully. Remember to continue updating after the military training. Add a bookshelf to follow up!
[Note] The overall rhythm is quite good, a very classic slow-burn type work. It is very interesting to witness the growth of the protagonist! Very good. Come on!
💕, I finally finished reading it, it was a bit slow to pick up, and the character setting is also good, so I quickly updated it. The shortcomings have been mentioned in previous reviews.
Very interesting article, I look forward to it becoming a hit
The story is quite exciting! If there are more plots like this, it will definitely become popular 👍
In terms of general rationality, the rhythm of the book is very good, but I hope not to write too much that has nothing to do with the current main line, and the foreshadowing is not this way [please update]