I'm Just a Humble Human Being

The plot has basically no flaws, the protagonist's personality is pretty good, and the world view is quite clear. However, the time transition is too long-winded, which could be improved a bit. Some unnecessary words and subplots can be omitted, and the time can be passed directly. The description of the companions around him has outstanding personality and image creation, which is quite good. Let me tell you weakly, my idea is that if you don't accept some female supporting characters, don't contact them, and reduce the plot with the protagonist. Otherwise, you will be assigned to female supporting characters later, and it will not be very comfortable to watch. [Love] [Love] [Love] I hope it will be finished in the end, and it won't suck. I don't mind if it takes a little longer. (Great love for the harem [admiration] does not affect the author's will)

It looks good, I also like multiple female protagonists, come on! Good looking, more heroines, the more the merrier

I gave it five stars first, and I may make up my mind after reading it (basically not, I won't tell you why, you will understand naturally if you understand [laughter]) Just one word "lazy". I have to go to school. I have to take the high school entrance examination this year. I have to worry about it. I am going to a good high school. Of course I am not cheating on blessings (I feel that I am young). I will read it every month and try my best to support the author. Come on and create (there are questions about the pros and cons of online literature when writing non-continuous Chinese texts. Generally speaking, it is easy to get started. Give everyone a Opportunities for creation, convenience for creation and revision, and readers' reading. There is also the literary color of the novel. To convey positivity and reflect social reality, online writing has fewer restrictions and is more convenient and fun. [Send Hearts] [Send Hearts] This book is excellent at the moment, with good characters, but it looks like a light novel, and the foreshadowing is too obvious, so it can be regarded as a daily style. Finally, I don't know if anyone can see this? I am still following the article at 11 o'clock. It seems that I will see the latest one in 2 days. [Thinking][Thinking]

The plot is good, the author is enthusiastic, and he often likes it in the comment section. The characters are also well portrayed. Each female protagonist also has a reason to fall in love with the male protagonist. She is not brainless. To sum it up in one sentence, it is worth watching It's slow-paced, has five female protagonists, and it's not love at first sight, and there's no poison in it. Notes for reading this book: This world is divided into the human world and the magic world. The two worlds are of equal strength (I have never actually fought, so this is the theory at this time). The human world does not know the existence of the magic world. There are five races in the magic world, namely the blood race, the elves, the dwarves, the gods, and the dragons. Among them, the dragons are the strongest physically (followed by the blood races), the elves are more agile, and the dwarves are better at forging. The gods have a high bottom line in magic talent, and the blood races are relatively average, so there is no saying that a certain race is stronger. In addition to the five major races, there are other races, but their numbers are rare. Not everyone in the wizarding world knows magic. There are people from the magical world in the human world, but there are rules not to reveal their identities. There are people in the human world who deal with the magical world who don't follow the rules in the human world. Human beings cannot see the characteristics of people in the magical world without opening their eyes (such as the horns and tails of dragons, and the seals on the foreheads of gods). There are humans in the magic world, but their status is humble (ask me if you don't understand anything, I can answer you) [full] [full] [full]

I have read Chapter 181 so far, and the overall sense is still very good. Maybe because I have not watched Harry Potter, so the setting of the coexistence of the human world and the magical world is still very novel and interesting to me. The shaping of each character's image is also quite good. Although there are some flaws in the content, it does not affect the overall content. I just personally feel that the relationship between the male and female protagonists is a bit slow. Of course, this is just my personal opinion, and it's okay. So overall I give it four stars. I originally wanted to give it four and a half stars, but unfortunately I didn't. Finally, cheers to the author! Because I have been reading books for so long, it is now difficult to read them all. I just finished reading Crescent Forest Crisis Volume recently, and I feel that the author wrote it very well, and it didn't make me angry. Now that I have read Chapter 510, I feel that my combat power has collapsed. The protagonist, who has only been exposed to magic for three years, can already fight August, who has been a silver-level magician for many years, and the person who controls him is the Demon Lord. It feels like the combat power has collapsed quite seriously here. And he wouldn't let him run away twice or even three times. I felt like the principal wouldn't chase him when he saw him running away. That's all for now.

