The story of this book takes place in another parallel universe based on the framework of "Diaosi Taoist" written by Xiaofei Goshen. I originally like Brother Fei'e's works, so I want to continue his story, but this is my first attempt, so please forgive me if I may not be able to write well. Mainly I wrote it out of pure boredom. The protagonist of this book is renamed Zhang Xiaolong, and it is a different adventure. The book overlaps with the original work, but the storyline is different. I hope everyone will comment positively. Again, I'm just a hobby, don't comment if you don't like it.
Reader comments
Although I have never read Little Flying Goose, I think this book is very well written, with rigorous content and interlocking stories, which is great. After reading the introduction, I feel the need to read the original work. It is rare that the author likes it enough to publish a sequel.
Give it a five-star rating and recommend it!
Keep writing his stories, it's good, you must be there on the road to wonderful novels, come on my friend, I give you a thumbs up, the story is very good, the logical thinking is very good, a novel worth recommending [like][like][like]
The novel is very beautiful and I recommend it to everyone. It is an alternate parallel universe in the framework. I originally liked Brother Fei'e's works, but I stopped updating them. So I want to continue his story, but this is my first attempt, so please forgive me if I may not be able to write it well. Mainly I wrote it out of pure boredom. The protagonist of this book is renamed Zhang Xiaolong, and it is a different adventure. The book overlaps with the original work, but the storyline is different. I hope everyone will comment positively.
The content is wonderful, the story is compact, and very attractive. I couldn't help but read it in one sitting. Five-star recommendation.
The plot is very compact, and the characters in the novel are also very vivid and interesting, each with their own characteristics, which will make people curious about the next development of the plot [Like]
Come on, Amumu, please finish writing!
I remember that at that time, I had just graduated and entered the society and started working. The first novel I came across (Diao Si Taoist) was because I had to work the evening shift and started listening to novels to refresh myself. At first it was about ghosts and supernatural beings, but it gradually turned into an online game style, but it was also the first novel that led me to fall in love with it. After eight years, I never thought that a fan of Little Moth would write the second volume of Balance World. I think it is really great and it brought back memories of my work at that time, as well as all the plots in this novel. Now the author writes really well. He added his own unique thinking to his understanding of the novel. I hope there will be a perfect ending, a different ending. Come on author [like]
Regardless of whether you have read the original work or not, this book will not disappoint you! The content is funny and light-hearted, the story is wonderful, and the plot is tightly connected. Let the story reach its climax at any time.
The Daosi Taoist priest has listened to the book a long time ago. I didn't expect that someone would write the same article. Although the writing is different, it is still okay. I will give you a 5-star review and support [Chigua]
It corresponds well to current hot topics. Very innovative. Daolang's Rakshasa Sea Market. Ghost market, Ma Yi, Ma Hu. Very pretty. Listening and reading are relatively smooth. I really like the protagonist created by the author.
It's a very, very well-written book [Sending My Heart] I really like the plot written by the author. The more I read it, the more I want to read it. Although there are few people reading it now, I believe that such a treasure book will be discovered by everyone sooner or later! [Send heart][Send heart]
I read it for a few days and caught up to the end. This fantasy novel is very good. The characters are unique. Great story. The description of the scene is superb. It feels very immersive. The author is very imaginative. The descriptions of each interface are very good. Refreshing.
The story is wonderful, the writing is exquisite, and my imagination is quite big. I read it with excitement. The more I read, the more I wanted to read. I finished it without knowing it. It is a good book and worth recommending.
Super pretty, come on!
It's a good book. The author's writing is very good. The plot is compact and the content is rich and colorful. The author's character portrayal is spot on. It's worth watching! Give it a five-star rating! [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]
This is the second time I have read this book. For the first time, I caught up to Chapter 103 in one go. Because the phone was stuck and restarted, the comment showed that it only lasted less than 1 hour. It just so happens that I haven't read enough of this book, so I'll read it again. The storyline is compact and exciting, and the whole plot is full of fantasy. I remember the ancient tomb incident in the plot, and the story of giant pythons, giant tigers, snakes, and soul-eating ghosts in the barren mountains and wild mountains. The story is bizarre, scary, but very attractive. Give it a five-star rating! [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]
A very novel novel, the author's thinking is too broad.
