There is no China after Yashan. From then on, the land of China was destroyed and the Han family was cut off.
A modern soul returned to the Southern Song Dynasty and appeared on the eve of the Battle of Yashan.
He was appointed at a critical moment and became the last Privy Councilor of the Song Dynasty.
Although the general trend of the world is difficult to change, it finally left a little spark for Chinese civilization.
One day, a single spark can start a prairie fire...
Reader comments
Yashan was defeated in the naval battle,
Culture will be disrupted.
Privy Council of the Song Dynasty,
Jing Yuanyong fought for the lead.
Let's save the Queen Mother first.
He also occupied Quanzhou.
Afterwards Penghu Island,
Take control of Ryukyu again.
Go north to fight Korea,
Get the big ocean ship.
I will try to save the country again.
Everything goes naturally!
@ Calm @
I have read the latest chapter (Chapter 51), and overall it is quite good - the main line is clear, the positioning is clear, and the rhythm is appropriate, but there are also potential points minus points.
[Spoiler warning below]
1. The main line is clear - from escape to stability to layout of counterattack. The background is the late Song Dynasty. In the plot, escape has been achieved. The escape stage has ended and a counterattack has begun. Adopting a multi-line narrative, and interspersing the main plot with a side perspective like Wen Tianxiang's, this alone is better than countless articles where "the whole world revolves around the protagonist, and other people are only written to lick the protagonist [laughs awkwardly]".
2. Clear positioning. On the one hand, it is the title positioning, which avoids outlandish and exaggerated titles such as "Start" and "Shock". On the other hand is the role positioning, which is essentially a powerful minister. There really aren't many stories about powerful officials in male videos (one is that it's true that it's better to be an emperor, which is understandable. [Sneaky laugh] There's another one that's appreciated by the rulers and can just keep up with technology and "not participate" in court struggles. They're just patent plunderers). Being able to read articles from the perspective of powerful officials is like picking up a unique shell on the vast beach.
3. The rhythm is appropriate. On the one hand, I am not against traveling through Wenpan technology, but I have already tasted enough of the routine of "refined salt, wine making, and blast furnace iron making". Even if the protagonist of this article does this later, it is not unacceptable to continue to maintain a step-by-step, steady and steady style. Some authors describe science and technology as if God created the world, and they can get whatever they want. On the other hand, or the hidden danger point (Chapter 50), is the relationship between men and women. If this is a small episode, the meaning is unclear; if this is a foreshadowing, then—fuck is she your aunt? ! Civil strife is one of the most heinous crimes! [Punch hard]
Whether it's superfluous or contrary to human ethics, it's all written down. I can't agree with it, so it's regarded as a deduction.
Who would have thought that it would end suddenly, but it must have a beginning and an end. It is a rare male channel with orthodox stories about powerful officials, and it has been praised by all stars.
But I still have reservations about my aunt. This foreshadowing involves a heinous crime, and there is no one to blame for being "caught in pigtails." I can't say without a follow-up, I just feel that the foreshadowing is buried as if it is eager to be dug up and exploded later, giving people the feeling that if it is not exploded, it will be buried in vain.
Judging from the outline released in the final chapter, the idea of the powerful minister is right. Some people have land, military and wealth, and you have achieved this level. To a certain extent, the emperor is just a title. There is no need to discuss it. Don't dwell on this issue. It is completely fine to end the article after unification.
I can't say what I haven't written yet, but I'll mention it anyway: male videos, but articles about powerful ministers; the love between children should not be mentioned in one stroke, but it should not be written too much. No matter how much you love or love, it is still a small family. The authority of powerful ministers is not as stable as that of the emperor. It is "everyone" who bases his life on his own foundation and plans the layout. If you really want to create a lasting relationship between your children, switching to a female channel is suitable. (Well, Liu Bei married Sun Shangxiang just for fun, but he really wanted to see Xiang Jingrubin behave like a guest when he left the house and turned right to the red building)
Very beautiful and worth recommending
Very good, I hope the author keeps it up.
A piece of history can tell a different story...