The overall evaluation is about 7 to 8 points, which is considered a good work. It is recommended to readers who like Harry Potter and Japanese novels. The overall worldview is magically modified on the basis of Hogwarts, and there are obvious traces of application. This approach has its pros and cons. The good thing is that HP fans may have a fan filter. At the same time, HP can be said to be a household name to the new generation, and the threshold for entry is very low. But there are successes and failures, and naturally there are disadvantages. If the magic adaptation classic is copied mechanically or the writing is insufficient, it will have the problem of imitating others. This is the biggest problem of the author, especially in the early stage, the pace is slow and watery, which will lead to a large loss of readers. Fortunately, it got better and better later on, and gradually developed its own characteristics based on HP, which is gratifying. In addition, multiple female protagonists + monster girls are also bonus points. It can be said that this is what made me persist through the early stage. The author's portrayal of several female protagonists and even supporting characters is commendable, which is even more commendable in an environment where tomato harem literature has a stud per capita. The character traits of several characters are very clear, and the way they are portrayed through daily life and plot is also very popular with me. Although it is a bit facial, the flaws are not concealed. In addition, the number of female protagonists is very restrained, which is much higher than many horse stories. Compared with the cycle of opening a map, picking up an inflatable doll, and throwing it away after having sex, the gradual development of the male protagonist and several female protagonists is very good. All in all, I recommend it to be read, and I look forward to the author's future works to a higher level.

This book is very well written, but I don't know why I always feel like I'm seeing Harry Potter when I read it [facepalm], but overall it's still good, good luck to the author!

A very good Western fantasy novel with a decent plot. I finished reading it in one breath (it means it's too short, the author has to decide what to do [eat melon]) I saw in the comments that the author's emotional line is slow. In fact, this problem is easy to solve. If the author updates more, wouldn't the emotional line be faster? [Eating melon][cool] Now that the author has launched a new book, I am an old reader [cool]. If the author creates a group, please be sure to give me a management [blowing kiss] Although I am now in college, when I see the name of the protagonist, it is still easy to think of the poem I learned in junior high school. "I can draw the eagle bow like the full moon, look northwest, and shoot at the wolf." "Jiangchengzi·Hunting in Mizhou" by Su Shi of the Song Dynasty I hope the author's works will become more and more exciting and I will continue to support him. Ps: Considering there are so many words, it's okay to add a few more [Chigua]

I have read Chapter 67 so far, and the plot is a bit cliche. There are no big problems overall, but there are no highlights either. The pace is slow and daily. The first part of the plot is mainly about campus life, and the later part of the plot is about the magic world so I can't comment on it. As a student, there is nothing wrong with the character of the protagonist compared to other students. He is energetic and a little immature. Of course, there is nothing wrong with his lack of character in the early stage. I believe that in the hundreds of thousands of words of the plot, the protagonist will grow and become more stable. In general, Tomato is barely above average. After all, there is nothing particularly disgusting about the poisonous points at the moment. You can look forward to this kind of slow-paced book now. More and more people (including me) are beginning to resent mindless cool writing. There are always some authors who challenge readers' bottom line, as if they can't live without disgusting us to death. A few days ago, I looked at the top recommendation list on my homepage. I wrote about some top ideas and relied on the defense. Maybe in Tomato, as long as the protagonist has a normal mind, it can be considered a good book. It just so happens that the protagonist of this book is relatively normal, which is already better than most books.

The author's outline is very well written. It is based on the Western fantasy style, imitating Harry Potter style, and the narrative has a bit of Japanese style. The five heroines are of different races, different hair colors and different attributes. They are all very recognizable. The themes of the individual guides for each heroine are carefully designed, as well as the five-color confession that was recently prepared. I really like this [Adore][Adore][Adore] But after all, it is the author's debut novel. Some redundant daily routines can actually be skipped. The author's writing skills are not that mature. I hope the author writes better and better. Come on, Mr. Kuang [sending heartfelt wishes]

After watching it for a while, I found it not bad, but the male protagonist is a bit immature mentally and his emotional intelligence is... Well, it's hard to put into words. As for campus life... I am a little bit envious. For someone like me who has never experienced it, in short, it is: a shame.

Full of faintness! The content is interesting! Not very cool either! I like how the male protagonist slowly develops! Tomato's most immersive Western fantasy and magic novel! The characters also have their own characteristics! Every heroine loves it! The characterization is perfect! The only thing is that one chapter per day is too few! Give me more updates! Keep up the good work, author! I'm optimistic about you!

The story integrates magic learning into college life, and the subject matter is relatively novel and life-like. The characters are designed with distinct personalities and the progression of magic is distinct. At the same time, the villain is foreshadowed in the story and gradually advanced. Worth the wait!

