Immortal Lord************

Some parts are like another fanfic, but they should be original. It is a good thing that the early plot has been sped up a lot, which can make room for future excitement. Does the author have original opportunities and copies? The real person fell down for a moment, but the Gu Dao will last forever, come on, author!

It's a good Gu Dao fanfic, and the content is worth reading. Using Gu Yue Qing Shu as the anchor point to narrate, the character's mentality changes too quickly, without detailed description, and the mortal stage is faster.

So far it's pretty good, but can the protagonist make it through the wooden path? The advanced Gu recipes are firmly controlled by the big family, and the protagonist is not very good at refining Gu compared to Fang Yuan, let alone preparing the formula himself. Low-level ones can be obtained through the Gu Yue family. Who will tell you about high-level ones? Immortal Gu is only unique, and it is not easy to practice (others won't tell you if they have it. Once you practice it, others will not be able to fix it). So I'm looking forward to how the author writes it. Are you waiting for Fang Yuan to destroy the Fate Gu? Then join the big forces. Or create your own Immortal Gu and go your own way. (It's very difficult. Fang Yuan could go that far by himself because of the arrangement of the Immortal Lord and Demon Lord) The characters in the last few pictures have been changed, and the protagonist is starting to touch his nose in embarrassment. There is only one demon cultivator who knows that the protagonist practices the soul path, and he is not acquainted with the protagonist.

Overall, the article is good, with a flavor of real people, but the details of the content can be refined. For example, Gu Yue Qingshu's Mu Dao inheritance is not explained in detail, and the creation of Thunder Dao Gu: Electromagnetic Gu cannot be created at once. This requires the accumulation of Thunder Dao, and at least a quasi-master level. Well, although there are reasons from the past life and some knowledge of electricity, it is impossible to create a fourth-level Gu insect at once. Even if there is an advantage, creating a Gu insect also starts from the first level, and it also needs a process. Only in this way can this novel be written more perfectly. I hope the author can pay more attention to the details of the content. [Laughing][laughing][laughing] Another author who can't hold on, having stopped updating for so long [punch out][punch out][punch out][punch out]

The pace is a bit fast, I hope Shengxianhou will write more details. Just don't stop updating. Gu Dao will last forever, Immortal Lord will live forever

The most direct thing about good fan works is that people who have never read the original work can also read it. Bookworm, wine bag flower, rice ball grass.

Okay, the plot is very good, but I hope it won't be discontinued like the other fics I saw before.

If the protagonist takes the wooden path, will he use the tree world to descend and then start the BGM to pray to the Buddha [laughing and crying]

How come the second rank is followed by the third rank after the high level? Isn't there still a peak, four small realms?

You can describe more about the situation on the Immortal Lord's side, have less fighting scenes, and write more plots about people's hearts. Try to recite poems when every important character appears. If you can't write them, you can borrow poems from the original work.

It's the most comfortable book to read [Thinking]

It looks good, but the future is worrying because I can't recite poems in Qingshu [laughter]

It's a pretty good fellow Immortal Master

Come on, I hope I can finish it

Although I haven't seen much of it so far, it's okay (except for the little Madonna)

Not bad, cheers for the author

This book is really beautiful

I hope that the protagonist's character will be as stable and cautious as Han Laomo in the future, and he will run away when trouble comes to a decision.

You can write it, just write it steadily and don't get banned again. There are too few Xianzun fan stories.

Not bad, the storyline is relatively smooth. Looking forward to climax conflict

Looks good, come on! ! ! !

Hope it gets better and better

The concept is more reasonable

Okay, keep working hard.

Very good fanfic

Did the author stop writing?

Anyway, I look very happy and don't care about the details.

I feel like the author can arrange a stolen inheritance for the protagonist

I still don't want to keep it, I'm afraid that if I keep it, the book will be gone [face covering]

It's really beautiful, I hope it doesn't break.