My Little Pony: Yes! Princess!

Hello friend Does the fact that you can find me here mean that you are confused about whether you should read this book? Then I should introduce it and keep you as much as possible. First of all, a brief explanation: the plot is very logical, the writing is good, there is no emotional heroine, the number of words is large, the plot is attractive, and it is not boring. Next, let's make a short story. The rhythmic development of the plot corresponds to that of the original work. It is a mutual influence. The protagonist does not follow the main protagonists of the original work closely. He has his own story line. As long as he is alive, it is not a cliché change of soup without changing medicine. The description of the words in the article is like a clear sunset, which makes people look twice in silence, so that the calm emptiness in the heart reflects the power of words. There is no drama with excessive force, no clutter of complicated branches and leaves, it just makes people feel like being blown by the cold wind after the rain, appropriately moist without showing moisture. The plot is another highlight. The protagonist's daily life is constantly related to the main plot. The author uses a variety of ways to narrate the story. When watching it, it is like watching an episode of My Little Pony. At the same time, it leaves some foreshadowing. The huge amount of emotions brought about by its detonation resonate with the past and fill the heart. Not to mention the originality, looking at Equestria from the perspective of a royal advisor, compared to the original work, the apple looks different when cut horizontally and vertically. At this point, the long and short story has been finished. I wonder if you have any curiosity? Of course, if you feel that this book is not suitable for you after reading it, then I sincerely hope that you can find the book you love as soon as possible. Goodbye

The story in the first volume adopts a peculiar daily structure similar to the main drama of "Gintama". It uses the human wisdom of the protagonist to vigorously reform the political economy of the country of Malaysia as the main line, and reveals the stories that happened in it. The author's writing style is humorous, the plot is interesting, and the arrangement of horse settings and the depiction of horse objects are also very good. The various events in the drama are like pieces of mutton, threaded together by a stick called the main thread to form a complete mutton kebab. The different development stages of the reform alternate with the events of the drama. The author's handling of events in the original work is divided into the following categories: 1. The diamond dog incident in Chapter 25 is passed over briefly, retaining only some interesting elements (but the princess gave too much) 2. The best plan in Chapter 28 is led by the protagonist and the ending is led by human wisdom. 3. Chapter 22: The Troubles Lead to the East, continues the original work, allowing M6 to show its character charm while allowing the protagonist to participate in it to increase interest. 4. Chapter 18 and Chapter 24 are summarized. On this basis, the latter is related to the original work (Rainbow Sonic Boom) and uses it to depict characters such as Bad Money who are the protagonist's friends. As a human being with astonishing wisdom, the protagonist's attribute of Long Aotian (the ability to solve any difficulty with wisdom) is not easy to write about. The author accurately grasps the protagonist's contribution to the remarkable achievements of the country of horse, and stably outputs a sense of gain to the audience. Whenever Mr. Consultant encounters difficulties, readers' expectations will be heightened. The author maintains the uniqueness of the protagonist by accurately grasping the shape of the horse. Readers are looking forward to Mr. Consultant's wonderful performance as if they were watching Sherlock Holmes solving a case. At the same time, it also depicts characters such as Universe, Luna, Bad Money, Fancy Pants, Derpy, and Raven. This group portrait centered on Mr. Consultant is very well done. However, this structure also has some hidden dangers First of all, those elements with great potential (the protagonist's funny character ability, the many voices in the protagonist's brain, and the protagonist's inner motivation) should be recycled as foreshadowing in the later stage from a utilitarian point of view. This article should be over when these things are completely resolved. But at present, these three things have little to do with the main plot of the protagonist's reform of the Kingdom of Horses in the first volume. I don't know if they can become the main plot in the subsequent volumes. Secondly, if all the main plot reforms in the first volume are completed, the work will be missing the main plot. I don't know how the author will continue the main plot later. In the second volume, the author changed his writing ideas. As the opening chapter of the first volume, the content is more focused on introducing the world view and showing the charm of the characters, allowing the audience to get familiar with the characters along with the timeline of the main drama and at the same time have a deep understanding of how the author's G4 world works. As the plot progresses, readers have adapted to this story template, so the author shifts the focus of the second volume from character creation to plot structure. In the second volume of the story, there are fewer plots in which Mr. Consultant solves problems as a tough guy from the sky, and more plots describing various interesting events. The author is good at combining a small incident with a main plot to narrate, using interesting elements interspersed with mini-events to reconcile the main line filled with well-constructed plots. This is a good choice for online article authors, but it also tests the writing skills. Mr. Madhouse did it. Whether it was Rarity's decapitation of the two rocks or the three-line narrative of Fearless VS Water Monkey, they were very exciting, but the author surprised me far more than that. The author used three chapters of daily life from different perspectives to set the stage for the Changelings' blitzkrieg of Central City, and demonstrated his profound writing skills on political and military themes. Pre-war preparations, battle plans, temporary command, improvisation, and post-war liquidation are all shown in The Madhouse in just the right words. For someone like me who only reads comics, this kind of story that is light on characters and heavy on plot is very attractive. Some suggestions: The author started early to try to pave the way for later characters such as Tirek, Starlight, Storm Legion, Star Swirl, etc. However, the story of G4 itself has many contradictions and shortcomings, and a reasonable background summary can only alleviate it. If the author has the intention, he can make major changes to make those big events reasonable. The battle power change in the Imperial City Wedding is a risky move. You handled it well this time, but it does not mean that it will be the same every time. I think the proportion of techniques should be increased to make up for the embarrassment of not being able to find suitable inspiration. Of course, if the author is confident in his plot handling skills, he can also choose the method of flying bricks with force. I'm not as good as you, so I don't dare to choose.

