Stardome Railway: Simulation, Kafka's Morning Sickness at the Beginning

This book by the author is also good to read, but author, have you forgotten that there is another book? ! [Crazy][crazy][crying]

The beginning may not be so satisfactory. Looking back, don't look at his low rating, but he will still have his shining points. I personally think that the part about imitating Fu Xuan is good. Not many people can gradually grow in the process of writing. The author's writing style is not bad, but the idea is very good, and he can write things without making the readers feel abrupt. The rest of this novel is still good, please read it and cherish it!

. . . . It's poisonous, but I can barely accept it because of my high poison resistance. Some poisonous points can be avoided. I suggest the author polish the plot and shorten the simulation chapter. I don't need to write a novel if you want to be disgusted. Send me a piece of cake to make the effect better than this😅

Come on, author! Don't forget the earliest book when updating [laughs]

I just want to say, it's quite bold, please watch and cherish it.

The plot is very interesting, the simulated universe written is really imaginative, the settings are cleverly used, and everything from combat to love is covered. However, the simulated universe is a bit disconnected from the main line of the novel and does not fit well together. I have been following the book for a long time, and I can see that the author's writing style is improving. Please keep writing.

Five stars, but Kafka's personality is a bit broken. But the plot can make up for it.

I would like to ask the author, even though Ji Yuan was injured in several waves, the protagonist's Crazy Diamond is as if he didn't have it. Can he die by feeding his teammates?

There is a successor to the Demon God of Ice Cream [laughter] Unfortunately, there is still a gap compared to the Demon God of Ice Cream.

This book is really good, although there are some flaws, but they are not major problems. Come on, author, take good care of you

It's okay, I can watch it, but I have a question, and what I want to know the most is, when will you end this trap of Mr. Jieyuan? This is a trap. I looked in the title of the table of contents and there is no chapter about Mr. Qi Yuan. Author, can you please fill in this trap? After reading it, I will add a comment. So far, there are two pitfalls. One: Mr. Qi Yuan, this is a big pit Second: The article mentioned that the protagonist transformed into Unit-1, but what about the protagonist's physical body? This is a small pit, it mainly depends on how the author writes it later. This big pitfall of Ji Yuanjun is what concerns me the most, and I really hope the author can fill it in. @Calm is not calm

I would like to give you a suggestion, the simulation is too long, it's better to have more daily routines. The system is only an auxiliary and can completely streamline the plot during the simulation.

It's pretty good-looking, why isn't the rating high? ? Also, I remember it took me a long time to watch it. Why did you finish reading it in one afternoon? ? ? ?

Rush, rush, rush, the author sp Dian guy takes me to rush [laughing evilly]

Perfect! I like it very much💕, keep up the good work! After reading these chapters, I looked solemn, lowered my head deeply, turned off my phone silently, stood up, opened the refrigerator, took out a bottle of 1982 collector's edition Nongfu Spring, held it tightly in my hand, and slowly walked to the window. The scenery outside the window was a bit dim, and my mood was the same, heavy, very heavy. Gradually, the outside was gray. It started to rain lightly in the misty sky. Why, my vision was blurred. I don't know if it was because I was crying or because it was raining harder. It might be both. My mood became even more depressed. I could no longer suppress my inner emotions. I opened the window and shouted out the window: "Who are you looking down on in just a few chapters!"

Go,

If I had been a few years younger, I would have read it and found it very interesting. But now that I have been beaten to pieces by society, I mainly read novels for fun. The more fun and mindless the novels are, the more I like them. It's a pity that I haven't found it for a few years.

Pretty good fanfic

The author is very much like an old friend named the Demon God of Ice Cream

It's over, I'm infected by the author. If the author doesn't update it soon, I will feel uncomfortable to death. The author's writing style is really good. When I read it, I always unconsciously put myself into the protagonist. Let me make a small suggestion. It would be great if you write more about things other than simulation. Especially Kafka's simulation, it made me cry.

I really like this. It's obviously a cool BT article. I just tried it for the second time and it made me tear up at the end, but I still like the author. Most of them prefer to read it.

It's not poisonous at all. It's perfect. It's estimated that there will be a Shura field in the mid-term. I'll give it a try first.

Come on, come on, I want to see the ice cream

Many fanfics follow the original plot line and are basically sent out after they are written. The author's book is so beautiful, why isn't it rated? Social Security! ! ! ! The front may not look very good, so those who backed out should pay attention, the back is very good, it would be a pity not to see it.

I feel that simulation novels will be uncomfortable if you don't read the simulation in one sitting [Chigua] Can you write some main plot? Did you write the simulation because you ran out of inspiration?

Okay, pretty good

It's a good book, right?

Don't enter the palace. What will I see if you enter the palace?

It's really good, I almost didn't recover. The pace of the plot is too slow. The first simulated Kafka has not yet recalled his memory.

The author is awesome. I really like reading it.