
My Little Pony: Yes, Princess!
小马宝莉:是!公主!
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- Anime Fanfiction
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My Little Pony, Female Protagonist, Alicorns!!
Looking for books similar to "My Little Pony: Forest Ponies". No genderbending from male to female, and no abandoned or on-hiatus stories!!
I'm Out of Things to Read. Looking for High-Quality Stories with Great Writing and a Smooth, Unawkward Plot
I'm more interested in historical settings. Farming, fantasy, palace intrigue, romance, or male-male pairings are all fine, as long as the writing and plot are good. Ideally, there shouldn't be any misunderstandings between the leads. These days I drop so many novels before I even get halfway through. The ratings are ridiculously inflated, and I don't even want to get started on the leads' characterizations.
Please Recommend Something Great! Anything Goes!
I want something similar to Strange House. Does anyone have any especially beloved books, the kind you have reread several times? Any genre is fine! I am suffering from a book drought and want to know what everyone else is reading.
Fanfiction About Chinese Cartoons We Grew Up With
Give Me Some High-Quality Fanfics, I Have No Particular Requirements. I’ve Had Too Much Garbage Lately
Anime fanfiction or game fanfiction is fine, as long as it's good quality. Please recommend me something.
There Are So Few New My Little Pony Books
My Little Pony: Any Gender Is Fine, Just Make It High Quality. Nothing Too New
Looking for books similar to My Little Pony: Forest Ponies. I want something that makes sense, around the same level as the one above.
Are There Any My Little Pony Stories With a Male Protagonist?
Looking for book recommendations.
New Writers Are Getting Better and Better
My Little Pony Novels with a Female Protagonist!!!!!!!!!!!!
Looking for books similar to My Little Pony: Forest Ponies. I've checked out a lot of tags lately, but most protagonists are male. Please recommend a story with a female protagonist, please!!!!
Any Stories Where the Heroine Dates Twilight Sparkle?
I'd like a book similar to "My Little Pony: I Became the M6's Sister".
Any My Little Pony Stories With a Male Protagonist?
One that features M6 too.
Some Fanfiction About Childhood Cartoons
Give me some childhood cartoon nostalgia! "Shen Bing Xiao Jiang", "Let's & Go", "Captain Tsubasa", and so on. Any strong recommendations?
My Little Pony: Equestria Girls Fanfiction With a Male Protagonist and Multiple Female Leads
I'm looking for books like My Little Pony: Another Twilight. Please recommend My Little Pony: Equestria Girls fanfiction with a male protagonist.
The Protagonist Endures Countless Sorrows Alone. Bring on the Heartbreaking Angst
I want angst! Give me angst! Hahahahaha!
Childhood Anime!! Fanfiction!! Please!!
For example, childhood cartoons like "Shen Bing Xiao Jiang" and "Boonie Bears".
Any Fanfiction Based on Different Cartoons?
For example, Aotu World, My Little Pony, The Octonauts, games, and so on. I will eat anything because I am really starving.
My Little Pony: The Male Lead Gets Cozy With Princess Luna
My Little Pony with a Male Protagonist. Why Are There So Few Male Protagonists?
There's a Huge Gap in the My Little Pony Section
How has no one written about centaurs? Setting aside the main elements, the centaur plot and character designs are outstanding, and even the writing is excellent. Is this really such a niche subject in the horse-girl community? I've searched several places and found nothing about centaurs. This is infuriating!
Looking for Stories Where the Protagonist Permanently Transmigrates into a Cartoon, and the Cartoon World Is Normal
My Little Pony: The Male Lead Is a Pegasus. It Can Be Fanfiction or an Original Story
Are There Any My Little Pony Books? Anything Goes, I'm Out of Things to Read!
