I'm Dying, Can You Please Leave Me Alone?

I'm so anxious, so anxious, so anxious, I want to see how sweet it is, wait for the update (๑•́ ₃ •̀๑)[Sending Hearts]

So far, it seems to be a good write-up, but I hope you can stick to the urban style and don't mix in things like cultivating immortals and magic.

It's too sweet. It's not like those novels that forcefully pile on sugar. This author has very good control over the amount of sugar. It's a bit sweet at the beginning, but the setting of Nan Keyao is added in the middle. It may be a bit unbearable, but if you get through this section, you will find that the back part is really very sweet.

The author writes very well, keep up the good work! !

The plot is very good. Although it is uncomfortable to watch, the plot with Xiao Youzi is still very good. Then the father still doesn't know about it. I also want to see the author's reaction when he writes that the father knows that the protagonist will not live long.

I really, really like watching [Send Hearts][Send Hearts]

Really, this book is really worth reading. I stayed up late at night to finish it. The author's writing style is very good and the characters are very rich. It is really amazing for people who like to read sadistic stories. You can really feel the sting when you read it (please be careful if you don't like sadistic stories). There is no big problem at the moment. Strictly speaking, it is a little bit of fantasy, but I think it makes the plot more colorful (I hope it doesn't have too much fantasy, otherwise it will definitely be counterproductive). I am really confused about the fate of the protagonist. On the one hand, if the protagonist is killed by a sword in the end, the book will definitely be able to reach a higher level (the number of readers will definitely drop sharply). On the other hand, if there is no sword in the end, it is definitely the ending I want to see most, but the book may not reach a higher level, and there will be no final finishing touch. However, given the author's level of writing, if he doesn't write well, it will at least be a masterpiece. Don't be fooled by the rating (at least it only scored 6.6 When I read it). This book is really good to read. The low rating is probably the reason why many people can't accept the abuse. You will definitely be pleasantly surprised after reading it. I still hope the author can finish this book well. I really like it. By the way, the author should update it soon (╬•̀Dis•́) Come on, big sister who writes abuse articlesヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~

To be honest, this book is really, really good to read. Normally this kind of fantasy would not be good to read, but when the hero and heroine lose their memory and meet again, even if they no longer remember each other, the physical feeling still exists. It's really beautiful (but the author is too short)

It's very good. There is no fantasy part before chapter 35. I think it's quite good. The subject matter is good, it's a little sadistic, and two people alone can redeem each other in both directions (it's more inclined for the female protagonist to heal the male protagonist). But I personally feel that the writing is a bit crooked. If I didn't get involved in fantasy and continued writing it as an urban romance, it would be a short and regretful story, which might be better. Of course, the setting of the female protagonist Nan Keyao is also very novel in this kind of novel (a style that does not involve fantasy), because other romance novels set in the real world rarely have this kind of setting, and it does not affect the previous perception. It makes people's eyes brighter when they first read it. This is purely a personal opinion, if you don't like it, please don't comment, thank you [Chigua] Author, your last book was like this too [laughing awkwardly]

I have read a lot of sad stories, and I don't know how many days and nights it made me feel so sad. The love that is so close is no match for the shortness of life. We knew from the beginning that this was a tragedy, but we still couldn't help but want to read on, imagining what if they would have a good ending? Perhaps the mythical meaning of this book is that it can have a less sad ending. After all, reality is hard enough. At least they can live together in another world, rushing towards the love and commitment that is not too late.

You know, this is the most real life I have ever seen in Tomato. The smoke inside and the depiction of old houses made me feel the smell of life. I will not speculate on the ending of this book, but I don't care whether it is a tragedy or a happy ending, because these daily descriptions and these living characters make me feel the hope and yearning in life. So this is enough. Its result is no longer important. What is important is its process, which makes people resonate.

Five-star praise, the plot is sadistic yet sweet, the male and female protagonists are devoted to each other, the writing is very strong and can control the readers' hearts, and it is more touching. So far, it has a bit of fantasy, but there is no intention to save the male protagonist. I think it is very good. There are currently two guesses about the ending: one is an open ending in which the male protagonist dies in the end but leaves room for the reader's imagination, and the other is that according to the current fantasy content, he may live in a dream. All in all, I can't fault this book. It's excellent and the content is "beautiful". I highly recommend it. Adding a little bit of self-feeling can be a bit boring for a long time

After a brief review, the plot is very touching, but the ending is definitely not perfect. After four months, I would make a bold guess, either the heroine would sacrifice her life to save it, or the hero would die and the girl would die in love and get lost in the dream. So it must be very sharp

A small story in the city, with great emotions. The small plot between the male and female protagonists shows their yearning for freedom and love, but they have an unreachable shore. The ending of the story is very sharp, but it is also a climax. Simply put, a masterpiece

This book resonated a lot with me. First of all, in terms of character, the character of the protagonist of this article can be said to be completely consistent with the contemporary children who live between two families. Secondly, the plot of the article has ups and downs and is very exciting.

