More Children, More Blessings: A Prison Guard Among the Whale Clan

First! The opening is very good and very attractive. It's just that the more I read, the more abstract it becomes. Rebirth, summoning players, various system roles, and starting from tens of thousands of words, it deviates from the theme of the book title and introduction. As of the latest chapter, it has nothing to do with having many children and many blessings. You can just change to other systems to complete what the protagonist's plot needs so far. In this case, what is the meaning of having many children and many blessings? Now it's all foreshadowing, making me think that the protagonist has nothing to do with everything in this world. The protagonist doesn't know anything, doesn't participate in anything, and then just catches others writing. I'm very confused, why don't we use the characteristics of the protagonist to develop the world view bit by bit, but instead write it out in a way that has no connection with the protagonist. Isn't the point of a novel for readers to read, to allow them to immerse themselves, take part in it, and work with the protagonist to solve puzzles and obtain the truth? The more I look at it, the more headache I get. Why can't Bei Ming and the Tianwai personnel be used as a foreshadowing? For example: the protagonist learns about Beiming's strangeness through Beiyu, or the protagonist happens to see it in the main hall. And it is precisely because this matter is important that Bei Ming's affected emotions can be accidentally displayed in front of outsiders. In addition, the villain Reborn introduces another protagonist of the system. This character can be completely set up so that the protagonist is confused as to why the owner of the villain system is looking for him and what kind of abilities he has, laying the groundwork for the reader to have a desire to find out. Then, Wang Huanyun obtained the villain system and Qin Yang, the reborn player in the game. What is the current relationship between these two people and the protagonist? The scenes between the two of them do not involve the protagonists at all, which leaves readers with no choice but to read the story. I felt sick as soon as I saw Wang Huanyun. I knew that I would lose sight of the protagonist as soon as I saw him. The protagonist might simply disappear for a chapter or two. Moreover, since the appearance of Wang Huanyun, this book has become less exciting. It is all bland foreshadowing, with no beginnings or transitions. This makes me feel confused. I can't see the protagonist in the book, and there are only plots that have nothing to do with the protagonist. Why should I read this book? Finally, the biggest poisonous point is that the appearance of other people picking up girls in the harem novel is really abstract, which does not mean that other characters cannot pick up girls. It's just that your theme is "Many Children and Blessings." Isn't the cool part of "Many Children and Blessings" a high-quality mother body being obtained by the protagonist? If you spend more pen and ink, you can write a story about the two blue whales Wang Huanyun pua: the protagonist is involved in this incident, learns Wang Huanyun's intentions, and then obstructs it, reveals Wang Huanyun's face in front of the two women, changes the two whales' favor, and then accepts the child. And it can also complement Bei Ming's logic in promoting this event. For example: Bei Ming's original intention was to let the whale people see humans clearly, but it just happened that the protagonist intervened, causing the two mothers to take advantage of the protagonist. If that's the case, wouldn't it be a cool point? But, no. The opening was originally novel and quite attractive. It's just that as a book about having many children and many blessings, the theme ends with the Peacock Sisters. The rest of the latest chapter doesn't have any interesting points about the theme of having many children and many blessings. It doesn't even have a small interesting point to pave the way for the background of the world. It's as bland as water. It's disgusting to watch. Personally, I suggest you take a look at the frameworks of "Super Mechanic" and "Destined Villain". One is dealing with the stars and the universe, and the other is dealing with multi-system characters. The key to attracting readers is to formulate questions bit by bit and then solve them.

I still have to praise it, although the writing is generally a bit jumpy, but overall, I think it is for my taste and the level of combat power is a bit low 😂 Myth-level combat power is indeed a bit low. Luo Feng, who went out to switch to Devouring, has already become a world lord and can kill countless such myths.

What do you say? Come on, author! This novel is a good one. It's a bit small, not outrageous but pretty good. The writing is bland, but a little humorous. It's very charming and the logic is clear. Let's take a group portrait. The descriptions of each character's personality are very distinctive. Finally, it's also good to post some illustrations of beautiful women occasionally. Please update more. Come on. Let me add one more thing. The author is probably a novice. I should try my best to praise the little white article so as not to stop writing. I saw the comments and showed mercy. Anyway, I can still read it. I like it very much.

I think there can be more processes, sounds, movements, images

The rest of the story is good, but it's uncomfortable for the protagonist to have others know whatever he's thinking.

I have been writing other things, other worlds and so on, and Wang Huanyun

There are currently no poisonous points, the IQ is online, and it is a good book.

So pretty! This book is really wonderful! I won't see you regret it for the rest of your life! (It's five cents a piece, remember to delete everything in the brackets, otherwise you won't be paid!)

Very pretty,

Beautiful and interesting