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So far, the reading experience is quite good, but there are too few words, which is not enough to read. The author hurriedly updated it!

To be honest, the writing style is good, the setting is even better, it is very good in Tomato, and the characters are even more likeable, but there are too many text, which greatly affects the reading experience. Can the dialogue be reduced? There are too many dialogues between the supporting characters, which are meaningless. A few sentences can set off and highlight the protagonist. The long chapters in one chapter are all meaningless. It is really annoying to watch.

The characters are described well, and their actions are in line with their own personalities. They are not brainless. It is a good book, very good. Such books are rare in Tomato, but the author himself is too short, and the past few books are not long. I don't know what this one will be like. I really hope you will continue to write it well and make it a long one. If it doesn't collapse, it will be a masterpiece! Come on! [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

I've only read half of it, and I can't help but give you a five-star review. The author must be over 30 and has extremely rich social experience. I wish I could meet him. The logic of the novel is clear and reasonable, and the image of the strong man is deeply portrayed. Come on. I can't help but ask, is there a group?

I didn't watch it for long, but the plot was still good. The main psychological activities are actually too much, and the advancement of the plot, including the description of some plot details, is actually not quite in place. It just feels like this is the psychological journey of the protagonist, and the plot is just a tool to promote his psychological journey. The protagonist's caution is never reflected in his mental journey, but in what he does. However, many readers like this cautious style and will get angry if there is any rashness. I don't know if the author is affected by this, so he has to write a long paragraph of psychological activities to explain that the protagonist is a cautious and steady person. If the authors can adjust to each other, find a compromise. This novel should be better than it is now.

I can only say that it was okay. There was too much foreshadowing, which made it seem cumbersome. The characters are relatively fixed and can be changed appropriately. The plot connection is quite smooth. I can only say that if you follow the author's ideas, it is actually okay.

The writing is good and the plot is also very good. The only drawback is that every time I encounter something, I have to write 800 words of my experience first.

The book is still good, but there are some things that the author doesn't need to write in detail, such as the main character's reasons for acting this way, his inner activities, and the like. Sometimes these are not needed and are left to the readers to analyze by themselves, which will make the whole story smoother. To put it simply, if the protagonist takes action directly, readers will naturally feel that it is good and the killing is decisive. However, if the author also writes out the reasons, thoughts, and changes in mentality, there will be an extra paragraph of content that can be read or not. It is quite uncomfortable to have this reading experience and emotional accumulation interrupted. I haven't seen much so far, I don't know if it will be better in the future, I look forward to it!

This book is neither slow-burning nor watery; it is truly "detailed". It's so "detailed" that it's not like a book I can find on Tomato. This book contains a lot of psychological descriptions of the male protagonist, as well as descriptions of the environment and other people. This is actually very risky. Because on the one hand, this does cause the entire plot to advance slowly, but on the other hand, it also causes the protagonist's character to be very three-dimensional and vivid, rather than a collection of settings. It can only be said that the author has a pursuit and is truly carving out the world and the male protagonist stroke by stroke. Basically everything is logical, every action of every character is justified, and every reversal is traceable. What a great book!

The best character in this book is the protagonist's sister. Although the author has tried his best to make her as annoying as possible, the real sister is strong-willed in martial arts, pleases her parents at home, mixes in society with a low-profile outside, and has a younger brother who floats around when she has time to find a good job. She is the only one in this world.

The story is okay, and the protagonist is also well portrayed. The main reason is that the front and middle are always babbling and talking a lot of nonsense. The plot does not advance much, and it is easy to persuade people to quit, so I will deduct a point. Generally speaking, I can read it when I am short of books.

The writing is very good, the plot is okay, and it is enjoyable to watch. Every time something happens, at least half of the inner explanation is given. It is very good to give everyone a detailed analysis and enrich the character of the protagonist. How come it is only 8.3, At least 9.5 Or above. I call everyone, more people will see high-quality works!

The quality is very good, the writing is also okay, the protagonist's IQ is online, but sometimes it's a bit watery, the rest is very good author, come on 💪

After many years of experience in martial arts novels, this book is an excellent one. Looking at the comment section, I found that many people said that the author's word count is too low. What I want to say is that if you only read cool articles, read this book instead. The difference between high-quality articles and cool articles is that it triggers people's resonance. There is a lot of psychological description but the pace is not slow. I can only say that it is worth reading.

