After Blue Star Is Invincible, Journey to All Realms [Hengkai Chapter]

The writing of this book is relatively good, and you can read the review I gave you before. Take a look, and then see if it works. If it works, you can change it like this. In fact, it's not a big deal to change it like this. You can just give him the climax parts that you have already written and make them into a separate page. Then you can also directly make up some daily stuff. To put it simply, copy the previous ones, and then just copy them directly when you want to write about sales. Do you understand copy and paste? And as for your book, there is something very confusing about it. Even with your identity as a time traveler, you can change anyone at will, but you haven't changed this person, so you're trying to catch the protagonist, right? Or do you want to play something big? There are many layouts, and then finally one becomes an immortal. If this is the case, then you can read the one I mentioned before, and then you can read the article "Do Group Friends Want to Cheat?" "This novel. As for this novel, there are several settings in it that you can borrow. That's probably what happened. Anyway, I suggest you read the comments I gave you. Think about it for a moment. If it's good, then you change it; if it's not good, then you just don't care. Okay, that's pretty much it.

I am a new author, please support me and I will work hard to make progress [love] [love]

The writing is good but no one reads it [face covering]

Yeah, very nice

Hidden treasure, okay [send heart]

Such a beautiful book, why did I just discover it now [Sending Hearts]

Okay, it looks good, come on, come on, come on

Yoxi, write it down, it's great [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][like]

Protagonist ideology, protagonist consciousness.

It's okay, so does this count as a harem? There was a lot of interaction with Mei Yi in the early stage, but there was basically no interaction later. Did I not understand?