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Hello friend Does the fact that you can find me here mean that you are confused about whether you should read this book? Then I should introduce it and keep you as much as possible. First of all, a brief explanation: the plot is very logical, the writing is good, there is no emotional heroine, the number of words is large, the plot is attractive, and it is not boring. Next, let's make a short story. The rhythmic development of the plot corresponds to that of the original work. It is a mutual influence. The protagonist does not follow the main protagonists of the original work closely. He has his own story line. As long as he is alive, it is not a cliché change of soup without changing medicine. The description of the words in the article is like a clear sunset, which makes people look twice in silence, so that the calm emptiness in the heart reflects the power of words. There is no drama with excessive force, no clutter of complicated branches and leaves, it just makes people feel like being blown by the cold wind after the rain, appropriately moist without showing moisture. The plot is another highlight. The protagonist's daily life is constantly related to the main plot. The author uses a variety of ways to narrate the story. When watching it, it is like watching an episode of My Little Pony. At the same time, it leaves some foreshadowing. The huge amount of emotions brought about by its detonation resonate with the past and fill the heart. Not to mention the originality, looking at Equestria from the perspective of a royal advisor, compared to the original work, the apple looks different when cut horizontally and vertically. At this point, the long and short story has been finished. I wonder if you have any curiosity? Of course, if you feel that this book is not suitable for you after reading it, then I sincerely hope that you can find the book you love as soon as possible. Goodbye
The story in the first volume adopts a peculiar daily structure similar to the main drama of "Gintama". It uses the human wisdom of the protagonist to vigorously reform the political economy of the country of Malaysia as the main line, and reveals the stories that happened in it. The author's writing style is humorous, the plot is interesting, and the arrangement of horse settings and the depiction of horse objects are also very good. The various events in the drama are like pieces of mutton, threaded together by a stick called the main thread to form a complete mutton kebab. The different development stages of the reform alternate with the events of the drama. The author's handling of events in the original work is divided into the following categories: 1. The diamond dog incident in Chapter 25 is passed over briefly, retaining only some interesting elements (but the princess gave too much) 2. The best plan in Chapter 28 is led by the protagonist and the ending is led by human wisdom. 3. Chapter 22: The Troubles Lead to the East, continues the original work, allowing M6 to show its character charm while allowing the protagonist to participate in it to increase interest. 4. Chapter 18 and Chapter 24 are summarized. On this basis, the latter is related to the original work (Rainbow Sonic Boom) and uses it to depict characters such as Bad Money who are the protagonist's friends. As a human being with astonishing wisdom, the protagonist's attribute of Long Aotian (the ability to solve any difficulty with wisdom) is not easy to write about. The author accurately grasps the protagonist's contribution to the remarkable achievements of the country of horse, and stably outputs a sense of gain to the audience. Whenever Mr. Consultant encounters difficulties, readers' expectations will be heightened. The author maintains the uniqueness of the protagonist by accurately grasping the shape of the horse. Readers are looking forward to Mr. Consultant's wonderful performance as if they were watching Sherlock Holmes solving a case. At the same time, it also depicts characters such as Universe, Luna, Bad Money, Fancy Pants, Derpy, and Raven. This group portrait centered on Mr. Consultant is very well done. However, this structure also has some hidden dangers First of all, those elements with great potential (the protagonist's funny character ability, the many voices in the protagonist's brain, and the protagonist's inner motivation) should be recycled as foreshadowing in the later stage from a utilitarian point of view. This article should be over when these things are completely resolved. But at present, these three things have little to do with the main plot of the protagonist's reform of the Kingdom of Horses in the first volume. I don't know if they can become the main plot in the subsequent volumes. Secondly, if all the main plot reforms in the first volume are completed, the work will be missing the main plot. I don't know how the author will continue the main plot later. In the second volume, the author changed his writing ideas. As the opening chapter of the first volume, the content is more focused on introducing the world view and showing the charm of the characters, allowing the audience to get familiar with the characters along with the timeline of the main drama and at the same time have a deep understanding of how the author's G4 world works. As the plot progresses, readers have adapted to this story template, so the author shifts the focus of the second volume from character creation to plot structure. In the second volume of the story, there are fewer plots in which Mr. Consultant solves problems as a tough guy from the sky, and more plots describing various interesting events. The author is good at combining a small incident with a main plot to narrate, using interesting elements interspersed with mini-events to reconcile the main line filled with well-constructed plots. This is a good choice for online article authors, but it also tests the writing skills. Mr. Madhouse did it. Whether it was Rarity's decapitation of the two rocks or the three-line narrative of Fearless VS Water Monkey, they were very exciting, but the author surprised me far more than that. The author used three chapters of daily life from different perspectives to set the stage for the Changelings' blitzkrieg of Central City, and demonstrated his profound writing skills on political and military themes. Pre-war preparations, battle plans, temporary command, improvisation, and post-war liquidation are all shown in The Madhouse in just the right words. For someone like me who only reads comics, this kind of story that is light on characters and heavy on plot is very attractive. Some suggestions: The author started early to try to pave the way for later characters such as Tirek, Starlight, Storm Legion, Star Swirl, etc. However, the story of G4 itself has many contradictions and shortcomings, and a reasonable background summary can only alleviate it. If the author has the intention, he can make major changes to make those big events reasonable. The battle power change in the Imperial City Wedding is a risky move. You handled it well this time, but it does not mean that it will be the same every time. I think the proportion of techniques should be increased to make up for the embarrassment of not being able to find suitable inspiration. Of course, if the author is confident in his plot handling skills, he can also choose the method of flying bricks with force. I'm not as good as you, so I don't dare to choose.