It's a good read. Comments from an 18-year-old bookworm: Stones from other mountains can be used to attack jade. Traveling through different worlds and learning techniques, learning in advance to get in touch with the realm behind the pig's foot master world, realizing rapid advancement of ordinary talents and leapfrogging battles. It's a good idea [like]

I saw the latest 355 chapters. If you like a heroine-less story, you can check it out. The advantage is that the protagonist has a stable character. When he should be timid, he will act immediately if he is confident. There is no heroine, OX, ambiguity, etc. It is very comfortable. If you like this kind of book, you can check it out. Disadvantages: The first level is slow to advance. It is not until Chapter 323 that the protagonist feels a little invincible. In the early stage, he can only advance 1-2 levels, but because there are too many levels, I personally feel that he is not invincible. The second thing is that sometimes it feels like there are too many topics, such as when it talks about cultivation (for example, a certain realm has an early, middle and late stage, and one-fifth of a practice in the early stage is discussed for a long time), which makes me feel a little tired, so I quickly read it line by line. But for me personally, the shortcomings are not concealed. One advantage is that there is no female protagonist, and the other advantage is decisive killing. Sometimes I find it boring at the beginning of the book, but I personally feel that I am happy after getting through it. I feel that I have been happy after 322. Of course, there are small and medium-sized moments in the front, which vary from person to person.

A rare good book with a compact plot. The passers-by A, B, C and D are very talkative, which is a bit downgraded, but it is still worth reading. If you can't beat me, just keep a low profile, and if you can beat me, hit hard. It's very cool. It's rare to find a good book with such an outrageous ending. I hate you, author.

This book is more suitable for old bookworms. Of course, for those who like mindless and refreshing articles, it may feel a little watery. However, I personally think it is better to explain a lot clearly in the early stage, but it is better to say less later. Another thing is that it is too short.

Please update as soon as possible, the only drawback of this book is the small number of words! Compared with the previous book, the pace of this book is very steady, there is no feeling that the combat power collapses in the later period, and the world view is also grand! I can feel the author's progress and support it! Support!

The book is a good book! I watched it with gusto too! The author is just too verbose! Affects the sense of reading! But the faults do not hide the faults! Must give a five-star rating! [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

Excellent product, recommended by a twenty-year-old bookworm. The world view is mature. The description of cultivation is very accurate. It is logical and self-consistent based on reality. There are no brainless villains and no tacky suits that slap you in the face. The characters are plump and the fighting is exciting. You can't beat low-key, but you can hit hard. It kills instantly with a single hit. The villain in it is also very mature and smart, and he attacks with all his strength. However, the protagonist grows up too fast, and his combat power is not overwhelming at all. He is just a thin chaff. Maybe there are too few people who know the goods. The author ended it in a hurry. It is a non-toxic product. It is a pity that it is not enough to read. It is suitable for old bookworms.

So far, I enjoy reading it, the writing is smooth, I have a certain level of writing skills, and the writing style is very similar to my Tomato Eater. If you like my book about eating tomatoes, you can bookmark this book

After squeezing the water out, I read it again. This book is actually quite well written, and it is considered to be above average in the qi-blood martial arts genre. It tells a good story honestly, but the ending is a bit rushed, but at this level, there is really nothing to write about. If I write more, I will just change the map (fortunately, I didn't change to become an immortal later), but I really want to see some of the example worlds given in the finale [laughing and crying]

A qualified and refreshing novel with brains and a family. The main character's sister is a simple girl with high ambitions and low abilities. The rise of the little guy. It's a rare read in recent times. I'd like to give it a five-star rating~

I also recommend that this book is worth reading. Like everyone else, there are about seventy or eighty chapters in the front. Haha, there are so many, it is too slow to get started. The author has some experience in society and has his own thoughts and feelings, including dialectical cognition such as strong thinking. The author is explaining his attitude and views in the front, and then it gradually becomes more readable. In addition, the author's writing style is OK. Don't worry, it is not a simple article. Old bookworms can read it. I have been a bookworm for 20 years.

This book should be about nine o'clock or above. It is a magical book. The story is attractive and the words are well chosen. For example, it has been enhanced a lot. Some books have too many enhancements when they make progress, which makes people angry to death.

It's very good, the setting is also reasonable, there is no bloody plot, it is very good, but the ending is a little hasty, and many pitfalls in the main world are not filled. For example, the great sages in the main world, and how the main world was formed.

The writing is quite good, and the length is also good. It was too long and made me tired. I finished reading this book completely. The ending was okay, a bit rushed, but it was okay. At least he resurrected his master. It can be regarded as echoing back and forth.

The book is a good book, a bit like Infinite Flow, but it is about both the main world and the small world, and the main martial arts method is slowly combined with the small world method. However, the ending is a bit sloppy, and I feel like I could write a lot more later on, which is understandable. After all, every world must have innovation, otherwise it will just be boring to watch.

Very interesting book. It's much better than the routine of going to school.