Star Vault: Play as Ah Ren and Drive to the Rebirth Hall in Another World
星穹：扮演阿刃在异世界开往生堂
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Looking for a Book About Bengtie Acting and National Destiny!
I want to read a book similar to "Star Rail National Destiny: Becoming Invincible from Playing Jing Yuanyuan".
Is There Any Ability System from Beng Tie's Book?
I want to read a book similar to "Summoning Moon Drinking Lord at the Beginning, Crazy Criticizing the Male God for Being Jealous and Crazy". No matter it's the national destiny or anything else, it's best to have your own world view and don't follow the main line! No weird rules!
There Is No Good Article to Argue About the National Destiny of Star Railway.
I want to read a book similar to "Star Rail National Destiny: Becoming Invincible from Playing Jing Yuanyuan".
I'm Looking for a Book About Ah Ren. I Feel Like No One Has Written This One. Anyway, I'm Looking for Something with an Edge.
As long as there is a blade that does not break the character o(＊＾▽＾＊)o♪
A Fanfic That Randomly Combines Blade, Dan Heng, and Jing Yuan, Preferably All Three Together.
If there is no such thing, is there anyone out there who can write a book?
Do You Have Any Books by Aren?
The Blade in the Star Dome Railway
Are There Any Fanfics Where the Main Character Is Bentie Aren?
I'm addicted to Ahren😍
Ying Xing! Have a Knife! Don't Push Me for a Role! I Just Want to Watch Ying Xing's
I would like to read a book similar to "Star Railroad: Becoming a Automobile Character is the Forger".
Are There Any Books in Which the Main Character Is Aren Himself? (Don't Act!)
Don't act! Don't act! Don't act! Say important things three times! I play literature! ! !
Well, two stars, not according to the tradition, the writing is not good, and the prequel does not have the taste of writing. Although there is the Happy Star God as an adjustment, it seems to give people a somewhat forced taste. The plot is a bit long. Maybe some brothers and sisters don't want to give it. I am Buddha. Well, I will watch more who are better than me. The ultimate work, specially sourced from the material. In addition, brothers and sisters who like my work, if you see this book review, don't be angry. I am just stating the facts. I know how much I weigh. I will try to drive low and walk high. Try my best. If it doesn't work, it should be okay to drive low and walk flat.
The author's writing skills need to be improved greatly. The previous part was supposed to reflect the bond between family members, but I didn't feel anything when I read it [facepalm]. And what is the use of that system besides controlling the demonic body? There are still so many roles. It feels like there are a lot of unnecessary plots. The description is not detailed and the past chapter 19 of the Past Life Hall just opens the door. Just a personal opinion for reference only. Finally, the author gives a big boost (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡
To be honest, it's quite blurry to read. The main plot and branch plots are very vague. It's awkward to write and just read.
Your writing is not bad, but it is too messy. If you tidy it up, your book will become very good. I will check later to see if it will be changed to five stars.