Rebirth and Counterattack: from Salty Girl to Stunning Heroine

I accidentally clicked on this book yesterday. I have read more than sixty chapters so far. I feel pretty good about it and I have the desire to follow it. I have been reading books for many years, and I can be considered an old bookworm. I would like to briefly talk about my own opinions. They only represent my personal opinions. Don't criticize me, you are right. The author's writing is very fluent, and it can be seen that his skills are very good, and the opening setting is also quite attractive. Judging from the title and introduction, it is a cool novel. The heroine comes to the end of the world with super powers, which is the ceiling of her combat power. However, the resolution of the heroine's family's injustice was a bit slow and not decisive enough to kill. The author may want the heroine to grow up little by little, but the heroine comes from the end of the world, and growing up slowly is not in line with her identity setting, and the pace is a bit slow. The second thing is what I have seen so far. When writing about the marriage of the general's eldest son, the introduction of the supporting characters is too much at once. I haven't seen the heroine appear in many chapters, which is why I decided to write a book review after reading more than sixty chapters. Of course, I saw in the chapter review that the author wrote about their backgrounds in such detail because they are important supporting characters. However, the heroine disappears for so many chapters and does not appear for tens of thousands of words, which greatly affects the sense of immersion. In fact, there is no need to use a large text to introduce the supporting characters separately. On the contrary, the heroine's role is taken away, so it can be written in batches. Before this, the author also introduced other situations where the heroine did not appear. I skipped them and only looked at the part where the heroine appeared. I think this may be one of the reasons why this book is not rated highly. The author's writing style is actually very good, and the other elements of the story are very engaging. So far, the story is still manageable. I hope the author will work harder and get better and better.

I like the customs and customs of the border town, including fortresses, wolf smoke, deserts, camels, grottoes, poplar forests, etc. There are the sons and daughters of soldiers and civilians guarding the border, with blood and persistence, and the passionate border picture slowly unfolds.

Can you write it faster? The writing is pretty good, I like Qingqing!

It's good to watch, and the plot is not too slow. The heroine has a positive outlook on things. She works hard all the way and the whole family works together. She is not ostentatious and develops slowly. This is normal. In ancient times, if you didn't have power and had good things, you couldn't come up with good things. Otherwise, you wouldn't be able to protect your family, which would bring disaster. Although it is a novel, it is still useful for us to read more about some ways of doing things and some common sense of life. It also kills time and learns.

The writing is good, the plot is not draggy, there are tensions and loosenesses, and the characters are well portrayed. The author can practice with this book. After all, this type of book is very limited, the layout is small, there are not many stories to write, and there is no extension.

It's quite good-looking, but it's too little and disappears as you look at it. Also, is the heroine's father really gone? It always feels like he's not dead. Tell me if the heroine has an official match!

This dad is a tool man

It's beautiful. I really like this kind of capable heroine. In the backward ancient times, she could not only protect herself and her family from harm, but she could also live a good life with her own abilities. She also gave advice to the leaders there and changed her living environment, giving full play to the advantages of a time traveler. This kind of article is really well written, so cheers for the author! Looking forward to the exciting stories behind.

The writing is smooth and natural. The story has twists and turns. Hope it will be more exciting later.

Good-looking, good-looking, the heroine is very good-looking

The previous content is very exciting. Come on in the following chapters.

It has only been updated to about 60 chapters so far. It's quite interesting. The heroine is actively working hard to live a positive life. There aren't too many filthy parents. This is my favorite type.

The more I watch it, the more interesting it becomes. I like the rhythm of this story.

Super rich and exciting chapters

It's beautiful and exciting. I hope the follow-up will be more and more exciting.

Wonderful, wonderful and beautiful

Wonderful, I have the desire to watch it.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

The story is very compact and non-Torah

Everyone has a martial arts plot in their heart. I really like Nvli and she looks so cool wearing golden fingers.

It seems to me that there hasn't been an update for a long time. Isn't it going to be discontinued? ? ? ? ? ? ?

It's really beautiful. The plot of the story is twists and turns, and the young characters are portrayed in an emotional and sensible way. Gotta score 9.2 Points

Why doesn't the author update it? A very good novel, I hope the author can fill in the pitfalls! ! ! !

A belated five-star review.

Is this father's tool man dead?

I like this book very much

Wonderful! Very nice to look at.

Ai, this Aunt Huo is also extremely stupid. The boss is probably not his biological son, right?

Super exciting, thank you author greatly

A good book to read!