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I want to read a book like "This host is awesome, let him die for the villain and he will really die". Super beautiful, one of the best
I Want a Master-Disciple Story, a Male Master and a Male Apprentice, the Master Is Aloof and the Apprentice Is Paranoid, Thank You
Time Travel, Comedy, Self-Cultivation, Pretending to Be a Pig and Eating a Tiger.
As We All Know, Being a Master Is a Dangerous Profession. Do You Understand What I Mean?
Master-disciple articles, I tend to prefer sweet articles, friends, please come and smash me to death with your articles! !
Master, the Following Is the Kind of Crime
Don't be reborn, master-disciple love
Are There Any Novels Similar to the Anime "Self-Rescue Guide Through Books"?
Shuangnan, Xiuxianwen, Sweet Pampering but Not Cruelty
I want to read a book like "The male supporting actor wakes up and steals the female protagonist's golden thigh". I don't want master-disciple, I'm not very interested in master-disciple recently, I'm a native dog, I like to read, cool articles, and have golden fingers
I Beg the Male Protagonist to Dress up as a Senior and Become a Heartthrob
Please Smash Your Shuangnan Xiu Xianwen at the Bottom of the Box into My Face😁
I want to see content similar to "Through the Book: Readers Save Long Aotian and Be Forced to Love".
A Cold and Beautiful Master or Senior Brother, a Charming Person, Preferably a Pair of Nannies
Shuang Nan, Cultivating Immortals, If You Want to Be Cool with the Master, It Is Best If the Master Is Here
Ancient Times, Shuangnan, a Bit Funny, Not Cruel, Ending HE
# #Xiuxian
I want to read a book like "The Junior Brothers Are All Big Bosses, So I Can Only Cheat". Do you have any senior brothers and have been together since childhood? You can become a black man or not.
Cultivation of Immortals, Double Men, Double Strength, Soul Penetration, Furnace Cauldron, Leading the Sect from Weak to Strong
Want to watch something like "Laughing Crazy!" The whole sect's double monks are all in love with the brain (Fu Sheng Qi Meng)" book. The protagonist is gifted
Please, the Master Wears the Book and the Apprentice Is Reborn! ! ! Thank You Thank You
Beauty Master Plus Shuangnan
I want to read a book similar to "Beauty Immortal is a Little Sweet". Whatever you want, take it out if you think it looks good.
Shuangnan, a Cultivator, Gifted and with a Good Family Background, a Group of Teenagers Traveled Around the World
I want to watch something like "Yaoshou!" The book "This Sword Cultivator Isn't Quite Straight".
Do You Have Shuang Nan? Master, I Still Practice the Ruthless Way.
Shuangnan Xiuxian
I want to read a book similar to "The Genius Spell Card Boy Who Cultivates Immortality in Another World".
Ancient Style Double Male Protagonist
Is there any ancient-style two-male protagonist novel? ! ! If you really want to read stories about farming or cultivating immortals, you can do that. It's awesome. ꒦ິ^꒦ິ
Did the Master Raise the Little Villain Little by Little and the Two of Them Ended up Together?
I want to read a book similar to "Stop the Evil Disciple, He is Your Master".
As We All Know, Master Is an Extremely Dangerous Profession
Are There Any Books Like "The Scumbag Villain's Self-Saving System"?
Two Men, Cultivating Immortals, Cultivating, Master and Apprentice
I want to read a book similar to "Master: Raising a Poor Little".





























































































Nice! Nice! Nice! Say important things three times! Zundi looks great! Wu Yan feels like a dean [face covering], which is relatively new, but unfortunately not many people watch it. [Almost crying][covering face]
It's a good read, with a complicated and interlocking plot that is both humorous and sad. Master is really the best person I have seen among foreign persimmons. He has strength, brains, not stupid at all, and sometimes has a little humor. Clear logic and true feelings! ! ! ! ! I love Master so much! ! ! Kiss Master He is really super! Gentle!
