Aotu World: Flirting and Push and Pull! The Pirate Crew Arc

It's very good. Although I haven't finished reading it, judging from the plot style of the article, it surpasses 99% of the convex articles on Tomato [Like] The plot is not cliche, not boring, and the description is detailed enough. I don't know why it is not popular. I think this is a very good convex article I have read in Tomato compared with other articles [Like]

It's so beautifully written, thank you to the author (ง •̀_•́)ง!

A very valuable book——! If you don't watch it if you like Otome, you are simply missing out on the world's number one fairy! The teacher's words are full of emotion and power. I really shed tears. I know every character in the pirate group very well. There is no OOC at all. If you like Ao Yi, you must come and see it! The characterization of the heroine is perfect, and the sense of substitution is very strong, but I will not take it at all, because the characterization of the heroine is the type I like. I feel that I am not worthy of being in WW, a very careful and gentle baby, I cry.

I just feel good about myself! Much better than the uninteresting articles I read before!

Highly recommend this book. There are no spoilers below, so feel free to read it 1. The writing style is still good, and you can feel the progress of the writing style after reading it. After looking at the time, this book has been written for a long time, and it feels like the author has put in a lot of effort. 2. The rhythm is well controlled and makes me feel quite comfortable. 3. Personally, I feel that there are a lot of foreshadowings and some small details. You may miss this detail later if you don't read it carefully. 4. But when I first saw it, I didn't fully realize that it had already "changed", but it felt a bit like watching TV? You can get used to it after watching it for a while. I'm only commenting after I've read it halfway through, hahaha. I'll comment after I've finished watching it all. These are my current feelings.

Why isn't it popular? Give me fire! The logic is clear, the timeline is smooth, the characters are intact, the emotional line is sweet, the heroine is perfect, and the author is gentle and careful So why don't you watch it? With a lot of ideas and excellent writing, the relationship between the heroine and the pirate group is clearly described. The relaxed daily life gradually brings them closer, and they step into each other's hearts. The author expresses the meaning of the book title vividly. The pirate group's love for Ji makes them pull each other, and the pull towards Camille can be clearly read. Camille's character is difficult to write. I've seen too many failed attempts at writing, but the author has a good grasp of the character and writes Camille's inner struggles very well. Just like the author wrote in a chapter (he thought he had seen through all human emotions in the world, but he regarded most emotions as tired mastiffs) In the concave-convex world, Camille has always put Thunder Lion at the forefront, but has hidden himself in the dark side behind him. He has always wanted to become a tool that can help Thunder Lion. But the author also wrote in the article (You are different from everyone he has met so far, dazzling yet soft, warm and unique. I have never seen you like this before, and I will never see you treat him like this again.) As time goes by, love slips into the heart inadvertently. Until now, Kamil was shocked to realize his feelings, but Lei Shi was determined to win, so he had to choose to give up, but how could he let go? I believe the author will give us, the pirates, and Ji a happy ending The author's sister is also very patient, a very gentle big sister, and she often interacts with us. To the author: It was my honor to meet you when the popularity of this book was not high. This book has been with me for almost the entire summer vacation. I don't know why the popularity of this book has not been high, but you have persisted and the quality has never diminished. You will also carefully prepare gifts for readers. Even though the gift may not be expensive, it is the first time I have received a gift from a novel author. It is worth remembering no matter what. Finally, thank you for your continued company. I wish you happiness every day Past·Dream To readers: I am very happy to meet you all here. Good articles are rare and I am very happy to read them with you. I also wish you all a happy day here Past·Dream So can you give the foreign persimmon some heat? ! ! Make this great book popular! ! !

Well written! And there is a strong sense of being an otome, and it is full of the feeling that I am the favorite of the pirates [sneered smile] [sleaze smile] [sleaze smile] [admiration]

I have been reading it for two days, and I have to listen to it every night when I go to sleep. To be honest, as a person who doesn't have much patience, there are very few convex fanfics I have read before that I can read without skipping chapters. But the real book written by the teacher is really relatable. The description of emotions is very colorful, and the front part is also very sweet. I have read more than 200 chapters so far. I don't feel that I will get bored after reading for a long time, but I am more interested! The character descriptions are also very consistent and there is no OOC. Reading the current chapter always makes me feel like I have a big knife (I have been eating too many knives recently). All in all, it is a very good book! I feel like it's the kind of fanfic that I'll re-read after reading it. I'll wait and see if there's a knife in the back⊙▽⊙ I don't know if the ending will be HE or BE. I finished reading... I feel very regretful. It turns out that the encounters in this world are all fate. But whether it is in the concave and convex world or in this world, I feel very regretful. When the memory of her in the concave and convex world was wiped out by everyone in the pirate group at the end, it really made me have a very uncomfortable feeling. How can I explain the final reveal? [Crying] By the way, I really want to look at knives during the Qingming Festival holiday. Finished reading on 2025.4.5

In my opinion, the whole text has a good structure and less OOC. The protagonist has the same grievances as ordinary office workers, but he is relatively optimistic (it seems impossible to say this, after all, judging from other people in the article, the protagonist is quite good, but sometimes a bit withdrawn... Of course, it is recommended to put your brain down when reading the article, so as not to have too many foreshadowings and be unable to think clearly. For example, for example, my brain is going to smoke. All in all, it's very good to me. Personally, I give it 5 stars❗❗❗❗❗

Most concave and convex articles are about traveling into the concave and convex world, but what the author writes is different. It is about the Thunder Lion Pirates traveling through reality and their daily life with the heroine. I think this book is a good one. The plot is rich and interesting. The content is particularly wonderful and clever. It's not cliche at all. It's sweet, so sweet that I almost didn't see the knife. I like it so much that I feel like I can recommend it without thinking [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] Later, the heroine travels into the concave and convex world, and the subsequent plot is also exciting. It is the same as above, so I won't repeat it. I like it even more, big love [blowing kiss], and there is no knife in the later stage, sweet [love] [love]