Lord of Souls

The double-talented king has a blast at the start. The protagonist has enough time to beat the elite copy at level 1, and in the name of a quick upgrade, he forcibly eliminates the talent advantage. The fight with the elite monsters is full of dangers, maybe because he wants to present a wonderful fight. Open = not open. If you can crush it, you have to take risks. You don't have to take it hard. You should understand why the score is low. I hope I will write better and better in the future

Give yourself a score, but I dare not give it a perfect score. My level is limited and I know it well. The reason why I posted this comment is to talk about data. I have stated at the beginning and end of the introduction that this is a data flow book. The original purpose of my book is to write a standard data flow, a data flow that meets my rigorous personal standards. Therefore, if you make comments about too much data, I accept the criticism, but I can't correct it, because this is a data flow book. Without data, the foundation does not exist. One more thing needs to be stated. Many people think that the protagonist should be smart, wise, hard-working, and so on. The protagonist of this book is not like this. He is an ordinary person who has lived in two generations and is somewhat open-minded and optimistic. His character is not bad at all, but he has a normal temperament. He does not work so hard, and he does not do nothing. Moreover, this book will not be a book that replaces a big map. All aspects of Sun City cannot be introduced to my level. I am looking forward to breaking through to the realm of cultivation, ascending to the immortal realm, and then ascending to the divine realm, and then the holy realm, etc. There are a lot of things that are not included in this book, and there will be no such things in the finale.

Hello, author. Here are some questions I have. The setting is very novel, and it feels a bit like a divine novel, the feeling that great power belongs to oneself. After reading this, I have a question. Since Renlian has long-distance transmission and high-speed automation technology, why doesn't it expand outward? Copy problem? Doesn't it mean that having professionals will attract copies to appear? Coupled with the stone gate teleportation in the setting, even if there is a high-level copy threat? It is actually not difficult to achieve by spreading human beings across the starry sky like a wide net. Or is it that in order for the copies to become renewable resources and speed up the attraction, the People's Federation will place humans in a galaxy. In this world, survival does not seem to be difficult. Judging from the current attributes of the protagonist, is it possible that the high-end combat power of the People's Federation can already physically cross the galaxy, and escape is not a problem, so the senior management does not want to escape? Use the remaining 7/80 years to bet on a Raider? It can be guessed from the article that a controlled copy world can accommodate a lot of people, which is a bit like a void lord. This world has not developed into a city-state system, probably because artificial intelligence is too powerful and survival needs are not that difficult, so most people are pursuing spiritual needs. Another point is that there is no real threat, or the people at the bottom or middle level do not understand the threat of the top copy. Everyone knows that there is a threat, but after a long time, it is just like that. It is better to upgrade more than to think so much. The higher-ups must know, but they won't say, why would the People's League allow such blatant public activities of religious and categorical ideas? Let's see how the next major plot event unfolds. @ It's a very interesting world, thank you for sharing.

Human beings' lack of desire for reproduction is a flaw, and they also lack a communication group.

Personally, I think this novel is well written, with a good background and settings. However, there are too many unimportant settings in the front, and the author didn't break it down into sections. It's tiring to read, and some of the novels I don't quite understand. But these are not important. Compared with those pure novels, this job-changing novel is still very good. Secondly, there are issues with the protagonist's character and data panel. The protagonist's character is a bit Buddhist and he is not very vigilant. The guide copy can be targeted to find what you need. The data panel is okay in the early stage. If the data does not change much later, some data can be omitted directly, otherwise it will feel a bit watered down. Finally, there is really no need to write the emotional line! ! ! Author, have you never been in love, or do you have too little experience in love? The protagonist doesn't like what other people give her as a gift! ! ! Even if Li Ruyi cried and comforted her and it would be over, escaping was not an option! ! ! Isn't giving a gift to give people hope? Does the protagonist like her or not? Why is it so annoying! ! ! You should be more decisive in your relationships. You have lived in vain for hundreds of years, haven't you seen through this yet? ! ! Scumbag! ! ! (Swearing and scolding does not affect continuing to read [eating melon]) I thought the novel was well written in terms of the previous long paragraphs of settings, but the rating was low. When the plot of giving away skill crystals came out, I instantly felt that it was okay to have such a low rating. (There is reason to suspect that the author himself is like this [eating melon] [eating melon] [eating melon]) Of course, the previous paragraph is for the author. The author's writing style and logic are quite good. Even if the book does not do well, I hope the author can continue writing. I wish the author good results in this and future works [I understand] PS: I am a liberal arts major, so some of the settings are confusing [top post] I forgot to mention the issue with the cover. I looked at it many times and still didn't understand what the pattern on the cover was. The cover is really not outstanding (you can only look at it carefully, but it's a blur when you browse casually). If you can't make it a solid color and use artistic words to add the name of the novel, it will do. Most of the covers of novels nowadays are of the two-dimensional type. If nothing else, they are at least obvious enough. If you don't plan to change the cover, I suggest you enlarge the title of the book. The font of the title is too small. Reached Chapter 151, it doesn't matter if it's water or not, who makes tomatoes free, but why is the love line becoming more and more exaggerated. . . Author, if you have ever been in love, you would never write a heroine like this! ! ! Why is the male protagonist becoming more and more scumbag, more than friendship? ? ? Didn't you avoid meeting each other in the first place? ? ? To be honest, if you don't have feelings for someone, you shouldn't have an ambiguous relationship. I've already said that I don't like Li Yiru.