Read it in one sitting! ! ! My heart feels warm. It's been a long time since I've seen a novel that I can follow from beginning to end without having to think outside the box. While reading, I knew that the author had written an outline. The plots before and after the master-disciple novel that I read before were criticized to some extent in my experience of reading the novel. This novel may push the early and late stages to be closer, but the relationship between the characters and the world are still relatively clear in the process of viewing. And because of this, at the finale, the long-lost contentment of the old bookworm was awakened. All in all, come in without losing any money! ! !
The author's writing is smooth and the plots are interlocking. It can make people feel a faint thread, but they don't know how to string it together. Those chapters of "The Chosen One" made my cerebellum shrink. I was constantly shocked. I felt like I was mentally retarded because I couldn't figure it out [laughs][laughs] Emotions change very naturally, not too fast or suddenly. Overall, the reading experience is very good! ! ! [Shy][shy] Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh how could such a beautiful article not be popular! ! ! ! ! God cannot tolerate it! God cannot tolerate it!
The plot is very smooth, not frivolous, the writing level is not childish, and you can tell the truth, the protagonist's feelings are not inexplicable, it is step by step, peeling off the cocoon, this is very good! If you don't fall in love with someone from the very beginning, you will look very weak. I have finished reading the main text, but have not read the extras yet. I am very curious about whether Feng Ye and Qin Feng will have an ending in the end. [Thinking] This book really touched me in every aspect. There was a little twist at the end, which made me want to go into the book and see their life trajectories. I really like Master and Disciple Nian. Looking forward to new works! I want to read the story of the Blue Sea Demon Lord and that mortal cultivator🥺
The writing is really great. I haven't finished reading a story in Tomato for a long time. Many of them are abandoned. Master-disciple stories like this are really to my taste. This book really keeps me reading. Although some plots are a bit sadistic, there are still many desserts, especially the extra chapters are really interesting. I have read every chapter. It's really great, with a lot of pitfalls and foreshadowings, and there's also a sentence: Has the master disliked me? Then when the master said this sentence later, I really burst into tears, emmmmm, I may need it. . . . It takes a week to buffer. After reading a book, the spiritual world is still quite oppressive. However, near the end of the novel, the author expresses respect for the world of the novel through a dialogue between characters. In each world, everyone is an independent individual. This allows Xie Linfeng, who is not an important person in Shen Ying's heart, to become a vivid character and protagonist. I really love this kind of author, 5 points, great, great, great,,top2,[][][][][][][],(
Super pretty! ! ! It's so satisfying to see the end in one go! ! ! I like every character wwww they are all so cute! It can be said that the elder temperament of a teacher in Wu Yan is quite profound. Especially when he was teaching Xiao Linfeng in the early stage, he made me want to be a disciple [smile] Teacher Wu Yan, please accept me as your disciple! ! ! ! There was also the scene where the flirtatious Xiao Lan and the exposed-shouldered Xiao Linfeng were questioning whether they really liked men. I was immediately stunned. Hahahahahahahahahahahaha and Editor Shen, when I first appeared, I thought this villain was so cool, but in the end he turned out to be a hard-working worker with dark circles under his eyes. It was so comedic. Although it's very interesting, I read the chapters with a lot of information several times and still didn't understand it: P Forget it, I just finished the exam and I don't want to waste my brain cells. The boss of Qiuqiu analyzed it (or the author's wife taught me step by step, hehehehe).
Wow, I found another treasure article! I stayed up all night and finished reading it. The plot is really great, but who can tell me what the relationship is between Xue Ling, Zhu Wuyan, Zhu Yao, Zhu Shengyu, and Xie Jing~ I still don't understand [face covering] [face covering]
This is a particularly good-looking book about cultivating immortals. Zhu Wuyan is so gentle. Even when you were hurt by Xie Linfeng, you were comforting him. Just pamper him! This Death Escape is really good-looking. After Xie Linfeng wished Wu Yan alive, he began to turn into a wet and clingy puppy. It's so cute ovo. Xue Ling, I thought you were the villain, but it turns out that you and Zhu Wuyan have a father-son relationship. They should be considered father and son. After all, half of Zhu Wuyan's body is Xue Ling's blood. Xie Jing is also very interesting. Ye Zhou is so funny. I can't help it. In the front is the gentle and jade-like Master of Yunxia Palace, and in the back is the Master of Yunxia Palace who is chasing Xie Linfeng to avenge Zhu Wuyan's death. It feels like knowing that his best friend is with a man who hurt him, and he is the one who wants to kill that man. OK, let's not talk anymore. Preliminary remarks 99
The writing style is a bit clumsy, but this is the author's first novel, so I can understand it. I really like the characters of Zhu Wuyan and Xie Linfeng, and their outlook on life is also very upright. Master is very tolerant, gentle and doting towards Xie Linfeng. Xie Linfeng also respects and loves Master very much. He will think from Master's point of view and also changed because of Zhu Wuyan. Zhu Wuyan also knew that it was easy for his apprentice to overthink and feel insecure. After confirming the relationship, he doted on him very much, saying that he didn't have to worry so much with him and that he would give him whatever he wanted, which gave Xie Linfeng a sense of security. The final result is that I also like he. I did not expect that Xue Ling, Zhu Wuyan, and Xie Jing from the original work would come to modern life together. All in all, it's a happy ending and well written!
