Time-Traveling Immortality Game: King Juan Becomes a Heartthrob

Super, super, super pretty! I'm currently reading Chapter 18, so I'll give you my personal opinion! First of all, it is a game similar to the 4th Natural Disaster [because the player entered it from behind at the beginning]. The character development of Luo Bao is really great! The settings also really impressed me! Who can resist a powerful roll king? (I admit that I am strong) [Although I am currently in the outer sect, I am very talented, okay?] Then, I also like the direction of the plot very much! One interesting game mission after another, the connection is smooth! Super top, okay? The writing feels very good too! The most important thing is that a new book has just been released! When it becomes popular, I will be a long-time fan! Let me mark it first. Don't forget my name when the time comes! Then there are those senior sisters, senior brothers and Luobao friends. Each of their settings is very good, different and delicious! What's the matter with every couple having a good fight? (I can't choose, I like them all) Hope there will be more updates! It's so beautiful, it's not enough to watch! [Daily Confession] I love you! *^O^* Well, it is probably the plot setting of heartthrob, asura field, bg, strong woman, cultivating immortals, and group portraits. I am brainless. I hope there will be no cp in the main text and 1v1 in the extra chapter. Oh my God, I'm done reading this! ! ! The part about the competition at the outer gate was really well written! When I was watching it at that time, I kept saying, is this God? (Personal feeling) It's too strong, and the writing is really good [except for the occasional mixing of third person and first person, and a few small details errors] It really doesn't look like a new author! ! ! But I felt a little confused when I watched that part. I didn't understand why the cat demon was Luo Bao? And why do a lot of people know him and feel grudges against him? Waiting for questions, I hope you can explain it by then (it may be that I read too quickly and didn't read carefully) [But the capital letters are really awesome! Can you update it soon? I finished reading it in one go, it's so beautiful! It's amazing, it's awesome, I really like it, please update it quickly, it's not enough! But I can't stand the people in Luobao's group o>_<o (Luobao was a little speechless in that part, and I felt a little aggrieved after watching it) But finally, congratulations to Luo Bao for winning the first place in the outer competition! ! ! Oh my god, and I feel that every pair is very compatible, and every character has a really good personality or setting! ! ! The description techniques are also very powerful [I really like Luo Bao's intelligence and talent, so strong! I hope the heroine can become very powerful in the future and conquer the world! Haha (just kidding, but I really hope to be number one in the world) I just want to be the strongest and grow up slowly! Become stronger, career! Currently standing in admiration! ! ! It's so sweet. Please give them more interaction. Woo hoo, can we let our Qingyue come to the table for dinner? ! I am looking forward to the next plot more and more! Look at me! Looks familiar to me! @Please return*^O^*

Very good, it is a heartthrob [admiration]. The heroine is very cute and sober and smart, and the male characters also have their own merits. I just don't know if it's due to the illusion. I feel that the plot is a bit confusing. The scenes switch quickly but there is no dividing line. Sometimes I look confused [laughing and crying] but I still like the overall setting [like]

It's very beautiful, the conflicts are set up very naturally, each character is written with characteristics, everyone in the team can distinguish them clearly, the heroine is very good, the author feels like a novice [face covering] It doesn't matter if there are some small problems, the writing is good, the brothers are not always laughing, everyone has their own characteristics, and there is no description of appearance, just through what the characters do and say Qi distinguishes everyone, it is not just a set of characters, the senior brothers are not all gentle, the writing is really good, the characters are really well written, there is no personality design, super praise, no fox-type senior brother, no arrogant senior sister, but diversified tasks, how this character is shown through plot and action to let readers feel it, I really like this kind of character description, good book! ! ! ! It's really rare that everyone has their own characteristics. The most important thing is that the plot is very reasonable. The heroine does not directly save the weak. The bullied people also have their own confidence and are not just inferior and pitiful. Everyone is diverse and not just stereotyped. The heroine helps people without describing those people too much. The pitiful heroine is so powerful, just like a mediocre hero who takes action when encountering trouble. The heroine is also very gentle, leaving a note asking Zhang to take good care of the mother and daughter. It does not highlight the kindness and beauty of the heroine, but it is shown through the simple act of the heroine drawing a sword to help. It is really well written! ! ! ! ! It's rare to see such a natural book. I really like everyone in it. The characters are really diverse and not just stereotyped. Even the villains are so vivid. They are not just pitiful and dark, and there are no brainless villains. Everyone's joys, anger, sorrows and joys are written. Jealousy. Firstly, this is well written and makes people hate the very successful villain character. Secondly, I like the plot. Every step is so reasonable and natural. Except for the systematic time travel at the beginning that needs to be explained, the plot is really natural and I like it.