The mark is okay. You have to catch up with the author's radio waves and integrate into the author's own setting system before you can read it. Otherwise, it will be very awkward. It can basically be said to be an expository article. If you like novelty, you can read it.

@Jumeng I feel that your settings are different before and after. At the beginning, it is said that there are 10 summons at level one, but only three at level three. Then you wrote before that you can cancel the summons (that is, when you brush the summons). Can you not cancel it after finishing the battle in the dungeon?

What can I say, overall it's pretty good. The sharing cannot be changed and there are only 10 pet slots, and other summoners will change the summons every time, so the protagonist may be the only summoner.

Despite its flaws, it is indeed a good book. The highlight of this book is the complete world view and the social form of human beings after they obtain unlimited materials. It also raises a thought: when the strong no longer need to exploit the weak, what is the value of the existence of the weak? From the perspective of this book, the only value of the weak seems to be reproduction, giving birth to talented offspring who can lead the times.

It's beautiful. I don't understand why the rating is not high.

The data is quite rigorous and there are many types of attributes. The structure of the worldview seems to be okay, and the character of the protagonist is relatively conservative (here, it means that he is more complete and will only play dungeons when he is sure of winning). [Laughing and crying] But I feel that the plot seems a bit bland, and I can't tell why. Maybe it's because the protagonist doesn't fight uncertain battles? Or is he currently fighting dungeons? (Maybe it's because I haven't seen it yet.) I can't tell. The plot may be advanced with a little more passion (of course it's not the kind of brainless explosion). If it's not easy to handle, just think I didn't say it (you can't be petty and lose the big, after all, the novel style is still very important) [Thinking] So far, I haven't seen any big poisonous spots, or are they not obvious? In short, they can be seen. [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

Generally speaking, there are no big loopholes in the rules. Except for the poor writing style, it seems a bit boring. Everything else is fine. If you like this type of book, your expectations are quite high.

Damn it, it's pure data. The author must have a professional background, and the description of the language will not be so boring. This can be seen from the first few chapters. It is also too detailed, with a large amount of data mixed in the text, which discourages a lot of people. If the author does not mind the trouble, the data can be moved to the author's comments or paragraph comments, and details can be added in terms of new skills. Of course, this is just my suggestion, I hope the author can get better and better

I'm halfway through reading it. Has the author been hacked? The score of this book has been lowered, I think it should be above 9 (provided that the rest of the book is not unfinished and the style of the first is continued). The setting of the book is more reasonable, I think it is more reasonable than others, and the logic is self-consistent! It is better than most online game articles and data articles! The only drawback is that it is verbose. Let's see how it ends, I hope it won't be a cliché ending!

It's a very good book, and the author's settings are okay. Now that I've read the latest version, the probability that this is a complete myth is a bit too low, isn't it? The protagonist started to draw it as soon as he changed his job, but he still hasn't drawn it yet.

Most of the plots and world views are quite complete, but there are some details that may not have been handled well, but they have no impact on the reading of the article. Just read it and enjoy it, so you don't need to worry about it so much.

This book is okay, but I feel like the protagonist doesn't look like someone who has lived a lifetime. Even if his personality is reshaped, his previous experiences should still be there. I feel like it might be better to change this setting to accept memories. Overall, I feel like this book is okay.

The characters are vividly depicted, the logic is rigorous, and the data structure is clear. The disadvantage is also the advantage that the data description is too detailed and may overwhelm the senses. If you like it, if you don't like it, it's the opposite.

As long as you don't supervise, everything else will be fine.

This author's books all pursue logic and self-consistency, which I find very satisfying. However, he also likes to write growth protagonists, and the writing style is not strong enough to support the smooth transformation of the character. As a result, the protagonist's image does not look like a person from time to time, and then there are poisonous points. This is not to say that growth protagonists are not good, but to avoid the poisonous points. Without good writing, it is difficult to write about character growth. I look forward to writing about the profound enlightenment of Longchang Enlightenment, the feeling of waking up from a dream in the future.

I was originally going to give it a low score because of the bad points, but after seeing what the author of the pinned comment said, he is still a new author and has tolerance, so I must give you some encouragement. I hope you can write better and better.

It's not bad. It's just that it's not fully developed yet, and there's still some time to go. However, the early stage processing is not very good, and it is easy to have the effect of dissuading people. The low rating is understandable. I hope the author will continue to persevere.

I finished reading it. I read it for about 15 hours. How can I say it? The writing is good. Although a quarter of this article is about introducing attributes, it is not bad. I give it a 4 points. Now I am going to read the reviews. The 7.1 Score of this book is a bit low. I personally think it should be about 8.5.

It's well written, but I disagree with the author's attitude towards cp. Love it if you love it, don't love it if you don't love it. Strictly speaking, the protagonist's behavior is the behavior of a scumbag. I don't like it very much, but I still gave it 5 stars for encouragement. Mainly I like this way of writing. The pig's feet are very big, but they are not suppressed deliberately.

Nothing to say, it's okay

What role does Li Yiru play?

Fortunately, it's not a follow-up update. I won't complain about your literary style after watching it [Chigua]

Still unfinished! The setting of Sun City is so stunning that it makes people want to stop. This is the lying-down life that I dream of.

Give the author five stars and go back to reading first.

Why do boss monsters and king monsters have the same bonuses?