Madame is so good-looking, I declare this to be the best two-male protagonist novel on Tomato. I won't allow it to have only an 8.1 Score😇 The two male protagonists, one travels through the book and the other is reborn. Each has a clear line of action. Even if it is attracted to the other little by little, the character will not collapse in its own main line. The changes in action logic and emotions are very reasonable and natural. I really love this. . The plot advances layer by layer and the process of revealing each truth bit by bit is very interesting, and the pace is fast and not sloppy, which is really exciting. . There are conflicts and misunderstandings in the plot, but they are not misunderstandings that make people scratch their heads. They are both sadistic and refreshing, and I feel so comfortable watching them😇 Wuyan and Linfeng are not only smart, but they also love each other very carefully, tenderly and deeply. I cried to death. . The two of them are portrayed as flesh-and-blood people, rather than flat "masters" and "apprentices". From the beginning, they started their own careers, to forming bonds and caring about each other, and then to confirming their feelings. There were twists and turns along the way. I can feel every confusion, shock, and hesitation in their hearts, but they will always make the most correct choice and walk firmly to each other. . I absolutely love it. . I have read so many novels with ratings of 9+, and I was overwhelmed by the brainless male protagonists, the love-brained male protagonists and the watery plots. This one really saved me. Thank you to the author😇
It can be seen that the author has buried a lot of foreshadowing. Although the emotional scenes of the protagonist are slow but passionate, they are all of a hindsight type, and they slowly feel the importance of the other party. Personally, I felt that the description of Wu Yan's death was a bit stiff. The overall plot is very compact. I hope those who have clicked in can read it patiently. The book is worth it❤️
I really like the emotional drama in this book. The plot filling in the later stages was a little confusing, but it was all smoothed out. A simple but interesting story, with some sweet details. It's a pity that the stories of Xue Ling, Xie Jing, Zhuyao and Zhu Shengyu were not written.
I really like this book. I think the whole plot has ups and downs and is very attractive. It makes people look forward to the next development. There are a lot of foreshadowings and basically all the pitfalls are filled. I can't stop and I just finished it. It's a very good book! ! [Send heart][Send heart]
These five stars are given to the author, who is really serious! I also love interacting with our readers! ! Every time we read a review, we can see the author's presence, and he will also explain to us what we don't understand, and apologize if we encounter bad comments. I am very happy to have met such an author. Her writing style is also very delicate, which made me truly feel the love between Linfeng and Master. I like this article very much. Except for some brain-burning plots, I still don't understand it very much. But when everything calmed down, everyone was so full of emotions, and I seemed to really see them living their lives. In the extra story, I was deeply moved by the love between Linfeng and Master, just live well [crying] Thank you for giving them souls.
Very nice! The plot logic is smooth, there are no particularly obvious bugs, and the characters' emotions and cognitive changes are very reasonable. Why is such a beautiful book not popular? ! [Sending Hearts] Madam, please update quickly! ! !