The author is more attentive to the characterization of the characters, and the language, movements, expressions, and images are all well described.
Chen Nuo, Yang Jiannan, Lin Mo, Zhang Xiaolong, Fox, Rabbit, etc. All have more vivid portrayals.
It incorporates a lot of folk tales, the writing and rhythm are very good, and the first person narrative is very similar to listening to the radio in the middle of the night.
It was a blast at the beginning. It's quite interesting. It's true. The more I read, the more I read. The author updates more every day! Love to watch! [Adoration]
A heavy commentary on the original work. If you have read the original work, please continue. If you have not read the original work, please read the new book.
To tell you the truth, the author, I like Ye Fan, hehehe~ [shy]. Also, after watching a long section, I found a bright spot, which is that the martial arts scenes are pretty good.
The writing is quite good. The story of Bruce Lee's earth is written better than the original author. The Nether Chapter is also well written and very interesting. I have been reading this book for the past two days. The writing is quite good. I think the author can create more characters and it should be better.
It's not a jump in the timeline, this is a parallel universe rewritten by fans. It's explained clearly in more than 300 pictures. It doesn't conflict with the original work. It's well written. I just don't know if it's a reference to the origin of doom. There are many original linkages.
Jian Nan, the chat with Monster and the others was too deliberate in dealing with those relationships.
A bunch of people around me describe how much they care about every day, and it feels like the number of words is a little too high. I hope it can be changed later. The emotional expressions in the original work are relatively subtle here. I feel that when a few people chat, they only talk about caring about this and that, without any negative meaning. I have been following this novel for almost 10 years, so I can look at it from an objective perspective.
To be honest, the five points I gave you have some memories in it, because this is the continuation of Diaosi Taoist, and Diaosi Taoist is the first novel I read (really the first one, the first novel I read), so when reading this continuation, it reminds me of many things in the past. Like Bai Yueguang, every time I see a familiar plot, memories will come to my mind scene by scene. I hope the author can continue to finish this novel well, come on!!!
It's a novel about the same as human beings, but the design structure is still very clear, and it's worth reading.
I have never read the original work, but I have learned a bit about it from this book. The author's intention and love are worthy of praise. Well written and worth reading. [Like][Like][Like]
It is not easy to continue writing, and it is difficult to break out of the framework of the original work. However, this book is very wonderfully written, full of imagination, and has a light and funny style. You can't stop reading it.
Fantasy novels are difficult to write, but the author's writing style is easy to master.
A 5-star review is a must, highly recommended!
Xiaolong has followed the old Taoist priest since he was a child. He has heard and heard about it, soaked himself in medicinal baths, and practiced continuously. He eventually became a master, subduing demons and catching ghosts, and protecting the world. The author's writing is fluent, the story is full of twists and turns, it is a masterpiece of fan fiction, very beautiful [like][like][like][like][like]
I haven't read the original work [face covering] This one has already attracted me [like] [like] [like] The part about the old liar at the beginning is so exciting that it makes people read chapter by chapter. The character of Xiaolong is well set up, and the tense plot is quite humorous. It's great to read! Definitely worth chasing [love]
A very nice novel. The author's writing style is rich and smooth. The story description is wonderful and beautiful. The characters are vivid and lifelike. I give the author a big thumbs up. Five-star praise [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like]
I started to have a strong sense of immersion and became more and more interesting. I have listened to 283 chapters. I hope the author will update 3 chapters a day (morning, noon and evening)
Although I have never read the original work, this fan story is well written, and it would be even better if it were broken down into paragraphs [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]
I read the original Little Moth's work many years ago. This time the author's updated work is equivalent to the parallel time and space of the original work. The content is compact and reasonable, the characters experience twists and turns, and the imagination is wide open. The author is very familiar with the original work and is able to adapt it beyond the original work. It is a very good novel. Many of the details reveal the true meaning of society, and the author must be a person with rich experience. I hope the author can break out of the norm and give an open ending. Keep updating, I will follow you every day. Come on
I've read the original version. It's very well written and interesting. I hope there will be more chapters. I don't want to finish reading it in two or three days [scrolls] [scrolls]
Although I have never read Little Flying Goose, I think this book is very well written, with rigorous content and interlocking stories, which is great. After reading the introduction, I feel the need to read the original work. It is rare that the author likes it enough to publish a sequel. Give it a five-star rating and recommend it!
