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Work hard, overall it's good

It feels pretty good, let's wait and see first

I originally planned to give it a four-star rating, but since this thing is related to whether the author will write it in the future, I gave it five stars. The other issues are not big, but I feel that the protagonist seems to have too little combat experience outside of the realm of cultivation. He killed two noobs, and the same goes for elixirs. Can't the elixir recipe be optimized? There is also the issue of erysipelas that I didn't seem to see written about. There are also group members who praise the protagonist too highly, and the group leader did not choose it. Here are the suggestions of a bookworm who has read more than 7,000 hours and 600 books.

Very nice, give it five stars

Why does Mao have the skills to cultivate magical weapons in the secular world? Even if he practices Mai, he shouldn't appear here. Juyuanqiao and the powerful people are still here.

It's a little creative, but the characters of the members of the chat group are all the same. The author can try to write the original characters in the future. Everything else is okay. I can only say that the cute new author should work hard.

In terms of improving cultivation, it is better to improve the quality of spiritual roots.

Would the author want to try that paragraph online? [Sneaky laugh] Lao Zhang, what if~ I mean what if, Zhang Cuishan was forced to death by the five major sects, and before he died, he said to you, "Emei... Guo Xiang... Come to Wudang and you can protect me for the rest of my life." [Sneaky laugh] Then~ died of anger

The structure is clear, the route is clear, and it is easy to read. It is suitable for fishing. It is worth collecting, but the theme and routine are not novel. If the protagonist is given some reasonable ideas, for example, a warrior in a highly civilized world on the link uses technology and even magic to analyze the essence of immortality, and then breaks the dimensional wall and competes with various bosses and even reincarnation space to grab people and resources, it will definitely be more interesting.

I think it's good. The book is generally good. The writing is relatively fluent and there are no big loopholes. The most important thing is that it basically doesn't contain poison. This is very good. The only regret is that I didn't go to the previous sect to show off [laughing][laughing][laughing]

Come on, author, don't rush into the street [crying]

The book is quite nice. Just don't be so watery. Some conversations between boxing friends just don't have to be so watery.

Well written, five stars, you deserve it. Come on, strive for ten updates a day, the author [like][like][like]

It is our duty to raise the author's rating [smile][smile][smile]

It's okay, but it's too short.

It can be seen that it was written by someone [covering face][laughing and crying][you taste it carefully][you taste it carefully]

It's okay, at least I've finished reading it and I'll give it five stars.

It's pretty good, and it's getting better. It's just that there are fewer people in the chat group, and it's not lively enough. Let's have more interesting ones.

It feels pretty good, let's look back first. I think it's pretty cool, I've never seen this kind of subject before. In the past, the protagonist pretended to be a boss, but this protagonist turned out to be a real boss.

It's okay, but it's a bit short and the rating is a bit low. I don't understand it.

It was fine in the front, but I felt bad when I saw the apprenticeship in the back. Even if you become a god, you can become an immortal at any time if you have a master and have points.

Do it faster, do it faster

The author should write faster.

Very nice, highly recommended

It can only be said to be leisure.

The feeling of reading the article [face covering]

Not bad, keep up the good work!

The content is exciting, but a bit lacking

Come on, come on, come on, come on

Personally I think it's good, but the description of the battle scene is not good. A peak Nascent Soul can beat a Golden Pill in seconds.