Bengtie: the Cultivator Whose Neck Was Broken by Kafka

One thing to say, Xing's character portrayal is still very realistic, and his interaction with the protagonist makes people laugh when they watch it. However, there are too few scenes like this, and it only lasts a few chapters in total. And the protagonist is too miserable. Because he has a world view of cultivating immortals, he is now directly targeted by the Star God and has to be separated from the train crew. It really hurts, it hurts so much! When can I go back? I want to knock on CP! I want them to get married where they are! I want to watch "The Domineering Galaxy Bat Man Will Eat the Cold Wheelchair Cat" I'm taking back my previous five-star rating. I think I'm going to go the harem route. I don't think the protagonist deserves to be with Xing.

This is an excellent book. The character of the male protagonist is well described. He has his own bottom line and his own code of conduct. It is not a mindless novel. I haven't skipped a chapter in the whole process. Come on, I hope you can keep it up.

First of all, to be honest, it's very interesting. This is what I really think in my heart. Compared with other Bengtie fanfics, this is probably the best one I've seen so far. I only made this comment after reading seven chapters. My favorites are actually the first two chapters, which are really eye-catching. The third chapter is amazing. It's a bit off, because the protagonist has reached that point and can't defeat Yan Qing. It's really a bit unreasonable, and then there are no big problems later (except for the protagonist later learning the truth and killing his former companions in anger, which is really difficult to evaluate and makes me feel a little awkward now). In short, the author will continue to work hard. For those who say that the protagonist is too much like a Madonna and not like a villain, I have to say this. Without the ability to resurrect the bug, the number of people killed by the protagonist would have been considered a heinous crime. Without resurrection, the main characters, Kafka, and Silver Wolf would all be dead, as well as the protagonist group, Lao Yang, and March Seven. With all of this, isn't this enough to become a villain? Is this also called the Holy Mother? The one who wrote the negative review probably didn't see it for an hour, I can only say it was a lot of fun. (To be honest, the rating is not high. A large part of the reason is because the author's later writing is really average. Before the protagonist possessed him, the writing was really good. After the possession, it started to go downhill and became worse and worse. The final ending also made people feel a little bit unsatisfied. It was an anticlimax. I hope the author will continue to work hard in the next book.)

Just one sentence, it's so damn good, come on, the author hopes that the heroine is a star, and doesn't want those old routines. The author has written such a good book. I have never seen such a good book. It is a new subject of literature and art. The protagonist's encounter and character are so well written. He kills decisively and can distinguish right from wrong, and it is not a brainless and invincible harem story. Try to keep it up, author. I hope you don't let our novels with good articles disappoint.

It's so beautiful, please update it soon, especially if Xingxing is the heroine, it will be even better

I have been reading novels for two or three years, and I have also read more than 50 fanfics about Star Railroad, but this one is really very good, and it suits my taste. The author, please don't make me kneel down and beg you to update it.

I haven't read many books, but this one is really one of the best I've read in the Iron Fall series.

It's okay, but don't imitate the real person too much. It's his own style. This is your own novel. You must have your own style. The Chen Bai I hope to see is a Chen Bai with his own thoughts, not a Chen Bai wearing the skin of a model worker.

This book is good, at least in my opinion it is better than some harem invincible books

The protagonist is decisive in killing, has a bottom line, half is abused (not accurate), the heroine, the plot setting is not bad, from the public point of view, it is suitable for reading, it is a relatively alternative Star Iron book, this is a recommendation for the majority of book lovers From a personal point of view, it is not pure enough. This does not suit my taste. If you are a similar person, please read about 150 chapters first and then make your own decision after gaining an objective understanding. If you feel that I am not objective enough, please read their comments. Thank you.

It's not bad, but the author's own settings don't feel clear enough. Some plots seem to have some problems. The protagonist has a distorted view of life due to the hell life in childhood. The character is quite unique. I look forward to the change of the protagonist in the future. In the end, I feel that the low score is because there are too few chapters now, or because the protagonist's character has persuaded too many people. In addition, it has buried a lot of foreshadowing, and I hope it can be made up for later.

I like this style, it looks better than the group next door who have a harem

It's non-toxic. I'm currently watching single cp and the plot has been changed. It looks quite exciting. Maybe it's because I haven't played Star Dome Railway, so it's not a brainless single push. At least it's possible in the novels I've read, and there are some original ones.

