精灵魅魔：在各色修罗场安身立命

There is no female protagonist or emotional line in this article. Friendship is paramount, whether between people or between people and elves, yeah! (σ≧∀≦)σ There are many scenes with elves or Shura fields, come and take a look! Thank you also to all the friends who support the update! I wish all my reading friends a Happy New Year in advance. Ball ratings, ball tracking updates, ball comments!!

It looks so good, but I don't know if it has two male protagonists. I really like the protagonist and N. The relationship between the elf and the protagonist is also very good (it seems to be promoting the main plot, and then there is no scene in the gorgeous competition). Please give me more and more, it is not enough to watch, please, please🥺

It's very interesting. The combination of bubble chinchillas is really rare. I also really like Ice Nine Tails [Sending Hearts] and N is really a plus. Shiqiu looks a bit like Kyohei in front of the little green hair, a kind of sunny junior but with a deep and unique inside.

①The setting of Shiqiu's Pokémon Succubus is really awesome! ! ! Getting along with Pokémon is always warm and beautiful, and people can't help but smile. ②The plot is also written in a very orderly manner, with clear logic, so that it will not be difficult to understand. And the structure of the story is really great and interlocking. The story of Shiqiu and Pokémon in it is easy to sympathize with, and everyone loves each other deeply. Their relationship is not just that of trainers and elves, but more like family and friends. ③Shiqiu's character is very distinct. He is a very gentle person, but at the same time he does not lack the vigor of a young man. He understands that respect is the prerequisite for interaction and is willing to accept the personality of each Pokémon. No matter what the Pokémon is like, he will always move towards his partner firmly. I still remember the sentence in the book that impressed me deeply: "It doesn't matter if you hesitate, because I will come to you." His bond with Pokémon is always moving. This is my first time posting such a long review, and I may be a bit out of my words, but I want to say that this book is really good. I hope my comments can bring motivation to the author. I want to see the completion of this book and see the story of Shiqiu.

It's very beautiful, and it's definitely a high-quality writing that is rare in Tomato. It ranks among the top 5 Tomato Elf stories I've read, and it ranks at least among the top 10 on the entire Internet. I cried several times watching it. Although it is a charming design with thousands of people (elves), it does not make people feel embarrassed at all (not the brainless Mary Sue I was worried about). On the contrary, it makes people feel the bond between people and elves. I didn't read it before because I thought it was an original article, but when I finally clicked in, I felt very lucky that I hadn't missed this article. There is some content from the original world (not a large part of it, the main world is still original, but it will not be incomprehensible). I really like the daily relationship between Shiqiu and Pokémon. The author's writing is not watery at all. For me, the pace is just right. It doesn't make me feel too cumbersome and make me irritable in the later chapters. Absolute five-star recommendation! ! ! ! ! ! ! Is it because too few people are watching it? Why is the rating so low? ! ! As long as you have the patience and confidence to read this article, you will really give it 5 points! ! ! ! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh it's not enough! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I've been saving up for a few days and accidentally finished watching it again! Wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's really beautiful. The thing that made my eyes pop the most is the secret place on the island. The story it describes is very warm and sad [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]. In the end, the god waited for his trainer but didn't have time to say goodbye [cry] [cry] [cry] The god waited, but the other Pokémon didn't wait [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] I was really heartbroken. Shiqiu is so gentle, and his interactions with Pokémon are so warm and healing. I really like the blue puppy Riolu. He is so cute [shy][shy][shy][shy][shy]

The writing is very good, the protagonist and the elves get along harmoniously, and it is very comfortable to watch.

It looks good, come on, don't stop updating it, just keep the quality. Many serial books I read have been interrupted or unfinished. I finally discovered the difference between this book and other Pokémon books! In this book, just like the original book, the protagonist and Pokémon are like friends when they get along, and the protagonist and Pokémon will fight with each other; other Pokémon are written like a master-servant relationship. Although it is also very harmonious, the Pokémon will obey the protagonist unconditionally. The author also insists on writing that the protagonist treats Pokémon as a friend, which seems very awkward.

