Start as Gaussian, Simple and Crude

The novel is well written. I just feel like there are too few female leads. More women. Childhood woman. Cao Thief Kills CP calls for multiple female protagonists and multiple harems.

The content is good, but can it be divided into more paragraphs? There are only one or two paragraphs on a page and my eyes hurt when I read it. I will deduct one star.

There is a big problem. The segmentation is not rigorous. There are too many large sections. It would be better if we divide them into smaller sections.

I think you can change the person's pronoun to the third person, which would be more perfect. I really can't accept the first person, but there's nothing wrong with the rest.

The author is also a talented person. It would be too much for me to write two pages. But what you write, author, try to divide it into paragraphs. Don't make it so tight. Try to change it to the third person. I am really not used to the first person. Okay, I didn't say that about the rest. I only read half of it.

The only thing that's not very good is that it doesn't describe Ultraman's various skills. It's a bit of a pity.

Gauss: Do you want to listen to my reasoning or do you want to listen to me talk about physics?

There is nothing wrong with the first-person narrative, but it is really uncomfortable when the first-person perspective suddenly changes to a God's perspective.

It's quite nice, but the author just needs to divide the text into more paragraphs. There are too many words and it's dizzying to read.

I was so confused after what I heard. I feel like I can't turn my head around. Suddenly it's Ultraman again, and suddenly it's Armor Warrior again.

It's good, just don't add me

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

This is one point five person

Not bad, I only looked at the front

The book is a good book, but I am not used to reading first-person novels.

Honkai Kiana plays Thunder General Star Dome Railway

Very good-looking, my favorite type. The protagonist is invincible.

Okay, why not take in the heroine and the supporting role?

Not bad, I give you full marks

Come on, the author is great

We must expel those who are pretentious and pretentious

Just for Chapter 1 Episode 1

Great reading, lots of chapters

Good, good, good, good-looking

So cool, I can only say that this is Gaussian

Hodgepodge Ultraman. Armor, Pangu

I'm curious, author, why did you add the word "I"? I think this personal pronoun is a bit strange.