Keep writing his stories, it's good, you must be there on the road to wonderful novels, come on my friend, I give you a thumbs up, the story is very good, the logical thinking is very good, a novel worth recommending [like][like][like]
The novel is very beautiful and I recommend it to everyone. It is an alternate parallel universe in the framework. I originally liked Brother Fei'e's works, but I stopped updating them. So I want to continue his story, but this is my first attempt, so please forgive me if I may not be able to write it well. Mainly I wrote it out of pure boredom. The protagonist of this book is renamed Zhang Xiaolong, and it is a different adventure. The book overlaps with the original work, but the storyline is different. I hope everyone will comment positively. The content is wonderful, the story is compact, and very attractive. I couldn't help but read it in one sitting. Five-star recommendation.
The plot is very compact, and the characters in the novel are also very vivid and interesting, each with their own characteristics, which will make people curious about the next development of the plot [Like] Come on, Amumu, please finish writing!
I remember that at that time, I had just graduated and entered the society and started working. The first novel I came across (Diao Si Taoist) was because I had to work the evening shift and started listening to novels to refresh myself. At first it was about ghosts and supernatural beings, but it gradually turned into an online game style, but it was also the first novel that led me to fall in love with it. After eight years, I never thought that a fan of Little Moth would write the second volume of Balance World. I think it is really great and it brought back memories of my work at that time, as well as all the plots in this novel. Now the author writes really well. He added his own unique thinking to his understanding of the novel. I hope there will be a perfect ending, a different ending. Come on author [like]
Regardless of whether you have read the original work or not, this book will not disappoint you! The content is funny and light-hearted, the story is wonderful, and the plot is tightly connected. Let the story reach its climax at any time.
The Daosi Taoist priest has listened to the book a long time ago. I didn't expect that someone would write the same article. Although the writing is different, it is still okay. I will give you a 5-star review and support [Chigua]
It corresponds well to current hot topics. Very innovative. Daolang's Rakshasa Sea Market. Ghost market, Ma Yi, Ma Hu. Very pretty. Listening and reading are relatively smooth. I really like the protagonist created by the author.
It's a very, very well-written book [Sending My Heart] I really like the plot written by the author. The more I read it, the more I want to read it. Although there are few people reading it now, I believe that such a treasure book will be discovered by everyone sooner or later! [Send heart][Send heart]
I read it for a few days and caught up to the end. This fantasy novel is very good. The characters are unique. Great story. The description of the scene is superb. It feels very immersive. The author is very imaginative. The descriptions of each interface are very good. Refreshing.
The story is wonderful, the writing is exquisite, and my imagination is quite big. I read it with excitement. The more I read, the more I wanted to read. I finished it without knowing it. It is a good book and worth recommending. Super pretty, come on!
It's a good book. The author's writing is very good. The plot is compact and the content is rich and colorful. The author's character portrayal is spot on. It's worth watching! Give it a five-star rating! [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] This is the second time I have read this book. For the first time, I caught up to Chapter 103 in one go. Because the phone was stuck and restarted, the comment showed that it only lasted less than 1 hour. It just so happens that I haven't read enough of this book, so I'll read it again. The storyline is compact and exciting, and the whole plot is full of fantasy. I remember the ancient tomb incident in the plot, and the story of giant pythons, giant tigers, snakes, and soul-eating ghosts in the barren mountains and wild mountains. The story is bizarre, scary, but very attractive. Give it a five-star rating! [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]
A very novel novel, the author's thinking is too broad. The author is more attentive to the characterization of the characters, and the language, movements, expressions, and images are all well described. Chen Nuo, Yang Jiannan, Lin Mo, Zhang Xiaolong, Fox, Rabbit, etc. All have more vivid portrayals.