The author looks for materials...🉐Understand each storyline... And find loopholes... Only then can he continue writing✍🏻Follow-up or extra chapter
The follow-up will be an extra chapter😎
There is no existence in the world after rebirth. This does not prevent readers from reading the plot of the book voluntarily. The book is deliberately readable.
This is the first time I have read a novel about the Battle of Yashan. I hope it will be well written.
Yashan was defeated in the naval battle, Culture will be disrupted. Privy Council of the Song Dynasty, Jing Yuanyong fought for the lead. Let's save the Queen Mother first. He also occupied Quanzhou. Afterwards Penghu Island, Take control of Ryukyu again. Go north to fight Korea, Get the big ocean ship. I will try to save the country again. Everything goes naturally! @ Calm @
I have read the latest chapter (Chapter 51), and overall it is quite good - the main line is clear, the positioning is clear, and the rhythm is appropriate, but there are also potential points minus points. [Spoiler warning below] 1. The main line is clear - from escape to stability to layout of counterattack. The background is the late Song Dynasty. In the plot, escape has been achieved. The escape stage has ended and a counterattack has begun. Adopting a multi-line narrative, and interspersing the main plot with a side perspective like Wen Tianxiang's, this alone is better than countless articles where "the whole world revolves around the protagonist, and other people are only written to lick the protagonist [laughs awkwardly]". 2. Clear positioning. On the one hand, it is the title positioning, which avoids outlandish and exaggerated titles such as "Start" and "Shock". On the other hand is the role positioning, which is essentially a powerful minister. There really aren't many stories about powerful officials in male videos (one is that it's true that it's better to be an emperor, which is understandable. [Sneaky laugh] There's another one that's appreciated by the rulers and can just keep up with technology and "not participate" in court struggles. They're just patent plunderers). Being able to read articles from the perspective of powerful officials is like picking up a unique shell on the vast beach. 3. The rhythm is appropriate. On the one hand, I am not against traveling through Wenpan technology, but I have already tasted enough of the routine of "refined salt, wine making, and blast furnace iron making". Even if the protagonist of this article does this later, it is not unacceptable to continue to maintain a step-by-step, steady and steady style. Some authors describe science and technology as if God created the world, and they can get whatever they want. On the other hand, or the hidden danger point (Chapter 50), is the relationship between men and women. If this is a small episode, the meaning is unclear; if this is a foreshadowing, then—fuck is she your aunt? ! Civil strife is one of the most heinous crimes! [Punch hard] Whether it's superfluous or contrary to human ethics, it's all written down. I can't agree with it, so it's regarded as a deduction. Who would have thought that it would end suddenly, but it must have a beginning and an end. It is a rare male channel with orthodox stories about powerful officials, and it has been praised by all stars. But I still have reservations about my aunt. This foreshadowing involves a heinous crime, and there is no one to blame for being "caught in pigtails." I can't say without a follow-up, I just feel that the foreshadowing is buried as if it is eager to be dug up and exploded later, giving people the feeling that if it is not exploded, it will be buried in vain. Judging from the outline released in the final chapter, the idea of the powerful minister is right. Some people have land, military and wealth, and you have achieved this level. To a certain extent, the emperor is just a title. There is no need to discuss it. Don't dwell on this issue. It is completely fine to end the article after unification. I can't say what I haven't written yet, but I'll mention it anyway: male videos, but articles about powerful ministers; the love between children should not be mentioned in one stroke, but it should not be written too much. No matter how much you love or love, it is still a small family. The authority of powerful ministers is not as stable as that of the emperor. It is "everyone" who bases his life on his own foundation and plans the layout. If you really want to create a lasting relationship between your children, switching to a female channel is suitable. (Well, Liu Bei married Sun Shangxiang just for fun, but he really wanted to see Xiang Jingrubin behave like a guest when he left the house and turned right to the red building)
Very beautiful and worth recommending
Very good, I hope the author keeps it up.
A piece of history can tell a different story... The author looks for materials...🉐Understand each storyline... And find loopholes... Only then can he continue writing✍🏻Follow-up or extra chapter The follow-up will be an extra chapter😎
There is no existence in the world after rebirth. This does not prevent readers from reading the plot of the book voluntarily. The book is deliberately readable.
This is the first time I have read a novel about the Battle of Yashan. I hope it will be well written.