I like it very much! It's not enough to watch at all! The relationship between Shiqiu and the elves is really warm, it's exactly what I dream of! Also, I really like Koga Ninja and Thorny Dragon King. I cried for a long time in that chapter. The unchangeable history and the heart-breaking feeling of powerlessness really made me cry to death QwQ. I really wanted to make them happy. My tears have always been high. It can be said that I cried the most miserably that time. The author's writing style is great. It would be nice if there were more oxo

It's pretty cool, and the descriptions of Pokémon are so cute.

This novel is very beautifully written. Each Pokémon has its own unique advantages, which can be amplified and transformed into tactics and become part of the method. This is unique to each Pokémon and is very well written. For example, Bubble Chinchilla's singing control of musical notes, Ice Vulpix's control of ice and snow, Riolu's war dance, etc. Each tactic is very well written. The detail is very detailed and makes people want to read it. The only thing I have is that the writing of the gorgeous contest is not so amazing, but the writing is also very good. I hope the author will continue to work hard. I like writing the part of the gorgeous contest. I hope there will be improvement in the next gorgeous contest. It is not enough. Keep working. I really like it [send heart][send heart][send heart]

Come on! It's my type! No one will reject cute Pokémon, and they really like the warm atmosphere between people and Pokémon. I hope I can continue at this pace and not have the plot get messed up later on. Author, come on! վ ̮ վ

It's really good... I wonder if I can see this book finished in my lifetime. At that time, I really ran out of books to read, so I clicked on this discontinued book. I thought I would stop after reading a few chapters, but I ended up finishing it before I knew it. The setting of the gorgeous contest is very novel, and the bond with Pokémon is also very good. I personally think this is Tomato's best Pokémon fanfic.

Absolutely beautiful, no doubt about it. Advantages: 1. The protagonist has a gentle personality. Whether it's his treatment of Pokémon or his treatment of friends, I'm envious anyway. N is cute, Ah Shi is cute. 2. The relationship with Pokémon is very soft. Bubble Chinchilla, Nine Tails, Lucario and several subsequent mythical beasts, each has its own shining points and advantages, and develops on different paths. Tutu dogs are really cute ORZ 3. In terms of plot, the author's writing is good. The plot of "The Whale Falls" is really touching, and it was obvious from the beginning that it was a tragedy. But in the gentlest writing style, the most cruel thousand-year farewell is written. It brings tears to our eyes. "When I missed you the most, I met you who was the stranger to me." It was another difficult time. Tutu dog is also a very cute baby. However, there are some small flaws: the protagonist (Pokémon) has grown in strength quickly, and has never lost against the wind or in a level-up round. Although it may feel a bit outrageous, it is really cool! Later, after her relationship with N got better, Fiona exchanged the hearts of Qiuqiu and N. It was a bit boring, but this part has been passed, and you can skip to the chapter directly. In the middle of the game, it was a bit boring to watch too much Pokemon competing for favors, but it was reduced a lot in the later stages. In short, Shiqiu, you are truly a sinful man. But it also echoes the Shura Field of the title. Look at the previous lightning protection: Most of the protagonist's team is boys, and the protagonist's Pokémon affinity is very high (wait, does this require lightning protection!?), And there are eight or nine mythical beasts in the later stage (including phantom beasts). The protagonist won the game despite the large level gap. Level growth is slow in the early stage and fast in the later stage. Summary: It is worth reading, but the author is currently unable to update it and I don't know when it will be updated. Looking forward to the follow-up development, after all, Ah Shi's current strength is not something that the Catholic team or the natural team can compete with. Of course, if it's Rainbow Rockets, I have nothing to say.