It incorporates a lot of folk tales, the writing and rhythm are very good, and the first person narrative is very similar to listening to the radio in the middle of the night.
It was a blast at the beginning. It's quite interesting. It's true. The more I read, the more I read. The author updates more every day! Love to watch! [Adoration]
A heavy commentary on the original work. If you have read the original work, please continue. If you have not read the original work, please read the new book.
To tell you the truth, the author, I like Ye Fan, hehehe~ [shy]. Also, after watching a long section, I found a bright spot, which is that the martial arts scenes are pretty good.
The writing is quite good. The story of Bruce Lee's earth is written better than the original author. The Nether Chapter is also well written and very interesting. I have been reading this book for the past two days. The writing is quite good. I think the author can create more characters and it should be better.
It's not a jump in the timeline, this is a parallel universe rewritten by fans. It's explained clearly in more than 300 pictures. It doesn't conflict with the original work. It's well written. I just don't know if it's a reference to the origin of doom. There are many original linkages. Jian Nan, the chat with Monster and the others was too deliberate in dealing with those relationships. A bunch of people around me describe how much they care about every day, and it feels like the number of words is a little too high. I hope it can be changed later. The emotional expressions in the original work are relatively subtle here. I feel that when a few people chat, they only talk about caring about this and that, without any negative meaning. I have been following this novel for almost 10 years, so I can look at it from an objective perspective.
To be honest, the five points I gave you have some memories in it, because this is the continuation of Diaosi Taoist, and Diaosi Taoist is the first novel I read (really the first one, the first novel I read), so when reading this continuation, it reminds me of many things in the past. Like Bai Yueguang, every time I see a familiar plot, memories will come to my mind scene by scene. I hope the author can continue to finish this novel well, come on!!!
It's a novel about the same as human beings, but the design structure is still very clear, and it's worth reading.
I have never read the original work, but I have learned a bit about it from this book. The author's intention and love are worthy of praise. Well written and worth reading. [Like][Like][Like]
It is not easy to continue writing, and it is difficult to break out of the framework of the original work. However, this book is very wonderfully written, full of imagination, and has a light and funny style. You can't stop reading it. Fantasy novels are difficult to write, but the author's writing style is easy to master. A 5-star review is a must, highly recommended!
Xiaolong has followed the old Taoist priest since he was a child. He has heard and heard about it, soaked himself in medicinal baths, and practiced continuously. He eventually became a master, subduing demons and catching ghosts, and protecting the world. The author's writing is fluent, the story is full of twists and turns, it is a masterpiece of fan fiction, very beautiful [like][like][like][like][like]
I haven't read the original work [face covering] This one has already attracted me [like] [like] [like] The part about the old liar at the beginning is so exciting that it makes people read chapter by chapter. The character of Xiaolong is well set up, and the tense plot is quite humorous. It's great to read! Definitely worth chasing [love]
A very nice novel. The author's writing style is rich and smooth. The story description is wonderful and beautiful. The characters are vivid and lifelike. I give the author a big thumbs up. Five-star praise [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like]
I started to have a strong sense of immersion and became more and more interesting. I have listened to 283 chapters. I hope the author will update 3 chapters a day (morning, noon and evening)
Although I have never read the original work, this fan story is well written, and it would be even better if it were broken down into paragraphs [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]
I read the original Little Moth's work many years ago. This time the author's updated work is equivalent to the parallel time and space of the original work. The content is compact and reasonable, the characters experience twists and turns, and the imagination is wide open. The author is very familiar with the original work and is able to adapt it beyond the original work. It is a very good novel. Many of the details reveal the true meaning of society, and the author must be a person with rich experience. I hope the author can break out of the norm and give an open ending. Keep updating, I will follow you every day. Come on
I've read the original version. It's very well written and interesting. I hope there will be more chapters. I don't want to finish reading it in two or three days [scrolls] [scrolls]