It's a decent plot, so far there isn't much of a problem, but I think it can be interspersed with some hidden clues (it doesn't seem to have much to do with the protagonists on the surface, it's better to be some real ending of the world, events that happened in the past [note]), and you can also write a side story from the perspective of some characters or even write about the emotional lines of the supporting characters. Then, the personality of each character does not need to be written to be so perfect or evil. After all, everyone has advantages and disadvantages. Also, the author should update me quickly [smile][please update]

The character of the protagonist is Japanese-style, with a common early avoidance personality and hidden low self-esteem, but overall the writing is okay, at least I think it is okay so far. The fourth reason is that I have no interest in this kind of Japanese male protagonist since I graduated. If you like this kind of book, this book is considered a good book, at least it is free🍅Yes.

It's over. Okay! Of course, there are still big problems with this book. Some of the details and scene changes are too blunt, making some chapters too awkward to read. On the contrary, the final extra is well written () But this is how newbies start their careers. It's already great to be able to finish writing with peace of mind without unfinishing it. Looking forward to the author's next work

I love reading it. I have also read all the author's thoughts. It is really not easy for a student to write on this scale, but I still hope that the author can update it quickly. I feel uncomfortable after not finishing the ending! ! !

The writing is quite nice, but I don't know why, but when I read it, I felt like I had seen Harry Potter and dragons combined [facepalm]

A short story about saving the world in a Western fantasy. The author describes more about the emotional stories of the protagonist and the heroines. The five heroines are still very three-dimensional, but they are lacking in fighting scenes. Unfortunately, they did not spend much time writing about the relationship between the human world and the magical world. I added it to my bookshelf when I had more than 200 chapters, and slowly followed it to the end. The extra chapter covers the dating and marriage with the heroines until the protagonist's daughters enter Sirius' alma mater. It is quite touching. At the beginning, I was still a muggle. In the end, I thank you for accompanying me. The author's debut novel, a good book worth reading

It's good to read. I personally feel that the characters are very well done (especially Xu Weiwei, I want to see her become a character). This book gives people the feeling of watching a TV series of Two Thorns Ape. It's very sufu.

A very good novel, Love Comes from Four Sichuan

So far, it's pretty good. Harry Potter ➕ Crosses and Vampires may also include the Magic Teacher series! Overall, quite memorable? The rhythm of the light novel is also quite good. After all, the light novel deals with daily life.

It's okay. The characters have distinct personalities. The author should have learned from Harry Potter's settings. Although the protagonist's talents are very strong, he grows through his own efforts and does not become stronger all of a sudden because of his talents. Keep up the good work, author!

It's a very interesting Western fantasy novel. Each heroine has her own personality charm. The plot is novel and very attractive. You can feel the improvement of the author's writing style in each volume. It's a novel that becomes more and more enjoyable the more you read it [Shy]

After seeing it, I feel a strong sense of déjà vu (there is a series with the male protagonist Tsuchimi Rin and the male protagonist and female protagonist Akaya Moeka from the cross. Or the one from the series "Actually, I Am". They are all paying homage to different worlds and multi-racial campuses [laughing]. I'd like to see pictures of the heroine and second heroine later, I'm curious. (You can also have pictures of the male protagonist. How handsome he can be, how he holds a stick, etc.) There are also tributes to LOL: Principal Art, male and female lead duo, etc. Looking forward to the following chapters (I just saw Chapters 1 and 2 Two Hundred)

I think it's okay. Although the storyline is a bit cliché and I use the Harry Potter story framework to fill in the plot myself, the characterization of the characters is still good. It's okay to have fun during the book shortage. Emmmm, the author should keep working hard. There is still a lot of room for improvement.

It's pretty good. I like the protagonist's character very much. It's more of an everyday style. As a bookworm, I prefer this type of book now. I haven't finished it yet. The author is very active hahaha. Come on [laughter]

After reading the first chapter, the story is quite good. It is better than many other novels with many female protagonists. The girls naturally walk to the male protagonist and feel quite comfortable. Moreover, the arrangement of life in another world is good, and there are no embarrassing or boring plots in the face. I like it very much. It's a pity that the orcs are directly the villains in the novel, and the girl with cat and rabbit ears has no hope.

Very good, in short, better than expected, the content is very novel and awesome [I learned it] [I learned it] [I learned it]! ! !

The description of the characters is delicate, the plot has ups and downs, and the characters have distinct personalities. In short, I love reading it. I read more than 200 updated chapters in 4 days. Come on author 😁👍