It's very nice to read. There are no knives in the whole book. It's very relaxing. I recommend reading it with the song "A Minute For The End". It's also relaxing and enjoyable. When you're in a good mood, you can just take off after reading it~~

It's a very good novel. It came from a tweet from a certain voice. I initially read it as a "local dog" novel. I was surprised when I saw some magical elements in the middle, because in my impression, a tweet from a certain voice is not so high-end. The more I read it, the more unique this book becomes. He particularly catches the readers' attention and makes them empathize. It took me a long time to read the book back and forth, but every teardrop made me cry. It was really touching. The story of Xiaoyouzi and Jiang Qingci made me feel a lot. I sincerely hope that this good work will be seen by more people and even published in the future, but forget it in the form of a film and television... [Face-covering] [face-covering] [face-covering]

There is a bit of a twist at the back, but the plot is very good. Although some words are wrongly written, it does not have much impact on the plot. I also hope that the author can speed up the update speed. School starts today. I hope that when I come back from the holiday, I can see the author's new updated content, but don't be exhausted. My eyes were filled with tears, and I couldn't help but think about it.

It is recommended to watch it late at night and feel the darkness around you and the tranquility of the night. Watch alone. I also laughed very happily [almost cried]

When I first read it, I wasn't going to give it five stars, because in the early stages it was completely along the lines of a cool novel, and only in the middle and later stages did it feel like a sadistic novel. Later on, the writing became very good, especially the ending, which was perfect and very touching.

I think it can be considered a relatively good writing style among Tomato🍅.

After reading a few chapters, I can only admire it. The characterization is very high-level, the writing is so beautiful that it doesn't feel pretentious, and the concise writing can make people feel emotionally connected. When I read it alone, every line revealed sadness, just like the last summer flowers blooming brilliantly, leaving only the sadness of fallen leaves. There is always only sadness and a slight sadness in the plot, but the text reverses the contrast between sadness and sadness, so that the meaning of sadness is always greater than the emotion of sadness. Maybe it's because the description of sadness is not too detailed, because the scars of the injury are so obvious.

The plot depicts details and the writing is very good. It would be great if it could be changed into an anime. Unfortunately, it is unlikely. The plot is slightly similar, but it is really well written and has a good sense of immersion. It is the best I have seen in recent times. I hope it can continue and not end. [Blow kiss]

Overall, it's good. The emotional grasp is relatively delicate, and the logic is basically self-consistent. The writing style needs to be improved, mainly because it repeats a lot of words just to keep up with the number of words. The plot design is very good, and the plot is very solid to watch. However, there is still a lot of room for improvement, because the whole story is very straightforward and there is no room for twists and turns. It has reached the point where it is difficult to end without writing the male protagonist to death. If you can keep interspersing in the middle and hoping to jump left and right and finally be killed in one slash, the drama should be as high as five or six floors.

The author's writing style is very good. The whole book can be described as a "sugar knife". The sweetness in the front is really sweet, and there is no deliberate description of the interaction between the male and female protagonists in order to create "sweetness". Their daily interactions and "sweetness" are all natural; the knife in the back is also a real knife. It can be said that it is really tear-jerking. The male protagonist is gentle by nature but his fiery heart is already riddled with holes. When he knows that he will not live long, his heart has been tortured. The cold darkness is filled with the appearance of the innocent, lovely, lively and cheerful heroine, who shines warm sunshine into his cold heart; there are some fantasy elements in the text, but it is not inconsistent at all. The plot is well connected. At the end, the male protagonist is indeed dead, and later the existence of the other side of the dead is mentioned. The male and female protagonists redeem each other and reunite in another world to fall in love at the end. How can such an ending not be bad?

A good book, worth recommending. The beginning and end of this book reminded me of the story of another book, also a sword novel. The heroine is called Little Butterfly. The author, tell me, is this also your book? Hum.

The content of the work is very close to reality, and people will be attracted by the content of the work unconsciously, and it also affects people's true feelings, so I think this work is very good and worth watching.

In fact, this is a sweet article [laughing]. There are a lot of elements integrated, and some plot transitions are a bit abrupt, but the logic is self-consistent, which is very worthy of praise. The last point should be mentioned, this is actually a sweet article [laughing]

It can be said that the writing style of this article is not bad, and the content is also good. I just hope that the author will not make the male protagonist come alive. The main male protagonist is gone, leaving a little regret for the article. Finally, in the next life, the female protagonist is not a fairy, and the male protagonist is not sick. They are just ordinary people. They met each other in a park and smiled, and then finished the whole article. In this way, the article feels perfect. Also, the magical place is a bit off.

There are depressing parts, but there are also beautiful parts. It will not only be sad, but also gratifying when watching it. I hope that everyone will not live like the stupid kid in the book, and that the final ending will not be so sad.