It's great. To be honest, he has surpassed most of the Marvins on Tomato. Moreover, the plot does not completely rely on the original work. I think he wrote it very well. This is my personal opinion.

Among Xiao Ma's fans, this book can be regarded as a rare good book. Unlike most fans who just follow m6 to follow the plot, this book has its own uniqueness. The protagonist affects the pony, the pony affects the protagonist, and the protagonist brings greater influence over time like a butterfly flapping its wings. 6.8 Points should not be the rating of this book, it is at least 8.8 Points. I think the reason for the low rating is that there are fewer words, so the author [please update]

As a second author, I feel that there will be no strong sense of inconsistency when this thing is integrated into the original drama. The only sense of inconsistency may be that the protagonist is an individual, but this happens to be the feature of this article. Although the author's updates are slow in frequency, they are relatively stable. My rating is perfect. However, the author recently described a big conflict. If it is handled well, it will definitely become the shining point of this article. However, if it is not handled well, it may distort the rhythm of this article, and it may even become a major poisonous point. However, the author seems to be handy at the moment. From what I have read so far, I feel that there is nothing wrong with this book, it is very perfect.

A very good book, with delicate writing and vivid context. But the author seems to like to strive for excellence and is more willing to see criticism. So I can only say one thing: If you can't write well, you still need to practice! ! !

It is creative and perfectly combines the classic British drama "Yes, Prime Minister" with My Little Pony. It uses human wisdom to solve the problems of the ponies, letting regrets flow with laughter. It also creates the role of "consultant", which makes the context of the whole book clear and interesting.

A very good Little Pony novel, that is to say, it is simply great. My Little Pony aesthetic has become what this book is like. The author hastily taken responsibility and recommended a few Little Pony novels that you like, or GKD will do. To be honest, the writing is really good. There is a paragraph at the end that I have changed. It is really good. It is better that it has not been changed. It is even better after the correction. The description is so delicate and the writing is so good.

The writing is really good. I feel that the author must have been in an English environment. The jokes he wrote are very consistent with the original work hahh

This book ranks high in my mind among the pony and human novels I have read. I like this novel very much. I hope the author will not stop updating. Come on!

This novel is an attractive work that deftly blends original work and fantasy to immerse readers in a rich plot. The author has excellent performance in character creation and emotional description, allowing readers to deeply feel the protagonist's inner world. In addition, the novel has a compact structure and smooth writing, making it easy to read in one sitting and leave you with endless aftertaste. [Top post]

If you consider the world of My Little Pony from a realistic perspective, you can discover the greatness and tragedy hidden under the fairy tale. But after he cut open the comics and cartoons with a knife called reality and discovered these things, there was nothing that could make up for it. Celestia's thousand-year loneliness, the uncertain future of ponies under the protection of Harmony, and even the possible conspiracies caused by the strange logic of the original show... Fortunately, the author solved many problems with a human in a foreign land (and also became part of the new problems) What's even more pleasing is that although Mr. Consultant is an original "protagonist", he does not dominate the show. All characters have their own lives and mental journeys, and they are still as vivid and active as in the original drama. In addition, the author's knowledge of Western classics and his writing technique, which I would call artistic, are also very pleasing. A large number of multi-line narratives, quotations/magic changes can really allow readers to get into this novel This is really a novel that can make people seriously invest their thoughts and emotions into reading (rather than just reading it lightly)

Good, good, half-step British drama to rule the world (although some of the methods are indeed commonly used in reality), this is a wonderful fusion of My Little Pony and Yes, Minister. It is recommended that you watch Yes, Minister or some of its explanations first, otherwise you will lose a lot of fun. Great books that keep me spinning around.