So pretty. . . Thank you to the country, thank you to the party, thank you to your classmates, thank you to your teachers, thank you to hydrogen, thank you to helium, thank you to lithium, thank you to beryllium, thank you to boron, thank you to carbon, thank you to nitrogen, thank you to oxygen, thank you to fluorine, thank you to neon, thank you to sodium, thank you to magnesium, thank you to aluminum, thank you to silicon, thank you to phosphorus, thank you to sulfur, thank you to chlorine.

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It's beautiful [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] But the only drawback is that there are too many missing words and typos, some expressions are not very clear, and the person's pronoun is often wrong. It is best to use the third person, or directly call the name [thinking] [thinking] The author must continue to work hard [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]

The plot is quite novel, the heroine is indeed the well-deserved king of scrolls, and she has been focusing on completing tasks. The mission-style plot is very interesting, but maybe the writing is not good enough, and many of the plots described feel confusing. In fact, in terms of the emotional line, I don't particularly like it. After watching it, it gives people a very light feeling, that is, the fourth natural disaster has come, and they are treated as game characters. After watching it, I did not have any special deep feelings for the characters in it.

Wow, why is it so beautiful! I found it at night. I read half of it and then went to bed. When I woke up in the morning, I couldn't wait to continue reading it. I read the latest chapter in one breath. It's such a good article that I can't resist. I'm so happy [send my heart] [send my heart] [love]

I like this book very much. It's different from the beginning of most immortal novels. It's also very interesting. The counter-routine is so delicious... But not many people read it. Who understands the despair I feel when I read an immortal product and found out that this book is too cold? Goddess, come on, more leg hair will always be with you!

So far it looks good, there is no weird plot, but some plots feel like they are not very clearly written and then end, and then some small nodes are not connected very well, and I am already in another scene before I realize it, but it is one of the few tomato articles that I can read. I look forward to it [Love]

Give yourself a five-star encouragement! ! !

This book is very novel about the heroine's time travel, which made me very interested, and the heroine's image is also quite good. She is strong enough to face difficulties when encountering them. I look forward to the following plots. Great support for the author💪

Hmm, the writing style is a bit jerky, it's probably a novice subject matter, but it's quite novel, so I'll give it some support.

It's so good. I recommend updating 9999999999 chapters in one day.

The big letters are really beautiful! ! ! ! ! !

The single arrow is so delicious. The author has updated it slowly.

Fair enough, give me some encouragement.

I think it's good so far

It looks good but I haven't seen it yet. I'll ask the author later who is the male protagonist of Shura Field.

In fact, it was removed from the bookshelf at that time because the author stopped updating, but now I continue to follow it, and recently I found it again when I was looking for novels. ! Ah ah ah, the author is updating every day now [laughs][laughs][laughs]

It's really good-looking. Trust me. Finally, the author updates! ! !

The plot is interesting, the heroine is super charming, and the men who appear have different sexual characteristics [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

Well, this book is very good! The author is very creative and imaginative, I like it very much. Come on, work hard to update!

Great reading, written naturally and calmly

Looks good, I thought it was the same old trick

Although I didn't understand some parts, it's quite beautiful [Sending my heart]

This player is cool, but the author is too short [crying] [crying] [crying] It's not enough to watch qwq

I finished the first volume in one night. The first volume is a bit of a stream of consciousness, and it may be a bit foggy. Anyway, I will give a five-star review, and I will review the content after reading it.

I think it's pretty good, it's pretty good-looking, keep it up ✊

It's really good to watch, but the teacher is a little slow in updating it. He won't update it intermittently. The teacher will update it.