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Come on! Great write up! The plot is arranged very comfortably! The rhythm is also OK. You can consider formatting the text into two lines or one paragraph, or long and short sentences side by side. Today's readers are accustomed to reading articles this way, otherwise it will be very tiring to read, because many people now read in their spare time, so there is a lot of text. Unless the article is really well written, it will be very tiring to read! Come on!

I sat up in a critical condition in bed, I realized that the law of heaven was actually me Well written, but too short