“And so, I finally understood that I had at least one defining emotion of youth: bewilderment.”
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A woman blessed by destiny, with peerless beauty, appears out of nowhere and enchants every man in the cultivation world, leaving every woman secretly consumed by jealousy. These inexplicable feelings will ultimately lead to countless tragedies
After fainting, Lin Qianyue suddenly binds herself to a System and learns that she is about to become a supporting female character dazzled by Yun Shangyi’s charm… How can she escape her fate?
How can she get this world back on track?
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A noblewoman reborn, a genius artifact cultivator bound to a System, a miserable young lady who transmigrated… The course of the world suddenly changes. Where will these bewildered people go from here?
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I don’t know how to write a blurb… I really don’t. I want to write about the Dao Heart, about kind and lovable people, about the countless bewilderments of countless people, about their Dao Hearts, and about the Heavenly Dao as I see it.
I want to write a cultivation novel about the Dao Heart.
An ensemble cast. Everyone is the protagonist.
A little romance.
I think the overall storyline is still very attractive and makes people want to read on, but maybe I am more of a female protagonist. I think the number of female protagonists in the early stage is too few and it is not three-dimensional enough. Zhiqiu and the others have many plots and spend a lot of pen and ink. It feels like the priorities are no longer clear, but their images are still very vivid 💕 Although the author writes about group portraits, I think the primary and secondary plot arrangements should be more obvious. Some things can be placed in extra chapters. The real text must be driven by the plot. How the characters get to know each other needs to be described in detail. Finally, there is a little extra that can be interspersed with language at the end. It feels like there are too many modern vocabulary insertions, and it will feel like everyone has traveled through time. To sum up, I think the author's ideas are really good, and I look forward to the next content [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart] Some books are only rated later 😳😳😳