Möbius: a House of Suspended Life

Super pretty! ! ! It would be nice if there were more extra episodes. The relationship between Mengbi Maomao and the heroine is very loving and has a tacit understanding. If possible, I still hope to describe more about the life of the heroine and Mengbi Maomao in the Kingdom of Light. I also want to see all the interesting things about them traveling through various universes and meeting new generations [sending heart] [love] [full] Also, the big picture of the heroine Ultra is so cute, as cute as a dreamy cat. I want to put them in a sack and take them away [laughing][laughing][laughing] Also, I wish you a happy ending! ! ! Getting better and better! ! ! ദ്ദി˶>𖥦<)✧

The plot and emotional lines are very heartwarming! The relationship and bond between Hezi and Future, as well as everyone at GUYS, are great! Well worth reading. It's just that the narrative feels a bit unclear. There are many events created by the author himself, which is very good, but the narrative perspective is a bit messy. I think this is an area that needs improvement! Things that I personally find a bit uncomfortable but still acceptable: 1. "Qianchuan Ji" has a "son". This son is related to the Ampera star. He is also "inherited" by the heroine Ji Qian and is called the heroine's mother. 2. The heroine is too "predictive". She feels a little distant except for the main line and emotional line. It feels like she doesn't care about herself but is trying to take out herself. In the end, although she told everyone that she was a time traveler and handed over her new role, it was still weird... 3. Ultraman Taro's human name is Takahashi Hayasin. Everything else is fine, overall it's a very heartwarming story! Everyone is so cute!

Author, I really beg you. To be honest, your book is all about career lines, and there are very few emotional lines. When I saw the place where I wiped my hair, I thought I finally had some candy, but it turned out that it was gone after just wiping my hair. Author, I really beg you, please give me some candy and cook some food. I am not happy. Where is my psychological committee member? I'm not happy, I'm not happy, I'm not happy, where is my psychological committee member? I'm not happy, but it's still beautiful and delicate.

It's good to read. I really like Meng Mao Mao's writing. Meng Mao Mao is very cute, and the heroine's baby is also very good. The content is very detailed, but it's a bit sparse. If it's bigger, it's better. It's good to read! , Love watching! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

Eh? ! I have a plan, why not redeem yourself. [Exploration]

As a reader who reads all genres, I agree that this is a very good book😘 The plot of this fanfic about Membius is compact and logically coherent. The author not only connects the TV series about Membius and related movies together, but there is no sense of inconsistency. I don't know why, but no one commented 😭. From the perspective of characterization, the characters of Hezi and the future as well as other members were very distinct and did not cause OOC. Then I went to watch the tokusatsu drama of Mebius, and the whole character creation was basically consistent with some of the ideas conveyed to the audience in the tokusatsu drama. This is a rare thing in fan works🥹 From the perspective of the author's writing level, even if there is no need for gorgeous rhetoric, the expression of the text is very down-to-earth and accurate, and it easily conveys the sense of the scene. I don't know how to express it. Anyway, it feels like watching TV. Before reading this work, I had never watched the Möbiuste drama. I only watched it when I saw the middle of the work. In short, the plot, characters, writing, etc. Form the core of a good work. This fanfic not only includes these three parts, but is also well-shaped, so I really enjoyed it while reading it. After reading it, I felt emotionally empty and had a withdrawal reaction. Alas, I felt that when I read this fanfic, I thought the world was really beautiful, which made me escape from real life for a short time. The plot is really great, but it doesn't have too much industrial saccharine. It's like a plot just for love. The emotional line between Hezi and the future is just right. The main line revolves around the task of protecting the earth, so it feels like it has not strayed from the core of Mebius. I thought deeply about the plot and suddenly felt that this plot was really awesome.

The heroine Hezi and Xiaomeng are so sweet, two very cute people together ~ Does anyone understand pure love? I'm going! The battle session was also pretty good. Everyone started shouting about bonds or something like that (? Hhh no, there are still quite a lot of details, and it can be seen that they put a lot of thought into it). Off topic: This author is very careful V✪ω✪V Comments will basically be replied, don't miss it if you like Xiao Meng

It would be nice to have more emotional interaction with Xiaomeng. You can add a little car ambiguity.

Ahhhhhh. I really like this story, I really like this plot, I really like cats! I really like the author. I really like this book. Why did I finish it now? Such a good book, such a cute cat, be discovered quickly, be discovered quickly, people come, people come, people come~

Looks good, recommended by Otto

Insensitive cat × growth-oriented heroine

Nice! Super super super beautiful! I kept chasing after I got into the trap. The author is also super, super, super good!

Nice! Very nice

It's great, thank you to the author! (ง •̀_•́)งCome on

I really enjoyed reading this book, but the author's updates are a bit slow. I almost thought the author would stop updating.

It's so beautiful [like it], the storyline is exciting, and the author is very thoughtful [sending my heart] and looking forward to the follow-up!

It's beautiful. I feel the description is very delicate. It's the type I like. Hehe, please do your best to the author. Don't abandon the update [Blow kiss]

Very beautiful, looking forward to the follow-up

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good! Don't stop updating! !

Ahhhh, the writing is very detailed and super beautiful! Come on big

I particularly like the interaction between the heroine and Xiaomeng, it's so beautiful I stayed up all night and finished reading it [staring]

Hey hey hey hey ✌︎˶╹ꇴ╹˶✌︎, beautiful

It's very beautiful. I like you, author! [Love][love][love]

The writing is beautiful and the writing style is very delicate. I wish you a happy ending! ! ! ૮(˶ᵔ ᵕ ᵔ˶)ა