Pirate: If I File a Complaint, It Will Scare the Pirates Away

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Woohoo~ Those who lead Dove Drops are all good people~ Sansui Qing and Doflamingo will really make me cry to death~ Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

In fact, it's average, but it's already very good for a new author to write like this. I'd like to support it by giving it five stars. There are no big flaws in the logic (at least I didn't see it, this is very well done), but the character creation is too flat, too ordinary, and has no impression (the heroine is ok, Dover does not create the feeling of a crazy critic or a big villain), there are not many tears and laughter, it is difficult to move after reading the whole article, but it feels like a forced sensationalism The main reason is that the length of the article is very short, and there are quite a lot of regrets that the author wants to express and make up for. Therefore, the emotional line between Dover and the heroine is rough, and his relationship with other people is not delicate. The whole story has a scattered feeling and is not strung together. After the Whitebeard Pirates rescued them, the story was not particularly clear. I feel like the heroine didn't see her own heart clearly, and her feelings for Dover weren't particularly deep (I don't think the story is sweet, maybe for this reason) Summary, the book is readable, and it's okay. It would be better if the emotional line was more delicate. Dover's character is not established, and the heroine doesn't have a decisive relationship that must be Dover. Come on author, you are still great! I believe you will become an excellent writer [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

I really like it, I really like it, I really like it, I really like it, I really like it, I really like it! ! ! I really love the characters of Doflamingo and Ponyboy. They are so handsome. Help, they are so handsome, so I really want to find a book about Doflamingo and Ponyboy. But there are really very few people writing about the topic of Dove's love. There are quite a few about Ponyboy. Most of them are about people who transform into Doflamingo and then focus on their career. Then I discovered this one. It's really sweet. Help! I really like it! Moreover, I have never thought about the heroine wearing her back. This is really a big idea. Please give the author a big boost for writing a book. I will definitely read it. I love it so much [Love]

Beautiful! ! I get easily irritable when reading books and I usually stop reading halfway through. This is one of the few books I have finished reading! This is also the second Pirates fanfic that I didn't get annoyed by after reading half of it.

Ah, it's really good to watch. All the pitfalls have been filled in. I'm very satisfied after reading it. It's suitable for those who like to read short stories. Please read it! ! ! ! ! [Adoration]

It's beautiful, why doesn't anyone see it? Go, go, go! This is what I like about the pets of the pirate team. Whitebeard and Ace are all fine, woo woo woo, CP is still Doflamingo [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

A small number of people are a bit OOC, and there are still some holes that have not been filled in. It would be better to write a chapter or two about the psychology of Shanks and others after Sanshui Qing died in the battle on the top. The description in some places is not delicate enough. It is obviously a very sad thing, but I don't feel sad, but most of it is good. You can read it, and I am quite upset.

Cp is Doflamingo. During the war at the top, neither Whitebeard nor Ace died. The protagonist's ability seems to be quite interesting, and he can also travel through time and space. If you like this type, you can check it out.

The ending is happy~ everyone survived~

It's a very interesting short article, with ups and downs in the plot. You read where you need to read and fill in the blanks where you need to. It gives a sweet feeling, and the front bedding is very tight. Some small parts are not handled well, but overall there are no problems! Overall, it feels so good.

It's beautiful, perfect, and has a great ending. The heroine is very good, she is silly, but she is not a saint, she is very sensible. The writing is very good, the bad guys get their own endings, and the good guys get their own happiness.

The plot is good, I love Dover very much

Very very beautiful

Super beautiful (please forgive my shallow choice of words)

Although it's a bit ooc, it's still very sweet!

Overall it's pretty good [laughing] After all, the main plot here isn't too complicated due to the number of words. The main plot is written clearly and concisely. It's considered a sweet story. There are no regrets for each character. It's a perfect ending. It's quite funny, but it's also a bit embarrassing in some places. [Thinking]

It's nice, and the short article is just right for a person like me who doesn't have much patience.

This book is very well written. Everyone has his or her own ending. I highly recommend it.

Very good, it's a sweet pet article that I like to read.

It looks good, but what is the ending of the red hair and the ephemera?

This is a book that I read from beginning to end without skipping a chapter! ! ! ! ! Well written! ! !

Someone who deserves to be loved by everyone [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Like, good-looking, love to watch

It smells so good and the author is so good at writing! ! ! [Adoration]

Not bad, I like it

Dover, Dover, Dover, Dover, Dover, Dover, Dover, Dover [sending heart] [admiration] [blowing kiss]

Some places were not explained clearly. The heroine's out-of-character character and the interaction with Brother Ming are quite sweet. You can read it when you are short of books.

, I've seen it a long time ago, haven't I found it yet? Ahhhhhhhhhh, so sweet~

Gaga looks good, I like the rush of One Piece

It's great, I have a huge background and power, I'm envious! ! ! Good-looking [love] [love] [admiration] [admiration]