It's great. To be honest, he has surpassed most of the Marvins on Tomato. Moreover, the plot does not completely rely on the original work. I think he wrote it very well. This is my personal opinion.
Among Xiao Ma's fans, this book can be regarded as a rare good book. Unlike most fans who just follow m6 to follow the plot, this book has its own uniqueness. The protagonist affects the pony, the pony affects the protagonist, and the protagonist brings greater influence over time like a butterfly flapping its wings. 6.8 Points should not be the rating of this book, it is at least 8.8 Points. I think the reason for the low rating is that there are fewer words, so the author [please update]
As a second author, I feel that there will be no strong sense of inconsistency when this thing is integrated into the original drama. The only sense of inconsistency may be that the protagonist is an individual, but this happens to be the feature of this article. Although the author's updates are slow in frequency, they are relatively stable. My rating is perfect. However, the author recently described a big conflict. If it is handled well, it will definitely become the shining point of this article. However, if it is not handled well, it may distort the rhythm of this article, and it may even become a major poisonous point. However, the author seems to be handy at the moment. From what I have read so far, I feel that there is nothing wrong with this book, it is very perfect.
A very good book, with delicate writing and vivid context. But the author seems to like to strive for excellence and is more willing to see criticism. So I can only say one thing: If you can't write well, you still need to practice!!!
To be honest, it is much better than the Jungle Book. Although the author only talks about human nature in the ordinary world, or from the perspective of the ruling class, this book is already excellent. Whether it is plot structure or plot filling, the Jungle Book only relies on animation and changes the original settings. The story is beyond recognition, and the story is also biased towards the main plot plus the daily life of the M6, and this book shows a perfect modern working animal (only available in first- and second-tier cities, and should be in the leadership class). Whether it is the complexity of human nature in this one, or the simplicity in that book, I personally feel that your book is like a god, and his book is slightly inferior. Give it another rating. This is the real level.
It is creative and perfectly combines the classic British drama "Yes, Prime Minister" with My Little Pony. It uses human wisdom to solve the problems of the ponies, letting regrets flow with laughter. It also creates the role of "consultant", which makes the context of the whole book clear and interesting.
A very good Little Pony novel, that is to say, it is simply great. My Little Pony aesthetic has become what this book is like. The author hastily taken responsibility and recommended a few Little Pony novels that you like, or GKD will do. To be honest, the writing is really good. There is a paragraph at the end that I have changed. It is really good. It is better that it has not been changed. It is even better after the correction. The description is so delicate and the writing is so good.
If you consider the world of My Little Pony from a realistic perspective, you can discover the greatness and tragedy hidden under the fairy tale. But after he cut open the comics and cartoons with a knife called reality and discovered these things, there was nothing that could make up for it. Celestia's thousand-year loneliness, the uncertain future of ponies under the protection of Harmony, and even the possible conspiracies caused by the strange logic of the original show... Fortunately, the author solved many problems with a human in a foreign land (and also became part of the new problems) What's even more pleasing is that although Mr. Consultant is an original "protagonist", he does not dominate the show. All characters have their own lives and mental journeys, and they are still as vivid and active as in the original drama. In addition, the author's knowledge of Western classics and his writing technique, which I would call artistic, are also very pleasing. A large number of multi-line narratives, quotations/magic changes can really allow readers to get into this novel This is really a novel that can make people seriously invest their thoughts and emotions into reading (rather than just reading it lightly)