Heart-Pounding Sorrow

The rating is naturally full marks 💯 Interested book friends can read my comments. I have some thoughts about Ming Ke and the story setting of this article, which may interest you. When writing an article for the first time, the grasp of the overall structure and story structure is naturally not on the table. Since the heroine is Xiao Ai, it must be a single heroine. However, in the early stages of this article, the relationship between the protagonist and Xiao Ai is not obvious. If adults and children can talk about it right away, then you are [like]. Non-travel This article has made some changes to the settings of gin, and they are not small. To be honest, the positioning of gin in the original work is a bit abstract. The setting I used is about resourcefulness, full force value, and not completely becoming the lackey of the organization. It can be regarded as free between red and black. In addition, his family background has also been changed, and the protagonist has become his lost brother. The background of the story is written in the text. Gin's position was determined, so naturally his behavior also needed to be changed. The first thing was to kill people everywhere without thinking. His colleagues who are working for the organization also have their own plans. I also hide a lot of mysteries in the protagonist. The main emotional line in the front is that of Xinlan CP. I put the protagonist and gin in, naturally one of the purposes is to catalyze this set of CP. As for Ke Ai's party, I'm sorry. This article will not maintain the original work to make the bond between them too deep, and of course it will not be completely absent. It's just that I need to make way for the protagonist. Before Ke Ai develops, let Xiao Ai and the protagonist form a bond first; in addition, let Conan speed up his relationship with Xiao Lan. This pair of Xinlan has always been a pity in my heart. I believe everyone can also find out when reading the original manga that Gosho Aoyama defines Detective Conan as a love mystery manga. The love in it naturally requires reasoning. This guess is naturally over-interpreted in other anime, but in Conan, it is indeed reasonable. I believe everyone who has read the comics knows that Conan and Xiao Ai are actually a real couple, not just a couple. The story between them is too rich, and the bond between them goes beyond friendship, and even love cannot be described. But in contrast, the old thief's portrayal of Xinlan is quite sloppy. And the contrast between before and after is also very obvious. In the London chapter, before Shinichi rushed his confession, there were countless opportunities, but they were cut off due to various untenable reasons. It really made Xiaolan a little miserable. I believe that many Ke Ai or Ai Dang feel really distressed about Mao Lilan's embarrassing position and role in the comics, as well as her appearance. Even in the early stage, most of the people were fighting against Xinlan, but gradually I found that there was nothing to fight against, and I couldn't even keep fighting. There are countless cases and inferences in Ke Ai's analysis article. The brainless Xinlan Eternal Party can naturally say that it is all your imagination and deliberately exaggerated. But what cannot be avoided is the character Xiaolan. Her connection with the story is too shallow. I think those who like Xiao Ai will naturally feel sorry for the overall portrayal of Xiao Lan in the comics. Complete the castle in about 300,000 words Two cases involving Xiao Ai (Gin and Shiho reached an agreement) Adapted from Countdown to Heaven, the protagonist and Shiho meet and confirm their relationship at the end It should be at least 700,000 to 800,000 words, and then come up with an ending. It should be over a million words long Originally, if the traffic of this book was good enough, I should have written it into a very long novel. In Gin's branch plot, the duel between the organization and the red side, Kuroba Toichi, Kudo Yusaku and the like did not appear. There are other theatrical versions or better case adaptations of the Kuai Qing branch. Then the real world view is also interspersed. Nowadays, there may be less realistic worldview. Split it into another book, and then intersperse some memoirs of the protagonist and Shiho's cases in the world of science in the other book. Then, as for the supporting characters such as Gin and Shuichi Akai, my plan is to write a book of short and medium stories with them as the protagonists in the future, which will be about ten or two hundred thousand words, to enrich my science universe. I can accept not making money, but I can't accept that few people will read the book I write. Of course, in the past few months, there are still more than a dozen book friends who have been following the update. It can be said that without you, I would not be able to make updates. If I write on a standalone machine, I will definitely be very slow. Since you are here, I will take time out of entertainment time, so I will write faster. I have been insisting on updating 4,000 a day for a while recently to see if the traffic will increase. If not, I will probably go back to 2,000 a day. More time to write the plot of the second book The second Future World book is purely original, but with the addition of Shiho, it requires a lot of thought and progress will be very slow.

The highlight is the reshaping of the characters: Gin is more three-dimensional, and the protagonist is a lost brother; the emotional line takes into account the New Orchid Party, and Haibara Ai has a new emotional trajectory, and is more delicate and lively in the interaction with the protagonist. Adaptations of cases such as "The Assassin in the Pupil" are nostalgic yet fresh. Haibara Ai is no longer the "object person" in the adapted case, and the reflection choice is in line with the new emotions. There is more hesitation and concern due to new bonds in the calmness, and the growth is clearer. However, the narrative has shortcomings, the early pacing is slow, and some branches are lengthy. Overall, it's worth reading. It's a good fanfic and suitable for fans who want to read new stories in the world of Conan. Very cool [shy]

The author wrote it very well! It's a pity that it's not popular. Based on this chapter 170, I give it five stars! The author's writing is incomparably good, and the jokes in the article are also 6G network haha. The emotional part is very delicate. What I thought was our first encounter is actually a reunion after a long separation. The progress is very slow, but the article is very interesting. The author also provides super professional science knowledge, which increases my knowledge! No OOC, Xiao Ai is so cute, she really deserves the best! ! ! There are quite a lot of twists and turns, and the plot is also very interesting, but the plot is not watery. Why is it not popular? ! ! He has a knife but not a big knife. He always tells me a joke to make me laugh when I want to cry. . . Nice! ! !

Recommendations when standing guard to catch fish [grievance] [shy]

The author is a bit active [laughing evilly], good-looking, and I like to read [laughing] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like]

Overall it's ok The subject matter is quite novel and the writing is very delicate. I highly recommend reading it! [Top post]

The plot is pretty good so far, I support it [laughs][laughs]

Nothing to say, just 2 words, beautiful

Vodka, please defect to the organization with me, ah~Sydney

It's very interesting. I feel that Xiao Ai's thoughts are written very delicately. It feels like the original novel. The writing style is also good. It only updates once a day [Punch Out]

The writing is good and beautiful.

So who is Kotomi and whom?

Good-looking, good-looking

The logic is very strict and sweet. Although it is a debut novel, it is great!

Very good, not bad, the one after Xinlan is very good, that is Xiao Ai's sweet article

The original work of passers-by and non-exquisite characters is stable, and it is a sad fan article. There are many original plots, and you can get into trouble in the early stage. After about ten chapters, it will go smoothly. Don't criticize newcomers too harshly.

The protagonist is a good person, so good, like a saint

I think it is necessary to enhance the protagonist's combat power. I think it is necessary to add some grooves and some jokes in the process of the novel, otherwise there will be very few comments.

It's pretty good, the settings are quite complete [Like]

It's so well written, why doesn't anyone read it?

It's so good, I will stick to this book until the end [Adoration]

A very good book with particularly good character development

The writing is very good, but it's a little confusing. The last chapter said that Shinichi had turned into Conan, and the next chapter said that Shinichi had just become smaller.

It's over. It's really become a water plant. Give the protagonist more of a role