1St 5 star review Personally, I feel that the most uncomfortable thing about watching fan fiction is that most of the plots are consistent with the game content and have a sense of repetition. However, this article is based on Star Iron as a certain background, plus certain private settings, and most of the content is original. It has the charm of familiar characters reappearing in the fan fiction, but it is also innovative without being boring. The author's writing is also good. It's a book worth reading.

I have now read the beginning of the fifth volume, and overall it looks good. The original plot is not very inconsistent. I feel that the protagonist's combat power should not be able to beat the first order, but the order below can be crushed. The fifth volume is about to break through the Nascent Soul, and I should be able to compete with the order's combat power. I am looking forward to the subsequent plots, and the plot of revenge against the star core hunters. I am also looking forward to the atmosphere between Chen Bai and the train crew in the fifth volume.

This book is very beautiful. It can be considered top-notch among all the Beng Tie books I have read. The protagonist of this book is different from the protagonists of other Beng Tie books. He does not have a golden finger like the system, nor is he invincible at the beginning. He even feels a little weak, but he becomes stronger step by step. I personally prefer books like this. 😘(The above is just my personal opinion)

I won't comment too much. I've read the previous book, and it's a regular book. It's really well written and has its own flavor. The character of the protagonist was quite attractive to me from the beginning. The author's technique is still sharp. I like this kind of fan fiction with many things of its own and exciting and active original characters. This kind of fan fiction is very attractive to me. I will give it five stars and won't say more.

The writing style of this book is very good, and it has the beauty of a three-body anime [face covering]

This book looks very good, the plot has some self-innovation on the original basis, the protagonist's characteristics are very distinctive, and the protagonist's change is also a highlight of the book. From a wooden person with no emotions, he gradually transforms into a person with his own diagnosis, and becomes a person of flesh and blood and emotions. He gradually reveals his life experience step by step on the way to becoming stronger, and finds the person he loves and cherishes. The plot is interlocking and it is a very interesting general novel.

Still 4 stars Rating: Great intellectual battle series; The Black Pagoda asked Bo Shizun, what is divinity? The only person who responded to her was Chen Bai, who was already far away from people; When I read part of it, I wanted to give it five stars, but I also wanted to control the rating so that the mediocre people in the idiot club wouldn't read it. Then I thought about it several times, and out of caution, I read the outline at the end and realized that what was written later might be a bit fragmented? Then, four stars can not only provide a balanced evaluation of the entire book, but also provide a balanced control over the rating system; For "balance"! ! ! What? You ask me why I turned to the end? Is it really out of rigor? Is it true that it's for "balance"? Or is it the influence of the "end"? [Sinister smile]

The beginning is unremarkable, but when the plot turns to Xianzhou, the author's original plot is not only more interesting than the original plot, but also better to watch. I hope the author can maintain this level in the future.

Awesome, awesome. This book is very interesting. It's the first time that it's not about following the protagonist group, but it's the other way around. Being a villain requires five stars. Since Liuliu has joined the protagonist group,

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It's very good. If you can compete with A Mu Na, you have a bright future [laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

To be honest, I didn't feel comfortable reading the section with more than a dozen pictures at the beginning. Obviously, the more I read, the better the writing became, and then I felt better [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] [thinking]

There are a lot of typos, but it does not affect the viewing. And because the author is still a newcomer, some parts may not be very rigorous, but I personally feel that it is already at a relatively good level. The author has also realized his own shortcomings. We all have to be more tolerant of new authors. We look forward to his new work.

The first part is pretty good, but in the middle it feels a bit frustrating. The later part is a bit too long and weird, but it's still a pretty good book. It just doesn't look like a fanfic. There are a lot of private settings. If it's broken, I'll be cheated [face covering]

The greatest advantage of this book is its originality Some of the books I read were written under the banner of originality, and they were basically the same as the original game. At most, they only saved a few people. But here, the world view is very sufficient. I originally thought that cultivating immortals was equivalent to being semi-invincible, but the author described the combat power very well and it did not collapse.

The first glance is the title and history of the book, the second glance is the introduction, and the third glance is the plot. You are so awesome. The foreshadowing is very good and it is a true pure villain. It's super interesting.

It's okay, except for some issues with combat power in the early stages (which were revised later). It's definitely a good fanfic, and the protagonist has grown both psychologically and in combat power.