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It's okay to give it a five-star rating yourself [shy] Please leave more comments [grievance]

It can be seen that the author is indeed a new author. Some small suggestions (you can listen or not, just pretend you haven't seen it if you feel annoyed). Some minor problems with the book. The pace is a bit fast and the transition is very fast. Most novels are composed of three elements: location and time (if the time is not clear, you can be vague), event, character. There are many places that the author has missed. If you are a person who has not read the original work, you can say that you basically can't understand it. The second is the world view. Even if you are writing a fan, an overview of the world view should be given in the first chapter, even if it is somewhat summarized, and then the names of the characters. I also saw the author saying that he is lazy. If he writes it for fun, it doesn't matter. If he wants to write well, he should write the names of the characters and the names of the characters. This is also a big disadvantage. Also, it is best to describe something with a beginning and an end. I haven't read the novel for long, and I only feel that it has already been written in a few chapters. I finished two-thirds of the series. I stopped when I saw something about Fei Niang and the protagonist. I hope that if it is a two-male protagonist novel in the future, I will label it (I somewhat doubt that your outline will not exceed 30,000 words). Now I can only think of these, give me a five-star support and encouragement.

It's very interesting. I like it [sending my heart] but the author has updated so little~~ It's not enough to read, and 3 chapters of Che Che are under review [I'm about to cry] Wow, I really want to read it. I hope to come back every week and there will be new chapters to read [][]

You don't update! I just... Just cried😭😭😭😭😭[almost crying][almost crying]

When will it be updated! When will it be updated! (Yelling) So many brushes ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on!

It's very beautiful, and the author's writing style is quite good (✪▽✪)

Big cheers for the author! ! I only have one request [I'm about to cry] not to stop updating! Don't stop updating! Don't stop updating! Say important things three times! [Flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][love][love][love]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, love watching, loving watching, loving watching

Everyone should come and see the beautiful ones!

The protagonist and Fei Niang... [Laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] Ahem, no more to say.

Update, or I will die for you to see ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha

Author, please persevere o(╥╥)o My spiritual food depends on you‧⁺◟( ᵒ̴̶̥́ ·̫ ᵒ̴̶̣̥̀ )

What impressed me the most was that it was so funny, so damn funny! ! ! My 98k(๑•ૅω•´๑)▄┻┳═

Why hasn't it been updated yet?[Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

Nice. The author begs you to update quickly [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]

Super pretty! Anyway, it suits my taste! It's just that Beitang is very busy with his studies, so he's a little slow aaa

It's pretty good, keep it up 😍

Good looking, good looking duck✪ω✪

It's very interesting. Kudos to the author.

Very nice, but a bit annoying to review

Princess, please increase the popularity of updates, woo woo woo [send heart] [send heart]

It's good to watch, but the chapters after Chapter 23 are hard to read [face covering]

It's a very good-looking author. I should continue to publish more and more final Seraph fanfics. I've been stocking up on them before, but I didn't expect to stop reading them in the past few days. [Crying]

Very nice. I like Ferid Jun's and Lin Wan's cps.

The author will update a lot 🥹🥹🙏🙏🙏🙈🙈😢😢🥹🥹🥹🥹😭😭👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍🫶🫶🫶🫶🫶🫶🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫵🫵🫵Yes, please update quickly

It looks good, I love watching it, it would be better if there were more updates [Adoration]

Ahhhhh! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I really like the articles about babies! ! I beg my baby to please update the article (⑉°з°)-♡

Okay, it looks great.

This book is really great and the main character feels so good! ! ! Love it, love it Σ>―(°ω°)♡→

Looks good, come on!