It's been a long time since I've seen good elf writing. This could have been a life-saving drop in my recent walk in the arid desert. The last time I read Elf novels and enjoyed it was through Tingshu. The biggest highlight of the whole text is the relationship between humans and elves. The emotional bond between the protagonist and the elf is beautifully described, with happiness and sadness, connection and separation. Each elf has a different personality. Together, we are really a family, and no one can survive without it. Not to mention that Ocean Park made me cry. Otherwise, although the protagonist's death is fine, it's not a big problem. Because the battle was well-written, it didn't say that I got up, but I died in seconds, and it felt like the other players were paper-based humans and machines. In terms of combat, the protagonist is indeed a breeder as he said. In the later stage, the protagonist elf entered the legend and fought 6v6 with the king. The elf has the strength, but it is a pity that he lacks command. But after all, the protagonist is only two years old. He is a 16-year-old genius master coordinator. Haha, to put it bluntly, the protagonist has raised himself into a humanoid elf, can't you still see the mastery of the protagonist's cultivation [take a closer look]

The writing is very detailed, and there are many descriptions of the relationship and emotions between the protagonist and Pokémon. Each Pokémon has its own little temper (character setting), and they are jealous when they get together. I really like this. The whole writing style is as warm as a spring breeze. Although there are knives [crying], every plot is superbly written and deeply rooted in the hearts of the people. While there are many descriptions of daily Pokémon, there are also many exciting descriptions of battles, and the descriptions of training Pokémon are also very imaginative. Each Pokémon has its own set of tactics, which is awesome. The protagonist's setting is also gentle and a little naughty. He treats Pokémon as a family member, and his interactions with other supporting characters really want to be written more about. The protagonist is basically invincible and has reached the pinnacle of life. The protagonist also has many special abilities, such as superpowers, waveguides, Tianen... It's cool but not brainless. It also greatly describes the interaction between many mythical beasts and the protagonist, such as Zeraora, Black and White Dragon, Dianxi, Mewtwo, Freeze Bird, Hoopa... These can actually be written in the introduction for highlights, and many people use popular Pokémon as search terms. Yes, the gorgeous contest is also a key word, and the Genesis Music Group is also very innovative. [Sending Hearts] Many novels will lose interest and original taste if I don't read them for a long time. However, I haven't read this novel for half a year, and there are very few chapters. However, it still awakened my memory of the previous plot, and I regained the feeling at that time. A good novel will not be forgotten after reading it. A good novel will always be engraved in the mind, and it will revive with a little touch. It is worth taking it out in the mind from time to time and savoring it. You will find that every time the memories are still delicious, you can always taste new flavors. I used to think that the reason why a masterpiece is a masterpiece is that it is read over and over again. If my articles are read over and over again, then my articles are good articles. Now I know that it is not the articles that can be interpreted deeply that are called masterpieces, but the articles that can lead to repeated interpretations and become newer the more they read, are called masterpieces. I feel that the mere popularity of fan fiction is too condescending for this article. There are simply no words to describe how good it is. I think based on the teacher's writing style, if it is an original text, the popularity will be higher, but I also think that if it is not Pokémon, there will be no such love and feeling [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart] Thank you teacher for allowing me to read such a good Pokémon article [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart] For the sake of such a long comment, please update more, Teacher [crying][crying][crying][crying] I have a friend who is dying and said that he wants to read 100 chapters of Teacher before leaving. I'm not as greedy as him, just ten chapters is enough. Teacher, look at how sensible I am [send heart][send heart][send heart][shy]

It's so beautiful. I'm really moved by the relationship between the protagonist and the elves every time. It's so heart-warming. To me, the protagonist is like the sunshine in spring, gentle, bright and not dazzling, with a soft warmth. I like it very much.

It looks good, has that warm feeling, and that urban atmosphere

This book is one of the few warm-hearted things I personally feel about elves. Come on. . .

Very nice [sending heart] I really like it The protagonist and the elves are very cute [Blow Kiss] and their daily interactions are great too Come on, author! [Blowing kiss]

The pure friendship between humans and elves should be the core of all fan fiction. This book, really, I can't give it five stars. I hope the author will keep updating. As long as it doesn't end badly, I will be a loyal fan of this book.

Very good companion, very warm interaction, very peaceful, makes my heart spin In addition, can CP be knocked down () The character design of the protagonist is still great, and the progress is also very fast. I thought I would write more about what the protagonist did, and how the netizens commented and loved it.