It's a great master-disciple story. I really like the characters, and the plot at the end is very interesting and unconventional. It becomes even more interesting as you go to the end. But it evaporated as soon as we got to the car<(ToT)> And I don't know if I'm hallucinating. I read the comments last night and saw that the author said he posted the car on Weibo. I planned to look for it today, but I couldn't find any information at all!! It hurts, could it be that I was hallucinating because I was too hungry?<(ToT)><(ToT)><(ToT)>
This book is wonderful. The most unexpected thing for me is that the author has handled the original ending of Zhu Wuyan well, and the emotional changes of the two protagonists are also very good, especially Xie Linfeng's, showing how he fell step by step to the paranoia and madness after Zhu Wuyan's death. Zhu Wuyan's portrayal was also very successful. , He has been very responsible and takes Xie Linfeng very seriously from the beginning, which makes it hard not to like him. He has a very strong spiritual core. He understands Xie Linfeng's little thoughts very well and takes good care of his little thoughts. He is a very qualified master and lover. I hope that the two of them will always be happy, but I don't see Che being sad.
It took me a day to read it. It's great! ! At first I thought it was Shi Zunwen's old routine, but the more you get to the end, the more exciting it becomes. It has its own characteristics, which is one of the reasons why you keep reading. Although there are some logical illogicalities in the middle, it doesn't hurt! It suits my taste very well. Hehehe. Linyan is so sweet! We go both ways, and I also feel that the author is a very interesting person, hahaha~~ We are both students, and I really admire you. You are so awesome! Good work for being able to write such an article. I look forward to the next one~
Personally, I think it's pretty good-looking. There will be some shortcomings when writing it for the first time, which is inevitable. However, some of the reversals are quite unexpected, such as the identity line of Feng Ye, but overall I feel that the character building is quite good.
Super good-looking [Love] I don't know why the rating is a bit low... The big plot of the frame is great! There are all kinds of heavenly realms, different worlds, and even original authors and screenwriters. My wife's logical thinking is quite profound (redacted: The Riddler), and I can guess the twists and turns in the relationship between the characters [laughing and crying] The master's character is also very interesting to me, he is strong and gentle~
This article is so beautiful that I want to immerse myself in the author's words, not to leave, and to be immersed in the silent love of the wind. So strange: I fell in love with the subject of masters and apprentices several years ago. Today I suddenly thought of regaining the feeling that used to make my heart beat faster in the middle of the night. When I first started reading the plot, it was completely expected. I even doubted whether I had read this book (I had read too many master-disciple stories before). Although I doubt it, I can't remember the subsequent plot at all, without watching it. Then I succumbed to the character of Wu Yan and continued reading. I came to the conclusion that I had read it but only the first dozen chapters. The emotional line of this book is quite slow. I actually don't like slow emotional lines, but I kept reading for some reason. I can only say that the author wrote it so well! ! [Sending Hearts] Unlike the other articles I've read before, this one contains a lot of messy stuff. Halfway through I felt like it was all a mess, but I couldn't bear to skip another chapter. I love them so much. [Almost crying] Everyone is very alive,…
Ahhhhhhhh! I like it! The character setting of Wu Yan is very good! I can't remember why I was thanking him. I couldn't remember it as soon as I finished reading it, so I'll forget about him. The character of Xie Jing is both good and bad. In the early stage, he was so cruel that he died early. Oh, no, it was the screenwriter. Later, when the truth was revealed, it was a bit annoying. The original author was simply a villain, huh (ノ=Д=)ノ┻━┻. What is the character of Yuexianzun that I really like (「・ω・)「Hey, heroic and chivalrous (I don't know if this is the right way to describe it), oh (´-ω-`) What should I do if Ye Zhou is swollen? Just stay alone all your life? Forget it, it's nice to be a light bulb for the rest of your life. Oops, this is the first time I write such a long comment. The only thing that dissatisfied me with this book is that the protagonist's emotional line is not obvious before he expresses his feelings in the early stage, and I don't understand when his feelings for Wu Yan began. Okay, okay, I'll leave it like this, to be honest, it looks pretty to my liking [Send my heart][Send my heart]
