Three Kingdoms: at the Beginning, Yue Fei Is Reborn as Ma Su

The subject matter is novel. I have always wanted to see what Yue Fei's lord would look like if he became Liu Chan.

At the beginning, Yue Fei fights against Jieting, and his opponent is Zhang He. It is ok to imagine that according to Yue Fei's strength, it is not a problem to defend Jieting and defeat Zhang He, but I think this trend will still be based on deduction, Zhuge Liang is the main one. In fact, Yue Fei and Zhuge Liang can already divide their troops to advance in two directions.

It's well written, creative and interesting, but the number of words is a bit short. I'm not a junkie, so I recommend it.

Yue Fei's marshal ability should be shown more in the later period. After all, he used to be the Jiedushi who commanded an army. Even if he had to keep a low profile when he returned to the Three Kingdoms, he could gradually reveal it. He rose to the top [laughing]

You work hard at writing, please encourage me. In fact, after the defeat of Yiling, the Shu Han regime was finished, and it was just waiting for death. It was said that it was a three-legged alliance, but in fact it was just lingering under the protection of Soochow. It was originally a foreign regime, with a bunch of defeated soldiers from Jingzhou, and it did not open a school to train the next generation. The Shu family did not support it. There were no generals in Shu, and it was not good at politics, economy and military. In fact, I really can't see the meaning of the Northern Expedition. It was just a placebo. Looking at the tax payer population after the demise, we know that the family has completely dominated Shuhan. The original 3 million people have become 900,000. That is to say, more than 2/3 of the people are slaves of aristocratic families. They are more reactionary than the Eastern Han Dynasty and worse than Cao Wei. I don't see any point in the existence of this kind of regime.

A novel article, worth reading together.

Fighting a war means fighting logistics. This is a dungeon with a hellish level of difficulty. Let's see how the author clears it. Come on!

By the way, shouldn't Guan Yinping and Li Yi be husband and wife? The husband and wife were even buried together, and they were still buried in the Han Xing Pavilion.

It's a pity that it was written according to a novel

The author's writing skills are very limited, and he prefers to write about the impact of personal bravery/micro-tactics on the battle situation. As a result, the combat descriptions are not strong enough, and every battle feels unburnable. But on the other hand, the author's description of Yue Fei's feelings about time travel and his "cognition and compromise" of the two identities is quite good. Unlike some time-travelers, they accepted this fact as a matter of course after time-traveling, without any mental fluctuations, just like a robot that has been programmed to time-travel and is loaded with knowledge and concepts of the 21st century. In this article, Yue Fei has a very vivid change of mentality about time travel. This is the motivation that supports me to pursue it. Hard to accept. This book, whether it is the opening chapter or the introduction, is a relatively formal version of the Three Kingdoms. Although the focus was on personal mentality at the beginning, there was still some battlefield chill. But something went wrong later in the writing. The author completely gave up on the macro layout. Except for explaining the country's situation as a last resort, the rest of the writing was concentrated on some scenes similar to idol dramas. Therefore, the paragraph from 50 to 100 does not seem to be "Yue Fei Crossed Ma Su to Revitalize the Shu Han", but "Yue Fei Crossed Ma Di and Revived the Shu Han". I really like to add more details about the personal lives of military commanders in the Three Kingdoms novels, but I never want to see pure life novels, especially those about great characters like Yue Fei and Zhuge Liang. Of course, to be fair, the author does not write about war and politics. The author is also working hard to write about the Three Kingdoms, and then adds some details of life and the emotions of the characters into the general trend of the Three Kingdoms. But the author's skill tree is too biased. The war and political content he writes are very childish, and his writing skills are not good at all. On the contrary, it writes very delicately about personal emotions, and it is easy to write very long words once written. When I saw the paragraph "Going to the countryside to experience life", it didn't look like Three Kingdoms at all. If you like to read "Ultimate Class One" and can accept this kind of work that "only uses the names of historical celebrities, but the characters have completely different personalities, and most of the time talks about personal experiences", then I recommend you to read this book, otherwise you should give up.

Come on, come on, it's good

New themes are refreshing. The current author, hey

Not bad, the idea is worth a look. Although it is slightly different from historical facts, novels do not need to be so rigorous.

A year later, during Yue Fei's Northern Expedition, Zhuge Liang assisted Adou in governing the country. One was in charge of foreign affairs and the other was in charge of domestic affairs. Together they were invincible! ! !

Very creative, well written and talented

Well written, my comments are in the chapter review

The opening chapter is well written, the idea is ok, and the situation in the late Three Kingdoms period is well grasped. It's just that the author's Yue Fei is too melancholy, without the heroic spirit of his previous life. Yue Fei is at the ceiling level of the Chinese military. Read more of "Man Jiang Hong". The heroic and wild spirit in it is completely gone. It feels like Yue Fei has lost his soul in this book. I hope the author can refer to the suggestions and look forward to the exciting content in the future!

It's very well written, I'll give it five stars.

First of all, the subject matter is very good. I think Yue Fei and Zhuge are two people that many historical literature lovers can't get enough of. Connecting them together, this setting is really eye-catching. . However, the flaw is that the writing power is still shallow, and it does not describe Yue Shuai's commanding momentum and Zhuge's scheming wisdom. Therefore, this article lacks a lot of feelings and my own opinions, but I can't say more [I understand] and I feel that the writing style in the Tomato history article is very good.

The writing is very good, the perspective is very unique, and the ancients travel through the ancients. In this way, there won't be those golden fingers of modern time-travelers from ancient times. It is a test of wisdom and strategy.

Interesting, I just hope the protagonist doesn't change his name

Well written, I hope I don't want to be a eunuch

Good! It's both fascinating and reasonable!

Yue Fei and Ma Su both lived to be 39 years old. This time travel is quite interesting.

It's really good

The book is very good. Apart from loving history, this book is also humorous and can be read when you are bored.

The subject matter is good, write well, author, come on! [Laughing evilly] I like you!

I feel that this is a better time-travel novel. The overall concept is relatively novel and the ideas are clear. I hope I can continue to work hard and not be a eunuch.

Very good, keep up the good work

Not bad, well written