The Big World of Light and Shadow, Awakening to the Xingtian Armor at the Age of Eighteen

This setting is good. It looks better than the usual armor. I thought the other plots were similar. Either the villain fights the armor or the armor fights the villain. Protect the world, and then start writing about cultivating immortals. This is different and a new world. The plot is good, but forget about the relationship. The heroine disgusts me to death. I had just saved chapter 30 today and wanted to read it, but I didn't expect that I was poisoned and died even after reading it for a while.

I have a feeling as to whether I can be convicted when I have to kill someone. [Sinister smile]

The world view is novel. Very few people in armor fan fiction have such novel ideas. The logic is clear and the hand and tail are echoed. The writing style is slightly inferior, but it does not prevent this book from surpassing most armor fan fiction.

It's okay if the updates are slow, just make sure they are updated every day. For female protagonists, I suggest no more than two, one is fine. I hope it's a little longer. If the author doesn't have a good outline, the pace can be a little slower, but don't drag it too much. The author is great, come on [punch out]

The plot is pretty good, it belongs. The best piece of armored warrior fan fiction. Although the plot of the story is old-fashioned, the author's writing skills are quite good.

Very good, very good. I never expected the plot. The origin of the alien beasts, the strange origin, the weirdness is really unexpected. The subsequent plot is also so good, just like a suspense novel. It is obviously about armor, but the plot is really unexpected. It is so good. There is also foreign culture in the back. I have to say, it is really good.

The author only went to kindergarten. I thought the author's writing quality was only at the kindergarten level. I didn't expect that it reached the first grade level of elementary school. It's really amazing.

Although the ending is not what I imagined, becoming a world hero. [Working on the manuscript] [Hang face] But this article is still very exciting. It is compact, has many foreshadowings, and is not without inspiration, but why should the white heroine be written to death? [What] [Crying] [Thinking]

This book is good! Come on, author! Come on! ! !

Very well written, keep it up

It feels okay, but in the later part when Xiaobai died, I think the protagonist should be about the same as Lufa. The righteous and evil spirits are full at the same time, resulting in a lack of energy. Later, when fighting the way of heaven, the author wrote that he felt desperate. At this time, the strongest energy should be gone and the armor cannot be summoned. Overall, it is very good-looking.

It's okay, it's relatively short, it's not an armor warrior fanfic, it's just like the armor, it's well written, but it's short and weak and annoying [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

The excitement continues, but the author of the short story is more interesting.

Don't skip reading this book, it looks very exciting, it makes you laugh, you cry, you cry, you get angry, even it's dark, it's impressive. Very burning, highly recommended

I felt like it was almost over, but you told me it wasn't over yet I feel something is missing. But I can't tell

Not bad, not bad. I finally finished watching it. To be honest, the rating should be at least 8.5.

I can only say that it looks very comfortable, much more comfortable than other books. I'm not bragging, I'm just saying it, it's really good. No, I just want to ask why the protagonist's realm rises so slowly. He is constantly fighting between two realms. It's not that you haven't risen at all, right? I turned around and looked, holy shit⊙∀⊙! Those few people just don't want to die. Is it okay to just die? Dude, you are not the original protagonist. You have to drain some remaining blood, do you mind?

Very good, not bad, suits my taste very well. I want to know which heroine is, if it is other five stars, if it is Bai Jingyan 2 stars

It's very interesting, good luck to the author

Kaijawen's Redemption Not a template Original

Good-looking, love to watch, like to watch

Very interesting, keep writing.

Come on, come on, come on

Very well written, keep up the good work

The best book in armor I don't know why, but I suddenly want to see the God of War Xingtian cleaning the glass with his sky-shielding palm [smile][smile][smile][smile]

It's pretty good in my opinion

Good, good, good, good

Sister Bai, are you with him? I like her.

It feels pretty good, I don't know why the rating is so low

Damn it, you are too pretty