It's hopeless, it's really hopeless...! ! ! If this person, Master Bao, was a cultivator in his youth, the master and apprentice would be very hungry...! ! ! Although the routines are repetitive and the plot is the same, I can't stand it because I love reading this kind of thing... Occasionally, auv can find a fairy tale about masters and apprentices, and I just stay up all night reading it... What do you think is so interesting about this master-disciple story? Isn't it just that the Black Lotus disciple only pretends to be a White Lotus in front of the Master to shake the Master's mind and make him relent? Isn't it just that the master fakes/realizes his death and makes the disciple wait for several years/hundreds of years before resurrecting/reborn into the newly dead person? And because of the master's various little habits, the semi-blackened/blackened/paranoid MAX disciples discover him and are caught/taken back to his residence/locked in the dark room? Isn't it just that after going through various plot lines, the master finally understood his own feelings and discovered that he really cared about this apprentice, so he confessed his feelings and ended happily and harmoniously? I really don't understand what's so good about this kind of master-disciple writing, boxes and boxes and boxes and boxes… Ahem, cough, okay, let's get down to business. Most of the article's logic is disordered, and sometimes the plot is as messy as a ball of yarn scratched by a cat's claws, which makes people irritated and irritated. It is worth mentioning that the author's writing is good, and I really like the attack-suffering mode of getting along, or I just like this kind of personality. After reading the full text, there really isn't much to highlight about the characters, and each character doesn't seem to stand out very much. Except for the main character, everything is pretty average. When you really insist on creating, the characters you write already have flesh and blood, they have independent thoughts, and each has their own character. So when the plot deviates, maybe their character affects you? It's really awesome to be able to persist in writing an article! ! ! Thank you for your hard work! Give you an electronic hug OVO
It's really beautiful! This is my favorite book I found this winter vacation. I usually like ancient Chinese literature. I found several books on 🍅 and couldn't put them down until the beginning. This one is different, it makes me feel very delicate, and the routine is not vulgar at all! ! ! [Blowing kiss]
It's good to read. It's been a long time since I've seen a book like this. The relationship progression is reasonable, the plot is reasonable, and the background setting is quite interesting. It starts low and goes high. It's more innovative than I thought at first. The characters are all cute [like] [like]
I read a book in three breaths. I have read a lot of master-disciple novels, but I really liked this one. There was no sudden change in feelings, and neither party blindly tolerated this kind of plot. It made me very comfortable (don't ask, you will be tortured if you ask). Although I saw a little confused in the middle, but overall it is still very good! I like it~ This is probably the last novel I have read on Tomato in the past few months, so I feel a little emotional (I have to uninstall it to prepare for the college entrance examination). It is my first time to write a book review because I am really lazy. There's nothing wrong with the writing style, it's very delicate and vivid. If you like master-disciple writing, come take a look! Good night
Really nice to look at. Some of the designs for the final boss are also very imaginative. Gu Shen is the protagonist and a very responsible and gentle teacher. He teaches every child who still has a kind heart. But one, it is obvious that he is a black lotus. Although on the surface he is still sunny and cheerful, and seems to be very "saveable", in fact he is reborn, and he is white and black. He used his lotus-like sunny appearance to induce his teacher (Master) to be soft-hearted to him again and again. Don't use the bitter meat plan too smoothly in the later stage. It is a very classic Master's story with ups and downs. I originally thought I had given up on Shizunwen. (For four months in a row, I read Master's articles. I couldn't help but feel nothing.) Finally, when I saw this article, I actually stayed up all night to read it. But personally I don't think it's very cruel. The author has put many small theaters in the comment area. Some are in the chapter reviews, and some are in the comment section of the last sentence of each chapter. But I didn't pay much attention to this at first. If you are interested, you can click in to take a look. (But I always feel that some parts look familiar, and I don't know if I have seen it before.
Hehe, I found another novel that I like. After reading it, I really envy the love between the master and Xie Linfeng. The apprentice realized that he fell in love with the master, but he just kept this feeling in his heart. It turns out that the master also likes the apprentice. It's hard not to love him! [Send Heart] My first impression of the whole story of The Master is that it is as gentle as jade and very gentle. However, I personally feel that I am only suitable for watching other people fall in love, not for myself. [Laugh]
Ahhhh!! It's so pretty (。>∀<。) I really read it in one sitting. I really loved it. I really liked the plot. After reading the author's remarks, I completely fell in love with the author. There is another sentence that I remember particularly deeply: "Flowers and leaves are falling in the wind, even if they are speechless, they still know deeply." I really like this sentence, really who knows, I really like that kind of beautiful and profound sentence, who knows how many times I have read this sentence, looking at this sentence, thinking about their stories, I really have an indescribable feeling in my heart, I like it ヾ(≧∪≦*)ノ