Douluo Dalu: I'm Huo Yuhao's Mom

The two eldest daughters of the heroine are so stupid. How could a 14-year-old and a college student cut the tail of a puppy without the permission of another owner? I also bought so many eggs and kept frying them. If there is a note on it, it means that because the heroine's two daughters have become children, their minds are becoming more and more like children. That's understandable, but at 14 and a college student, it's not a bit stupid to be like this.

The heroine was in her forties in her previous life. Her IQ was not very high, but she was forced to become mentally ill. Mr. Xu could only be regarded as acquaintance, so she told him about martial arts abilities. Not everyone is a good person, and the heroine also told Dai Hao that he was not the original owner. He was lucky not to be killed. One of the two children is a college student. , One is a junior high school student, not as smart as Xiao Yuhao, who is not yet four years old. I forgot which one he is. He stopped bowing to the princess when he saw her. She also said no. At best, she is not afraid of power. At worst, she does not understand etiquette. She has not studied history and the difference between commoners and nobles. Not to mention, the princess is from the royal family. I just read this book and I was quite happy. After all, there are very few fanfics about Tomato Girl Pindouluo, but now I am very disappointed.

The subject matter is indeed very good, but the writing is a bit stupid, especially since the eldest sister, as a college student, is as immature as a little brat. She cut off the tail of a puppy and fried a bunch of eggs. This shows that the writing is a bit stupid. Later, when Mr. Xu introduced his second soul skill, he told all the contents. Come on, I won't ignore the more outrageous part. This is a particularly stupid thing to write. When the author was writing it, did you ever think that if Mr. Xu didn't play his cards as you wrote, he would imprison the protagonist's three children, and then the heroine would force the heroine to do as he arranged, and use everything produced by the heroine's martial spirit for his own use, so the writing was a bit stupid.

I couldn't watch anymore. The characters' intelligence level made me dig my toes into the ground. Either the setting is not that big, or the writing is age-appropriate. The protagonist travels back in time and looks like an adult. He also casually tells others about his abilities without hiding them at all. He has two daughters, one is twenty-one and fourteen. Traveling back in time is like living without getting into trouble. Two hundred eggs were cooked as soon as they were told. Can you imagine that a twenty-year-old sister at home, along with her fourteen-year-old sister and four-year-old brother, fried two hundred eggs without thinking about eating them. I didn't want to complain. I watched happily and left disappointed.

I don't understand that the author wants to write a 20-year-old person as if he is two years old. A 20-year-old person has no judgment at all. He cuts off the tail of other people's dogs indiscriminately, and later puts himself in danger out of curiosity. Forget about the 14-year-old sister in front. Adolescence is full of curiosity, but you are 20 years old and don't know that you shouldn't go with strangers? And this mother, don't worry about three 4-year-old brats running outside. What's the use of having a soul age of 20? Is there something different? You also said why did they let them go? What should they do to you? You don't care about your child

Very good (=^ω^=), if the daughter of the heroine can not be naive, that would be great; if there is no male protagonist, that would be great; if the protagonists can awaken their martial spirits quickly, that would be even better; if the author can update it to 1 million words, then It would be even better; if the author does not abandon the article or the article is bad, that would be great; if the author does not have very, very speechless things and characters in the article, then it would be very, very great; if the author updates three or four chapters every day, that would be very, very amazing.

It looks great, come on!!!

Please be more rigorous when writing a book, or set the age of the two children from the beginning. Their behavior does not look like adults at all.

Very good, it would be great if the author has a group The author didn't even give his only five-star reply [sad]

It's toxic. The eldest sister is a 20-year-old college graduate, but she turns out to be mentally inferior to a three-year-old child and gets into trouble every day!