Stardome Rail: Lumen

To be honest, this is the third time I have opened it. It was all because I quit when the protagonist was a killer, that is, when the protagonist and Jingliu met in Chapters 1 and 2. This time I clicked on it and looked at it patiently, but it still didn't feel right. Worth recommending

I clicked in just for the mirror flow at the beginning, because I am XP, but I didn't expect that this book is not the kind of refreshing novel, nor the kind of sweet pet, but the ordinary daily life of day and night. To be honest, there are many words, the author is also very patient, and it is good to read. It is not bad even if it is ordinary.

I have never seen it shaped so well. The characters, plot, and writing are impeccable. But. Because each chapter has a lot of words. So it looks like there is very little content. But it's really quite a lot. Secondly. The interaction cannot be said to be very sweet, I can only say that it is extremely sweet, although it is not sugary yet. Now I am just stuck and want to separate. I can only say it depends on how you end up. The perfect ending can be considered, perfect. After all, the shape is too good

It's pretty good. At least you have to read chapter 35 if you really can't hold it in and jump right away. Anyway, the first 35 chapters are about the protagonist being a figure in darkness, a killer, and Kage-ryu redeeming each other. If you like daily life, you can join it. Anyway, it doesn't take too much to jump in. More than 20 or 30 pictures are enough to make it enjoyable. The characters are not broken, the writing is pretty good, and the emotional lines are not awkward.

I have never played games, but I started to get into the Bengtie fanfic two or three months ago. I have "browsed" many books, and I feel that the humanities are all the same. The first two books feel novel, but then they become boring. But this book refreshed my understanding of this type of book, because it truly tells a brand new story within a prescribed framework. The author's thinking is very in-depth and the main line is clear (as of now), which also allowed me to understand this world view for the first time. I hope the author can write more exciting (thrilling/heartfelt) words later!

It's quite good to watch, the protagonist doesn't drag his feet or hide his clumsiness, the author doesn't hold back his farts, the plot is top-notch, the dog food is enough to satisfy him, and the single female lead in the drama is top notch! ! !

To be honest, this book is the best Kyōryu fanfic I have ever seen. The image of the male protagonist is impeccably created and straight to the point. It is not like other books where he is either ambiguous or a knife. Alas, the language is weak. Let's move to the main text.

I have read the whole book, it is a very, very good book. You can see the author's hard work and persistence day and night. This book is not a book that revolves around the main story of collapsing iron, but is more about daily life. The portrayal of each character is very rich and restored, such as the portrayal of Danye (ahha) and Danfeng and the change of their personalities, like a person changing in front of my eyes, Aha's feelings and learning about human nature, the gradual understanding of emotions, and Danfeng's original coldness towards everything and love, not understanding that for Danye's sacrifice, Danfeng returned to his true nature of abandoning the Mingzhu clan. Come on, let's pursue Danye's brave pursuit (doesn't mean seeking an identity like a dog licker, but rejecting Danye's perfunctory and trying everywhere. Seriously change her, give her the ability to love, and make her fall in love with him). After talking about Maple Leaf Group, Seagull Couple for so long, I'm not saying that the male and female protagonists are better than the male and female protagonists, but in my heart, the Maple Leaf Group is too difficult and too sweet. So far, Tang Taizong's sinicization group Take a look at how many hours I have been watching, and I have brushed up on the relationship between Aha and Danfeng three times.

Personally speaking, I think it was well written, but the first part was too long, and I felt that some pitfalls were not filled in, and I didn't get to the point quickly. I also know that the author may want to create a character who lives in the abyss in the first half of his life, and is redeemed by someone in the second half of his life. However, the too long preface only makes the audience feel annoyed. The writing is good, and the amount of work in one day is relatively sufficient (more than most authors of Tomato Dog). I can't continue editing. I highly recommend it.

It's quite interesting, but there are too few people, and you can't even see it in the recommendations. I feel like the author could change the cover, and then change the title to an attractive one. Some people may not like the Earth part, so I just skip to the second chapter. Finished with flowers [laughs]

The writing is very good. I like this kind of daily life very much. It is sweet but not greasy. The five heroes on the cloud are still there and no one has left. I really love it. The extra plot is also very good, and I can write a book on its own! I just can't get enough of it, so please work harder, the author!

