Online Gaming: The Skeleton Mage

It's well written and quite to my liking, but the heroine needs to be stronger and have a hidden career later on. Also, is this an invincible novel? If not, you can also create a stronger hidden profession, like the ones I've written now that don't even have names.

Come on author, it's very beautiful

Personally, I think the writing is okay, and I support the author.

The writing is pretty good, keep writing and don't be affected by bad comments. Great support for the author!!!

It would be nice to be wider and have more words.

Not bad, it would be better if the various skill settings and fighting scenes were more rigorous and exciting.

Alas, it's not easy for the author either, but with the support of 4 stars, (On Tomato, I can only say that you can still read it)

The plot is quite good, not too bloody. Currently there is only one female protagonist. The heroine's character and role are pretty good. She just needs to be more powerful. Don't just sit back and do logistics.

It's very interesting, but a little lacking. Author, you need to prove that you are worthy 😏

The author actually doesn't mind if Qing Lin is added as the heroine😁