There's Something Wrong with You, the Villain in Quick Time Travel

I actually quite like this book, but I kind of hated the first world. Why do so many men fall in love with the female protagonist at first sight? Especially the mermaid, I was completely confused. Although there is a rule that those who see the mermaid body must marry or get married, it always feels like a fascinating trend to me. There is also a second world. Although the second world has only been updated for 15 chapters, I like the second small world very much. Even if the original male protagonist and the current male protagonist fall in love with the female protagonist, is it too sudden? Even if they are all in darkness, it is impossible for them to be interested in someone so quickly, especially the current male protagonist. His favorability towards other people is below 20%, and the original male protagonist's favorability towards other people is also below 30%, so I don't understand a little bit. Sure enough, sweet pet stories really can't use their brains! ! ! I think someone should have discovered it too, right? Around Chapter 38 of the first world, it felt like the author didn't want to write about this world anymore and just started fast forwarding. . I hope you can write more, at least slower, it's too fast and I can't keep up😭. Please update a lot. I specially gave you a five-star review.

My family understands that although it is only one world, it has all the necessary logic, and the characters are also very three-dimensional, so you can enter with confidence! ! !

Well said on the first floor! ! ! Supplement: And it was love at first sight! Sweet juice! ! God, I watched it again, why did I give it five stars before? . What a boring plot, too long and boring, the tag of love at first sight is useless, and the emotional line is simply dragged out.

Female protagonist: Su Cha Male protagonist: Raymond Ross (Rule of Order) is similar to Tiandao. The female protagonist is actually a person who survives in the world. The male protagonist happens to be born at the same time as the female protagonist. Then the male protagonist feels the mood, and then raises the female protagonist, which is a natural life like modern people. The male protagonist protects her silently, but the main system created later betrays the idea. The system under him is also the female protagonist's system. Just like what we call the heroine's death, and then let that system take her to do tasks and gain strength. Then the main system wants to fight against the male protagonist in this way. This is the background story of this novel. Generally speaking, most of the male protagonists have planned things for a long time, while the female protagonist is ignorant in the early stage and lets nature take its course in the later stage. It is definitely a sweet article, not cruel or toxic (most people think), so feel free to read it. [Like][Like][Like][Love]

The author's writing style is quite good However, there is a slight lack in describing the emotional lines between men and women, resulting in the male protagonist having less scenes and not as many scenes as some of the male supporting actors. I have a small suggestion. If it doesn't work, just write a story with a big female protagonist. Anyway, it's the kind of story that doesn't require a lot of love or a male protagonist. Maybe it will be better [like][like][like] And not all quick travel must be conquered. The author can try to do tasks that don't involve emotional strategies.

Sweet pets are not cruel. The first three small worlds are very different from the host's personality. Starting from the counselor world, the host will inherit some of the characteristics of the original one. In addition, the host will absorb the power of thunder, which will change a lot. The host in the school bully world will actually become stupid because he is a bad student. It will take half a year to slowly get better. The confession that the host said he prepared for his lover is gone. The last small world is quite sudden. The host's lover suddenly awakens to the master's personality and ends everything. The ending is full of flowers. After each small world is together, a world ends. There is basically no process of married life, and the world is a bit small.

It's a love at first sight type, from playing a vicious female supporting role to snatching the opportunity of the female protagonist, the male protagonist basically falls in love at first sight, which is very sweet. The only drawback may be that the ending is abrupt. All the small worlds are turned on at 100 times speed after being put together. A few sentences take a lifetime. The ending of the novel is also very hasty. The setting of the last world is very good, but it is cut off in the middle. I just go to the main body and finish the whole story in a few times [face covering]

Well, this book is very good. There are few books that I can read without reading a chapter. I quite like the Elf King. I really feel that he is very protective.

It's good-looking, I like the first world the most, and half of the second world. The male protagonist's favorable impression of the female protagonist is 60%, and the author also wrote that the male protagonist is just a gadget that is better than ordinary people. Although I know this is just a setting, but seeing how good the male protagonist is to the female protagonist, and the female protagonist knowing that the male protagonist is just a gadget to her makes me feel very disconnected. And the male protagonist in the third world has memories. I originally skipped the second one because it gave me a too severe sense of separation. I didn't expect that the third world would feel like this. It's very strange. Maybe it's just my personal opinion. Don't criticize me.

No, author, it's really easy to get beaten if you do this. The Omega world hasn't been completely completed yet, and you haven't introduced to him what kind of order that world is. Uuuuuuu(┯_┯) It's so unfair, isn't it? <(ToT)> The ending was unexpected [crying][crying]

It's so good, but the author wrote too few chapters and I didn't finish reading enough. It's already the finale. I'm really sad, but I'm still very happy to see that the author of this novel is working hard to publish a book. [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

Jujuju is really good-looking, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhht but I can't get enough of it. Chacha loves it so much. The author has created a very nice character. It's really a heartfelt review. I was hooked the first time I watched it. I watched it for more than five hours and couldn't get enough. I hope there will be a sequel. Jujuju is really good-looking [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

Not bad, the characters in each world are very vivid and vivid. The story line of each world is also very good, but the ending is a bit rushed. Some worlds end and the next world is not realized yet. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is very sweet. The male protagonist fell in love with the female protagonist at first sight.

It was pretty good, but the ending felt a little sloppy or a little abrupt. I quite like the heroine's character, especially the master's plane, the apocalyptic plane, and the counselor's plane. These three planes are my favorite. Especially the plane thief in the last days is interesting and funny.

Why are you doing this to me? Two books are already there. When I was addicted to reading it, it was gone. Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo,, maybe, I that's the author, I'm so crazy, please update as soon as possible.

The author is so grateful✌︎( ᐛ )✌︎

The last world, I can't understand it when I look at the catalog. Can anyone tell me about it? Because I was still reading the previous part, and I wanted to let nature take its course. Then I wanted to know, what is the last world?

It looks good, but if you don't like it, you can change it to a smaller world [I learned] [Start]

Good, good, very good. I highly recommend reading it. The first two are really very well written, but the latter two seem a bit watery, but they are still very interesting. Come and read them all. Come and read them.

It's really good-looking. I haven't seen such good-looking quick wear for a long time. The character has a good personality, the kind that doesn't have the heart of a holy mother.

I give you five stars, can you update it quickly? The author is great

It's pretty good, but it's a bit short and has no extras.

The heroine is so silly and adorable!

The Lord of Order and Rules ✘His little bug, wonderful, sweet love, the female protagonist is transparent, intelligent and spiritual, and the male protagonist is possessive and powerful

It's pretty good-looking, it's my type [laughs]

It's so good-looking [Admired] I love it in every aspect, the male protagonist really dotes on the female protagonist, it's so sweet. It's just that the ending of the first plane was a bit rushed, and the last plane was too short, making it unsatisfactory [crying]

Hope there will be a follow-up. Real!

It's not bad. The male protagonist is the kind of person who can do it without any money. The female protagonist is delicate and soft.

It's okay. The last world setting is quite novel. The male protagonist also loves the female protagonist, but she is a bit strong and the female is weak. At first, the female protagonist was said to be transparent and pure in mind. Later, a setting was added (she became cold or stupid due to the influence of the original protagonist), which is a bit conflicting. And that's it! Every world comes to an abrupt end!

I like the Elf King the most. Who knows, that kind of care from elders for children really kills me [Adoration][Adoration] But the ending is still too sloppy