The writing is quite good. The main thing is that this is not the kind of second creation that follows the plot. It is quite comfortable to watch. There are no bad points at present, but there are too few chapters.

There is a story that is quite sweet and changes the direction of the story for everyone. I also like it very much. Although basically the personal design is retained and the rest is generally original, it is still to my liking. Five stars for encouragement!

How shameless. I don't know why I like the first part more. The only parts of the book that impressed me were the first part on Earth and the meeting with Jing Yuanyuan 700 years later. The rest of the impression left me with was sweet and sweet. Of course, the emotional part was also well written, letting me know why the two protagonists fell in love. Unlike some novels where the hero and heroine fell in love at first sight when they first met. I didn't even know why they fell in love. It was very inexplicable, but this book didn't have this problem. It's been so long since the kids, the author stabbed the official in the back, ahha, he's a good god

A breath of fresh air in tomatoes, this is a masterpiece by Star Railway fans. There is no hydrology, no clichés of ridicule, the writing is good, there are no embarrassing descriptions, it is not brainless, and the plot is casual.

The front part is really good, the development is perfect, and the plot is not too draggy. In the later stage, the plot differentiation is a bit unsatisfactory, it looks a bit boring, and the protagonist and the mirror flow have a bit less scenes. But overall it's still very good

I think this is one of the best Bengtie fanfics I have read so far [laughs]

There is actually a Yingxing Baiheng cp who must be praised. Finally, he is not a same-sex cp like Yan Hengliuheng [face covering]

The most beautiful single-female main story I have ever read, I highly recommend it [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] The most important thing is that there are two updates a day. The author is very hardworking [note] [note]

To be honest, this book is really good-looking, and the settings are as sophisticated as possible. Sometimes I laugh unconsciously while reading it. The writing is very good on a daily basis, but I don't know why, but the score doesn't seem to be very good. Logically speaking, this should be at least around 9.6? It's a pity. I actually want to continue reading this book. The writing style and content of this book completely do not match its rating, current reading, and income. I feel that the score is much lower.

The plot is very good, and for the first time in a long time, it gave me the feeling of watching a "story" rather than a narrative. Just some suggestions for plot speculation and discussion are given in a separate chapter. Listening to the book will affect the experience a bit. I also suggest you think about the title of the book carefully [laughing and crying]. The title of the book almost made me miss an excellent work.

Very good. I have read several fan novels where the heroine is Kyoryu. This is the best one I have read.

Very good, one of the rare Bengtie fanfics that I don't want to read

The author answers all questions, the characters are not broken, the plot is also very novel, I can't stop reading, and the number of words in the chapters is twice that of a normal author. And there is nothing toxic about it. There are very few articles about single female protagonists in Jingliu, and most of them are about multiple women. Even if I find this one with a single female protagonist, there are some toxic points or the character is completely broken. This is the best one I have seen by the author. Personally, I think the first volume is the most exciting and more fascinating (although it has nothing to do with Star Iron). The second volume returns to the main line. Although it is good, it is not as novel as the first volume. Maybe it is because I prefer the ambiguous relationship between the knife and the male and female protagonists like the first volume. However, the sugar content of the second volume is a bit higher. In short, it is still a very good book.

Nice! ! ! Feel free to rush! Beng Tie is the best in daily writing!

The best book I've ever read, I've finished it 4 times It's the same sentence, it's beautiful, I've heard it N times

Awesome, I might not be able to stand the first two chapters, just be more patient and read on. I just read a little bit before leaving [face covering] I recently re-watched it, and the latter part is really good [eating melon]

Personally, I don't think it has any bad points for the time being, and it's quite comfortable to watch. As long as it doesn't collapse, I think it can be regarded as a breath of fresh air among Bengtie fans. I hope there won't be any eunuchs.

At least I've seen the most comfortable single-girl novel now

How to put it, if you can watch the front, the latter will be very interesting, but if you can't watch the front, the latter won't matter much, it just feels a bit abrupt. Overall, this is a very interesting book, and I like it quite a lot. I don't know about others, but it suits me anyway. Come on, author [blowing kisses]