People in Begonia, but Healthy Model

The writing is pretty good, and the setting is very novel. However, the shortcoming is that part of the plot is not clearly described, including but not limited to the background of the protagonist, some descriptions of the inner and outer worlds of the sacrifice and the puppy world, some settings of the Demon King's world, the memory of the protagonist, the reasons for failure and repetition, etc. Although there are I can understand it after reading the author's explanations, but to be honest, I don't actually like reading paragraph reviews and chapter reviews, which interrupt the thinking of reading novels. However, the author's unclear descriptions make it necessary to read paragraph reviews and comments to see if there is any explanation. I think unclear descriptions can be regarded as a big mistake. Maybe the author wanted to write about the kind of mystery-solving and brain-burning feeling. It was okay to set up the mystery in the early stage, but the puzzle-solving in the later stage did not keep up, and even some basic settings were not clearly written. I think if you want to solve the mystery, you must fill in the mystery clearly later, and it cannot be unclear. But the author is already very good, but I hope he can improve his writing and plot control, and it will become even better in the future!

Excluding Sacrifice, I think it's very interesting. The character of the protagonist is very interesting, interactive, and not dull. I like this kind of protagonist who tries not to use his brain. Of course, the plot may not be unfolding at the moment, so I still don't understand the relationship between these systems, so I am still a little dizzy. After all, the other people must be real. However, the beginning of the chapter Sacrifice seems to be that it is all an illusion, so at the beginning of this chapter, I can only say that I was dizzy and did not understand it at all. Maybe I haven't read this kind of article before? ? Why did this third dungeon end so vaguely? I didn't understand it. Also, where did the plot of your life sacrifice take place? Has the protagonist experienced it in the past? I don't understand it at all, and why the biting dog in the introduction was immediately disconnected. Shouldn't there be three of them in the fantasy world? I'll keep it for now. I'll probably continue reading after the book is finished and all the secrets are revealed. Otherwise, it'll be torture.

It's so beautiful [adoration][adoration][adoration], but I didn't understand the third world (forgive my not-so-smart brain [cry][cry][cry]) and it's too little and not enough to watch.

It's really good-looking, Xiao Song is super cute, and he's also very smart. I just want to know the story of his two mothers. And I always feel like there are holes dug that haven't been filled yet. Many of the characters mentioned earlier are not mentioned at all later.

It's pretty good to watch, and the setting is okay. There may be a plot in the middle that's a bit fiddly. My suggestion here is to skip that dungeon first. If you ask why the score is so low, it's probably because there are too few people rating it [Love]

Except for the scene in the third dungeon where the protagonist is experimented and given electric shocks by the original male protagonist, I don't really like the others. I like the first dungeon the most compared to the bedtime cookies.

I think foreign persimmons are not suitable for you. You should go to the flower market to study.

The character design of the protagonist is very novel, but I may not have enough brains to understand it, and the world suddenly changes. As for the chapter about Bai Wu, I don't know if the author has run out of inspiration and has no tail. I feel that there are many holes that have not been filled. Please give the author a big boost [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]

The worldview and framework are first-rate, but the writing style is okay, but not atmospheric enough, and it cannot convey the thrilling feeling of the framework. In addition, it is best to mark the if line in advance, otherwise it will feel stuck and uncomfortable. I love the last bit of the character, hehe.