The logic is clear, the characters are well developed, and each chapter has a lot of words. I haven't read such a good fanfic for a long time. It was the last time I read it. It is a very good book. (The quality has been improved, resulting in a decrease in quantity, so the update is a bit slow)

It's amazing. It's been a long time since I've come across a book that I'm willing to read seriously. The writing is also very good.

Even if you haven't read any information related to My Little Pony, you can still read it happily. It's rare to see a book that appeals to me so much, even though I've never understood the subject matter. The super train looks like a European train from Neta, the airship smells like a Zeppelin, and the consultant, his secretary office, and the Equestrian government feel like His Majesty's government. It can be said that this is what I mainly read in this book [laughter] I quite like the character style of Mr. Consultant, and I also like the descriptions of other high-level government officials. It can be seen that the author is very knowledgeable in history and politics. A PC player who has watched "Yes, Prime Minister" can occasionally get something that makes him happy. I'll leave this first review to you [laughing evilly] You must keep writing it down.

Humans Wear My Little Pony, the author's writing is super good, the ultimate Western style, and as the author of the comic party, almost every character in the original work is perfectly portrayed [shy] The male protagonist joins Equestria as a human consultant. He has hundreds of personality fragments and knows almost everything. He is scheming, gentle, crazy, and complaining all in one. He can only pay tribute to the legendary consultant king. Sir [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] On the other hand, the author's writing style is the most consistent with the original work I have ever seen. The rigorous plot is interspersed with nonsensical funny plots from time to time, and you basically won't feel any boredom [Note] [Note] The only shortcoming is that the update is too slow, but in terms of quality, it can definitely be regarded as a masterpiece among Xiao Ma's works [Top post] [Top post] [Top post]

For me, this is a good-looking book. It allows me to feel the uneasiness of the protagonist in a different world and to take root in the world of ponies. But the author is too short [laughter]

The writing style is okay, and the jokes are interesting. Compared with other articles, it restores the original characters as much as possible, and tries its best to portray a qualified national team. Unlike most of the people who do it all by one person, and give some suggestions. Most pony fans only have an impression of the characters in the drama and theater version, and their understanding of the comics is uneven. Yu Jue still made some efforts to recruit reinforcements in Kexi Guanghui. Maybe it would be better if his changes were described after this battle?

It's so vivid, the author is very funny and not embarrassing at the same time

Very good novel, it made me spin on my own

Very exciting. More than 60% of the books are visually inspected.

This is the smoothest pony writing I have seen so far. The writing style is super exciting. Apart from the slow update, there are no bad points. Highly recommended! ! !

It is very well written, and some people say that this book will go to jail. However, in fact, while Harmony maintains a simple and conspiratorial world, it also naturally simplifies thinking. Therefore, it is indeed a long way to go to correct chronic diseases to a certain extent, but this also reflects the value of Harmony, because it uses the setting of Harmony in a world as complex as possible to make you believe in the purity of human nature. And this is what we are really doing. Compared with this, anyone who shows up as a saint is selfish. If Shuangwen should not be able to do this, but for people like me who pursue self-realization in life, it is still considered Shuangwen.

The writing is very good, but you need to read a little bit of "The Prime Minister" or "My Little Pony". Having some general understanding of this type of plot content will make it easier to integrate

The author's writing is really excellent. One of the characteristics is that although it is a novel, the transitions give people a special and wonderful silky smooth feeling. The protagonist, a human, has a few people in his mind, not many, probably enough for hundreds of mahjong tables. What the protagonist brings with him is more knowledge, wisdom, political system, and the ability to fool people than technology.

Very nice! ! ! The best of Xiao Ma's stories I've seen so far! ! !

Among so many pony fanfics, this one can definitely be called a good one. It's a bit confusing, but the literary aspects, that is, the emotional scenes and dialogues, are really good. The angle is very novel, because most of the previous human time travel systems revolved around the m6. This person here directly chose to participate in politics. Of course, he does have the ability. All in all highly recommended.

This is the most appetizing pony fan I have ever seen! Marvelous! And the author almost always creates original plots, which is really addictive! I beg the author to keep writing it! This is the best pony fanfic I have ever seen on the Internet! The writing style is witty and humorous, making people laugh every time they read it.

It's really good-looking. The author's control of the characters' roles is really accurate. The personal settings are also very perfect. It's very comfortable to watch. But since the author likes to criticize, I can only say, "Young man still needs to practice" [laughs] It's still good to watch, it's really a masterpiece among My Little Pony fanfics, but there are too few updates [crying]