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I really like it. Come on, the author will continue to update you. I also like your speed of updating five times a day. Keep up the good work.

Overall, this plot is pretty good, but it's a pity that there is no female protagonist. But the protagonists are basically invincible now. If I keep writing about bits and pieces, it might be boring. I hope to arrange some stronger opponents. Please comment and like [Send your heart]

Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this. How fat four. How fat four. [Code to live][code to live]

The protagonists are all young people, but this book is written by an elderly person, which feels quite novel (maybe because it is an old-blooded book [laughing]). The key is that there is no system, and the world view is also very grand. Maybe it will describe the story of ascending to the fairy world in the future. In short, just update it quickly [Note]

The content is very exciting, hope you keep up the good work Nice to watch, love to watch, happy to watch, enjoy watching.

It's not that it doesn't look good, but it suddenly changed to cultivating immortals, which made me a little uncomfortable personally. Otherwise, in terms of plot alone, you are good. I didn't like to comment before. I didn't comment on many good books, and I didn't ask others to avoid bad books. This book is generally good. The original book, anime, and cultivators can all read it. I just can't stand it for personal reasons [laughing and crying]

Is there a female protagonist in this book? Who is the heroine?

Except for the bad ending, everything else was written very well. Although the ending is a bit unsatisfactory, it is still watchable. Keep up the good work. Regret may be the pinnacle of a work, but if it is not grasped well, it will not be very satisfying.

Come on, it looks good now

The words or words in a specific situation create a three-dimensional plot of the story, giving readers a sense of involvement. Zhang and Shu are flesh and blood, and have the loyalty of young people. At the same time, they are not lacking in the troubles of the world. The plots are connected, and the plot is compact and fascinating.

It's very interesting, you can take a look

Beautiful, easy to read

Author, you are so short!

Brothers, this is the most awesome novel in terms of plot and fighting among the one-person fan fiction I have read so far. I really recommend reading it. Finally, I suggest the author to update more. As long as he doesn't die, he will update as hard as possible. I will give you a 99 reward directly.

Let me give you a 4-star daily update of 10 five-star cards. ヽ(^.^)

This wave of direct five-star reviews, I'm afraid the author can only stop it if he writes a few more chapters [laughing evilly]

The structure and characters are all good, but the story of the aristocratic family could be written a little more to shock the heroes, but they are alone.

I didn't expect it to be an old book, and the male protagonist is cool and uninhibited. At first I thought he had no CP, but then he became a son-in-law (even though it was used for conspiracy) and the presence of CP was not strong enough to be accepted. The male channel is really afraid that the male protagonist will lick her as soon as he has CP. No matter how arrogant, cold or unrestrained, he will turn into a clingy man who lacks love. When this book has CP, it is mainly concerned with justice and career. It is quite good if it is not timid.

I read the setting in another book, and it was said that the Celestial Master's degree will not allow people to die. If it were true that all the skills were given to the next Celestial Master, wouldn't they be invincible already? So I decided that this setting of dying after passing on the skills is not good.

Why is there such a huge difference in combat power between 19 and 20? Has anyone been replaced?

The plot is reasonable and not too showy

There are more urgent things than loneliness. The cloud storage space has expired. Others suddenly stopped playing games. That was because Lianmai fell in love. I suddenly stopped playing games. That was Cai uninstalling. There are more urgent things than loneliness. The cloud storage space has expired. Although the flowers will fall away, they will bloom again.

This book is really good. Keep up the good work.

Personal feeling: Overall, the book is pretty good, but the middle to the end is a bit perfunctory. The rest can arouse the empathy of a seven-year-old bookworm like me [punch out]

I crossed the line, I made the wrong payment. So short, ugh~.

Not bad, keep up the good work, author

One person is still the same person, the old man is full of passion

The plot is okay, but there are lots of typos. In some of the dialogues in several chapters, I can't tell whether the protagonist is called Junior Brother Laotian or Senior Brother? After a while, the protagonist calls him Senior Brother Laotian.

It suits your taste well, come on

There is not much poison in the plot. Hope it doesn't end badly The protagonist has few skills