National Fate Dungeon: I Am an Unknighted Knight

I really want Lao Ma to bring Diana out, otherwise once the protagonist disappears, Diana will probably return to the Knight of Despair, and then Roland, a hard worker, will be beaten to death again. Also, the author's writing is very good, but the pace is fast. There needs to be more daily interludes. It is really uncomfortable to watch without an intermission. Don't summarize the intermission in a few dozen words! You can write a relationship line with Diana after each world ends, take Diana shopping, daily life, etc. (Such a good wife candidate cannot be let go, this character is better portrayed. One more thing, when the characters and forces in the ruined library appear, can the author put some pictures and introductions? The pictures can be put in the book review, otherwise it will be hard to understand [top post]

It's pretty good. I'll give it three stars first because the main character is Lao Ma. I'll give it another two stars for its DNA and good writing. I hope I don't want to be a eunuch 😘

Good guy, Duo Chu is ecstatic, not sure if that sister is dusty white, hahahahaha, come on, author

Author, come on, support you, the only mama's boy author

Old horse, what a good horse

The pace is too fast and chaotic

It's a bit messy and feels so fast

Just so-so, his combat power is weird, I quit after seeing Diavolo fighting Poseidon (probably)

Good, good, good

Come on, author!!!