The Drunken Moon Is Seductive

Look good, big, come on, come on. ٩(*´◒`*)۶

The settings of the male protagonists are relatively clear and consistent with their characters, and the writing style is a little immature but fresh and natural. It's the heroine's character traits that have never been online. She is at the mercy of others and has no independent opinion. She doesn't know how to advance or retreat, but she offends others with her talk. Her behavior is unstable and she runs, jumps, pulls, and pulls at every turn. However, the author also hopes to show that the heroine is a modern time-traveling woman who is smart, agile and astute, but he only feels her stupidity without realizing it. I hope that the heroine's personality will become more and more attractive in the future. This kind of comment is because I feel that this work still has room for improvement before I put forward my own opinions. I hope the author doesn't mind and can keep writing. After all, it is really difficult to grasp the scale of this kind of subject. It's not easy to create. I recommend it with four stars and will review it later.

The author wrote it very carefully. The heroine who travels through time is the most difficult one I have read in a novel about a boy and a girl. A high school graduate has worked every day for several years and is very sensible. There are three husbands.

As a novice's work, the progress is visible to the naked eye, the details are in place, and the characters have distinct personalities. Looking forward to the follow-up. I feel that the score is too low. If I give it another five stars, this article should be above nine.

I give it a five-star review. The writing is pretty good. That's what the name is. Tomato novels have a special feature, that is, the name tells the most attractive part of the novel. If you don't read this book, you wouldn't know that it has more men than women. If you change the name and write out the characteristics of more men than women, there will definitely be people who are willing to click in and read it.

It's very well written. I found it in a recommendation book. I didn't expect it to be recommended by the author himself. The author didn't say it was his own article, and I didn't pay attention. I only found out after reading the author's reply. I also said that it wasn't written in the introduction. How did this person know that there are three male protagonists?

In fact, it can make the husbands have more distinct personalities. When they were not married, they had very distinct personalities. After getting married, I couldn't tell the difference, so I could only judge by name. Everything else is pretty good, including the idea of ​​the heroine, which is very in line with the thoughts of a normal modern person. I don't believe that sisters really don't want to have such a handsome husband. [Start] I just like to marry someone who is not too scumbag. I am a pervert, and I like it as a last resort. [Start] Come on, I believe you will write better and better.

Very beautiful, very beautiful

I just found this article. It's very interesting. Zuiyue has a good personality and the male protagonists also have their own characteristics.

It's quite good-looking. In fact, no matter which dynasty you live in, you will have no confidence if you don't have power. The heroine lives her own life in that background. It's very good and not too unrealistic.

So far, we have only six husbands, but don't just add husbands. In this way, there are too many husbands to give birth to children. I don't think the king can practice a trumpet. I feel that it is too tiring for a woman to be a king. She has to run the country and have children, hahahahaha

Wow, I finished reading it in one go. I didn't expect that this article currently only has a score of 7., Probably because there are relatively few people who have rated it. The author writes so well that you can't tell he is a newcomer. The article is smooth and has no logical problems. The relationship between the characters is also written very smoothly and naturally. Five stars

Come on! The emotions are very delicate and not awkward at all, which is great!

It's still difficult to reconcile, and the line with the king is really interesting. There are a lot of foreshadowing plots that have not been developed. It's just until the heroine's four children and the eldest daughter have grown up... I feel that after so many years, the misunderstanding will only snowball and get bigger and bigger, and there will be no further development between them [crying]

Make people feel relaxed and comfortable

The author should not write the king to death, I will be very sad. Don't you want to write about tragedy?

It's beautiful. It's rare to see something so fresh and refined.

The heroine is a girl. I like it. The heroine is a little sentimental, but she can also regulate her emotional state. It is a touching life experience. The male protagonists all have distinct personalities, and I like each one very much. How many male protagonists are there? Big update soon.... New

It's beautiful, come on

Not bad, very pretty

I like it, I want to see through it and find some pretty men here [laughs]

It's very well written, the more I read it, the more I like it.

It's very good. It's different from other ones in the past. It has a great feeling, but it's too slow.

It's very real. The heroine is just an ordinary woman. It fits the reality of the story very well. The character design is simple and the writing is very good. Come on, the author. I look forward to finishing it now. I'm looking forward to updating it in the early hours of the morning. It's very painful to follow up. [Crying] [Crying] [Crying]

It looks good, I hope the king will open his heart, accept drunkenness, and then be happy together.

This article is not awkward, it has a solid foundation!

The writing is smooth and natural, the emotions are sincere and delicate, and the plot logic is clear. It's a story that makes people catch a glimpse and continue to follow it. I especially like the author's pen name. The forest is full of dyes, the mountains are stacked, and a picture of crisp autumn air and red maples emerges in front of you. It is very poetic and fascinating.

Well written, I like it

Is Yin Bingli one of the male protagonists? , It's so sexy to bend it and straighten it out. Xiao Yin is so pitiful. Why can't Xiao Yin fall in love with the heroine? Anyway, he has saved a concubine.

Very good-looking, not exaggerated, no cheating, and the characters are full-bodied and exciting.