Anime Crossover: My Everyday Life

It is much better than most other comprehensive comics, and the emotional aspect is handled very well. Although it is in a semi-invincible state, there are no plots where unreasonable characters maliciously slap people in the face. It gives people a very comfortable and warm feeling. If there is a problem, it is whether the update can be faster. Sometimes I wonder if the author is going to run away.

Not bad. For amateur writing and playing, it is already very good. However, you can consider sewing less worlds. After all, the more worlds there are, the more heroines there are, and it is easy to be overwhelmed. There are also different types of worlds that are best not to be sewn in. For example, Ultraman, this thing is completely two world views, but it can be written as a copy world for the protagonist to experience and so on. The protagonist There is no need to write it perfectly. In addition to combat ability and money, other abilities such as cooking, painting, novels, etc. Can allow him to learn, progress and grow with the heroine. After all, childhood sweethearts making progress together is still very interesting. If you have a harem since you were young, you don't need to consider that there will be a Shura field when you grow up, [laughter]

Come up with an outline, otherwise you won't have a few big scenes, no passion, no love and hate, and you won't be able to drive. It's a bit difficult 🍉 Why don't you go to a certain sound source to study boys' speed bumps to find inspiration [laughs]

The author is great, I think we can add Thor and Connor, as well as Chocolate and Vanilla to accompany Xiao Qiong. Xiao Qiong is always at home alone, so Thor can teach Xiao Qiong magic and protect her. Chocolate and Vanilla can also accompany Xiao Qiong. Come on, great author I hope the author can adopt it.

The writing is pretty good, but the author, please don't say that your writing is not good. There are some shortcomings that we didn't notice until you mentioned them. We found out that it affects the perception a bit. There are not many people writing in this type. As long as you write, someone will definitely read it. As long as you don't have problems with your three views, you can basically survive. Come on, author.

The writing is pretty good, there are some magical modifications, but they don't have much impact. It reads quite smoothly. There are many characters appearing, so it is not recommended to add characters randomly. If there are too many characters, it will be difficult to grasp the plot. It's easy to overlook a character, or simply marginalize it as a passer-by. If there is no outline, you can follow some plot developments of the original work and see what changes will be brought about by adding the protagonist. Personally, I don't think there are any poisonous points. There may have been some in the past, but the author has revised them a lot.

Come on, author, the writing is very nice, come on

Not bad, personally, I like it very much

Although the emotional scene is awkward, I can also tell that the author has put a lot of thought into it. Different people have different versions of Hamlet when they read the book. I will not comment on how good this book is. I can only say that the author should not be discouraged and keep working hard to lay the foundation for your next book. Come on, Oli! 🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭 Don't worry about the results of continuous updates for your first book. When writing the plot, you have to polish it carefully and accumulate experience. Don't rush the work because of quick updates. You can't just write this one book, right?

Although the boundaries are blurred, I can really read it without thinking very much. Whether it is inserting or anything else, it is still a bit difficult for a novice novelist, but this is one of the few small articles that can be updated all the time. I support it very much. 🙂