It can be considered among the top five Pokémon fan works that I have read so far, and I had just finished it when I found this one. After reading it in one go, the plot has almost no poisonous points, with ups and downs and turns, the characters are also good, the writing is very delicate, and the knife is quite forgetful. When the ambush was discovered, the knife had already penetrated, but luckily the back of the knife was smoothed out. Nowadays, it is really rare to find a novel with no heroine, no harem, no ambiguity and no blood. Moreover, each elf has its own characteristics and highlights. It would be great if there is a side story to explore the world of the original work. It is a very delicious book. I look forward to new pitfalls.

The protagonist is an elf succubus. The relationship between the elves is very well written. They are both family members and love rivals (does the author still remember Ibrahimovic by the Daming Lake? The relationship between humans and elves is written very delicately The protagonist has a good personality too I don't know much about the specific settings of Pokémon, so I won't comment on combat, but the development of skills is very interesting. 2.5 Bad memes, 1 star deducted (why can't Tomato deduct half a star?

Beautiful, really beautiful! A rare and good Pokémon article. Praise the author greatly! Come on!

After reading nearly two hundred chapters, the author still has a good grasp of the Shura Field. It will not really make the elves turn against each other. The battle for favor in the Legend of Lei Zhen Huan may also be edible. After all, it is not a life-or-death kind. The character and relationship of the elves are well grasped, which embodies the Shura Field without losing the amiability. , Their personalities are not the traditional cute and heartless elves, they are each a bit sinister, and they are naughty and have a deep bond with their trainers. The relationship between the elves is probably equivalent to brothers turning into love rivals. They will not give in to each other on the road to courtship, but apart from the trainer, their relationship with each other is the same as before.

Four stars for the beautiful relationship between humans and elves written by the author. One star is deducted for the embarrassing Shuangwen scene () After reading it for so long, it is undeniable that the emotions described by the author are very delicate. My eyes almost rolled up (tears) in the part about the roaring whale. It was really well written. This is the kind of elven writing that you should read about elves! (Tremor) Then there are some cool sections emmmmm The author can also polish it further

It focuses on the essential coordination of the interaction between the protagonist and the elves. The protagonist is an elf succubus with a cat-level affinity. There are non-numerical plug-ins. It is equivalent to some linear stories that require the protagonist to challenge and deal with himself. At the same time, he will meet more Pokémon and people. Cultivation and traditional combat strength are all top-notch, but the coordination aspect is the most lengthy. It is well written and has a rich story. But it's not a cool article, it's not a cool article, it's not a cool article! Although the protagonist's strength is the best among his contemporaries and even his predecessors, the protagonist's younger age and friendly and playful personality means that the author cannot arrange many plots in the novel. As a result, there will be some plots in the article that may make people angry and uncomfortable. However, the author will basically only mention it in one stroke and it will not be very conspicuous, so if you are a more sensitive type, please pay attention Let me talk about the advantages that I like very much. The author is good at using strengths and avoiding weaknesses. He knows what he is good at. It will be very comfortable to read, and there will not be sudden uneven levels of writing as if it were written by another person. Moreover, the official people do not have any plot to reduce their intelligence. When encountering a villain team, they will pay the highest level of attention and send out a team of kings and even champions to take action. Unlike some novels that try to reduce intelligence, not to mention the current kings, ordinary kings will not move at all. The protagonist must be dealt with and then the protagonist will be surrounded by dangers to advance the plot.

I love it so much. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. The main character and N are really good at smoking (I almost suspect that the author is also smoking, so I posted a comment on the picture). There may be something wrong in some places (forgive me for not being able to tell), but the description is very beautiful. I love it so much hh. The protagonist of this book should be used to drink (¯¯crimin) The writing is good, but it hurts my heart to be stabbed [crying]

It's quite excellent. This kind of emotional expression and the deepening of the bond are the Pokémon I really like. I read a few abstract Pokémon emotional expressions before that almost made me die of embarrassment. I washed my eyes [face covering]