Fantasy, Breaking Off the Engagement at the Beginning, Harvesting the Children of Luck

Although I know it's to advance the plot, but to be honest, those three people are so disgusting.

A book about the Son of Destiny that contains the name of the villain, but it is clearly the Son of Destiny and is pretended to be the villain, =_= The sea is all water

Negative review, the skills are suitable for villains, but they are a bit messy. The first time I received the system reward, I got a god-level skill called "Zuo Yi Gong". The second time I received the reward, a god-level skill, "Zuo Ji Yi Gong" disappeared. As a result, I fought alone with the Son of Luck and the villain received the Mirror-Breaking Pill. The level improvement was still the same as the previous one. After I checked my attributes after going home, I still didn't see the god level skill "Zuo Ji Gong". The writing was too messy and messy.

It's annoying to watch. It's been more than 50 chapters and the Son of Luck hasn't died yet. How can he be the villain and protagonist?

To be honest, I'm too lazy to give it even one star. Just take a look at the first eight chapters. What the hell, Wuling Poison breaks through twice, Jiyi Zizigong is gone, and Tianpin Lingyu becomes level nine! The plot is good, but the content is contradictory and confusing.

Stitched but not completely stitched, it doesn't matter what the realm name is, just copy it! The most important thing is that the entire fucking text is basically full of typos, but I'm still convinced that the timeline is too messy, so I'm sorry. The storyline is full of loopholes. For example, the eighth-level alchemist was interspersed with characters but the reason was too bad. Tell me if he is an alchemist or a high-level alchemist in your book. He can be said to have embezzled precious medicinal materials. What is his brain circuit for embezzling the elixirs of frontline soldiers? The ninth-grade stuff that the soldiers were eating was an elixir. Didn't they say it was discounted? Picture what. In addition, reducing intelligence is not mentioned in the whole book, but everyone has no IQ. Is it embarrassing that the Bai family leader is still obsessed with self-confidence even if his heart is dead? You're complaining about "waste" again, but you're just jealous of Shuitudou's peak

Not very good-looking [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

Great author, come on

There are too many typos, and it's really outrageous that an old man can force his wits. How can you be a fool if you practice to that level? This villain is more like the Son of Destiny than the Son of Destiny, and he is almost as good as Long Aotian Shuangwen

Damn, I'm almost done watching it. I haven't even finished killing a single child of luck.

The plot arrangement is unreasonable, and the system rewards the villain with a little confusion. What kind of god-level skills are there? I haven't seen any use of it, the only one is the Heaven Swallowing Demon Technique. It's too childish and uninteresting to rely on the heroine to gain value every time.

A bad plot, and the author doesn't even know what he's writing. The former uncle is a master, and this is a master uncle.

You can write well.

It's too confusing. There are many points that I don't recommend reading. Elementary school students can read it. Junior high school students and above will probably find it difficult to read.

Support support support

Speechless, too speechless, and the name is wrong. It started in the middle stage of martial arts, but after taking drugs, it was still in the middle stage of martial arts. . .

Instead of killing the protagonist, we can't kill the heroine. Is there only one heroine?

Wrong writing, typos and many fatalities. The combat power is not up to par.

It's a lot of nonsense. I can't stand it after reading two chapters. What the hell?

There's a lot of nonsense, and whether you can kill or not, you let the protagonist go again and again.

Shuangwen is not happy at all

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The pig's feet are not decisive in killing, and he is too indulgent in the growth of the son of luck and the heroine, which is very frustrating.

I don't understand🈶I only practice one of the two god-level exercises, why don't I give the other one to my family and don't practice it myself?

Why don't you take a look for yourself, what did you write?

Villain What is a villain? Has the protagonist done anything villainous? So disappointed

Damn it, why don't you write about the protagonist's level of cultivation?

I came here because of the title of the book, but the content doesn't match it!

If you can't write, don't write.

The content doesn't match, it's rubbish