Commander of Fate

It's so beautiful, I think it's so beautiful. If I hadn't written half of it and it would easily get messed up, I would have liked to write ten thousand words a day (don't even think about it). The outline in my head has almost been extended to one million words, but unfortunately my hands are lazy, and when will I become popular... [Working on the draft] Nothing else, I just want you to give me more ratings. Now there are only a dozen or so people rating this, which is so pitiful.

It's okay, but it feels like the transitions are too difficult to distinguish. The protagonist is here and there at one moment. If it's an anime or manga, it's fine. But if you read it in a novel, you won't be able to connect with the plot if you don't pay attention. The author replies, happy, plus 1 star

Perception: The content of the game is very palatable. Although it is a little confusing at first, but after reading one or two chapters, you can almost understand what the author is writing. For example, I don't know anything about reasoning, but the relationship between the protagonist and the captain, and the relationship between the scientist like Leiter, I did understand a little bit, and then I kind of understood what the title of the book meant. It describes the atmosphere before the arrival of the local natives in the battle position, the stagnation in the air, and the restless dust, which is quite graphic. The reaction of this special group of soldiers when facing the war is also written in a way that makes people feel the same. But I can't wrap my head around it. After quitting the game, I didn't understand much about the connection between the game background and reality, such as that Shuyu. There is a feeling that I seem to understand, but when I think about it carefully, I don't know what I understand () Rating: I don't feel that the rating is low or anything like that. After all, Tomato has the same rating and everyone understands it. I just feel that there are too few comments. Sometimes the incomprehensible memes are not discussed and explained, and the sense of substitution is lost. Of course, it's also possible that everyone was too absorbed in watching it and didn't take the time to comment. Recommended: I think my drug resistance is quite high. Anyway, I don't take many drugs now. I can't guarantee that everyone will like it, but there should be many people who like it. All in all, don't criticize if you don't like it, whether it's the book or me ⌓‿⌓

It's perfect for people like me who are a little bit brainy but not too brain-burning! Let me start by saying that this book is a StarCraft text! The protagonist is currently in the farming stage! That's right! This is also a farming article! Just from the tip of the iceberg given by the author, I can hardly imagine how grand this world view is! Currently, the only ones that appear are the human race and a few creatures on the planet of the protagonist. As for what creatures they are, go in and see for yourself! I'm too lazy to write! And I have a suggestion! Author, can you draw a picture of the creature? You wouldn't ask AI to draw it for you! This is 2024, not the 19th century!

The pace of this book is really good, and the characters are well established, but it feels a little too out-of-the-box and the plot could be polished. If the author wants to be recommended, he can change his name. The current name is very good but it is not easy to get ahead in Tomato. You can just change it back later. Let's change the cover to something brighter and eye-catching. I have no choice but to see if this helps.

Come on, author, there aren't many interstellar novels, and this is the first time I've seen this type of novel. I hope you won't miss it.

Very good book. I finally found another interstellar book here. According to my current opinion, the protagonist is not a commander and it is not as easy to build troops as in ordinary interstellar. In my opinion, the T0 race in this book is still Zerg (I can play Zerg and I am a Grandmaster. Pride. Jpg)

To be honest, I quite like the description of the battle, it's very exciting

I saw it, I feel good

Great writing, good luck to the author