My Path to Redemption in the Apocalypse

Very good-looking😇The heroine looks average but is very powerful and has cheats. I originally thought Yunze was the second male lead but ended up taking the top spot... They became very sweet after they got together... It's a very imaginative post-apocalyptic story, and I actually like Bai Mao a lot.

The setting is very interesting, the plot is carefully arranged, and the characters are also wonderful in their own way, and their words and deeds fit well with the characters. But the writing style is a bit hard to comment on. I can't say no, but the various scenes and character interactions are so vivid on the page. Let's talk about it, large paragraphs have hidden beginnings and tails, as if writing one more word would cost the author's life! This lack of flow made it difficult for me to fully immerse myself in it. But the flaws outweigh the flaws. I really like this story, so I give it five points.

The world view is very good, and the writing is excellent, but it is a bit too concise. The plot can be written in 600,000 words, and the heroine is too kind, and has always been responsible for saving the world... The emotional description can be stretched a bit, especially with Yunze, it will be more interesting to watch, overall it is good

It's okay, but I'm too unfamiliar with describing feelings.

It's so cool, it's so cool 😢😢😢😢 The writing is so awesome