In the Age of Curses, I Become the Ghost Rider

It's not easy to write a book. I support it with five stars. I have only read the first few chapters. So far, the author's portrayal of the characters is not that good. It is understandable that my first impression of the protagonist is that a child has no overall perspective. The character He Feng is very paranoid but from the starting point he is right, but the protagonist does not understand. In fact, their conflict point is a bit strange. There are a lot of unnecessary contradictions. Novice authors don't have to be too demanding. The most important thing is that various issues between the characters can be revised. If it's fixed in later chapters, just pretend I didn't say it. Support new authors and hope to create better works! Come on!

How can I put it? It is a good book, but the depiction of the Dragon Kingdom is a bit too dark, but it does not affect the viewing. I just hope that the author's book will not be removed from the shelves, will not be discontinued, and will not be unfinished. It is best to write a million words. By the way, I also hope that the author can write a plot for the protagonist to play a doppelgänger.

It's okay. If you stick with it, your score should be around seven or eight points. Come on, I can only say that the plot is watchable, but there are too few scenes behind the protagonist.

I hope you can give me more suggestions! My book has made many people feel uncomfortable. Wuming would like to apologize to everyone here. It is my first time to write a book and I don't know how to cater to readers' tastes. I will reflect on it for a day today and will continue to update it tomorrow. I will try to write a book that satisfies everyone and makes everyone laugh. Wuming would like to say sorry to everyone here. I have gotten the answer to whether the book is good or bad from everyone's comments, but I am not dissatisfied with the feedback. I am very grateful for everyone's suggestions! I think about each of your comments over and over again, and constantly revise the content of subsequent articles while reflecting on myself. Although it is very tiring, I will continue to persevere. Thank you for your recognition, and thank you for not throwing away the book and leaving, and for leaving your valuable suggestions.

Although I have only read the second chapter, from the beginning it is the introduction of the protagonist. I feel that the protagonist is relatively stable. In fact, to put it bluntly, he is timid and dare not take risks. I am only talking about the introduction at the beginning. I don't know what happens next.

It would be great if you follow this line of thinking, but it all depends on how you write the universe. It's still a good new book. The plot of the protagonist is a bit lacking at the end. Please write more.

To be honest, the author's portrayal of human nature is indeed profound. Although the real society is diverse, the novel's portrayal of people's hearts is a bit biased, but what can I say? This is a good story

It would be better if the author could update faster [laughing]

It's so special. It's great. Come on.

Gaga Bashi, author, come on (ง•̀_•́)ง