It's so good to watch. After reading it, I had an uneasy feeling. Maybe it's because of the multi-branch ending. I felt so melancholy. Maybe it's because they really like Xiao Xi. I hope there are many Xiao hope who can accompany them at the same time, hahaha. Only children make choices, so of course Xiaoxi wants them all, hehe. I really like that little jellyfish, it's really white moonlight! It's so gentle and considerate. I also like their interaction in the last chapter. They will definitely be happy every day. That Bone Dragon is pretty good too, hehe, he feels the same way as his owner. I really thought about sandwich biscuits, oh, what a pity, haha. Also, why did that knight betray His Highness whom he wanted to protect? It was so strange. He had obviously sworn an oath to never betray. It was disgusting. Some characters appear so rarely. Is the second young master in good health? He is still too weak (bushi) hahaha. A magical girl who relies on magic to defeat the dragon and save the world? Boy, haha, the second grade boy is so cute. Although that prince only showed his face, I think it's pretty good. Wait, wait, overall, I quite like it. It's really not fun! Finally, I hope Xiaoxi and the others will be together forever! (In the end, the little prince and his guardian lived a happy life.) Hehe It is true that some places may be a bit difficult to understand in the middle, maybe because of the description. After all, it is quite difficult to accurately describe what you want and let every reader fully understand it. But, but, I can understand most of it and ignore a little bit. This book is pretty good. Nice. Mainly because there are a few characters that I really like, which are great. (Just to mention, Luo is pretty good hahaha, Xiaoxi likes her figure very much, that world is really interesting, hehe, well written! Applause)

Watching Begonia in Tomato gives me a feeling of powerlessness as if I have taken off my pants.

I also thought that the mermaid would be with the sea monster, but it ended up being gone. It was too little. I "hate" you, the author.

A great article. The author's storyline is novel and the characters are vividly drawn. Each character has a unique personality. It's not difficult to figure out the plot of the story. It's sweet, cruelty-free, and has no silly plot. You're welcome to read it.

I think the author's setting is interesting, but it's a bit lacking in some places. After all, it can't be a big deal, so the emotions and the plot must be able to support it, but the plot of getting along in each world is a bit lacking. And because the transition is a bit stiff and the world view is too big, it will be a bit confusing. Anyway, I hope the author can work hard.

The interaction between the protagonists is particularly interesting, but some chapters are so abruptly interrupted that I thought there would be a follow-up episode or something, but it was gone [crying]

The author's writing style is very good, and he is a new author! If you want to come, you can take a look. The number of chapters that have been updated now is enough to read for a while. Don't miss it if you pass by. Keep updating. Come on.

I really like this book written by the author! Every character is so interesting to me! I especially like Sedna, [shy][blowing kiss][admiration] Why is such a beautiful book not popular, [what][almost crying][shy] I came across this book by chance, foreign persimmon, don't be too much [smile][smile][smile]

Good-looking, astringent on the head (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

Except for the last world, which was a bit dizzy, I really liked the rest. But I still like the first one, Mr. Sea Monster, haha ​​[laughs]

It's really a healthy mode! It's beautiful, thank you to the author! [Shy][Shy][Shy][Adoration][Adoration][Admiration][Top post][Top post][Top post][Flying kiss][Flying kiss][Flying kiss][Love][Love][Love]

Beautiful(｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ Although there are a few places that I can't see very clearly. But before I knew it, I finished chasing it hhhhhhh I quite like the first few underage worlds Ambiguity is full of value

It's good to read, I like it very much, and you can also see the hugeness of the system world. If it doesn't collapse after writing it, it will definitely be a nine points.

It's a good watch to pass the time. In some places, the author's imagination is too active and he can't keep up with the pace. Even after reading it, I still don't understand some parts, but overall it's still very good to watch, 1V1.

Really good-looking! I really like Baby Song Song's character! Come on! [Blowing kiss]

Be more careful, I like to see this kind of [admiration]

I like it, but I feel like it all ends hastily, without the story or plot of growing up.

I don't understand the last world a bit, but overall it's very interesting. Compared to other things, I still like Mr. Stranger the most [Adoration].

This book is quite novel, not bad, but unfortunately too healthy hahaha

It's a very novel story, although it's a bit messy, but the author has explanations and additional settings, so I'll definitely close the comment (.)

It's super good-looking, very sweet, the protagonist is also very smart, it's quite funny without being sadistic, and the system is also very good. My favorite is the sea monster in the first world, and you can see the author's progress in each world. It's just that sometimes some things may be a bit unclear, and you need to read the author's comments to fully understand them, but it's still super cool. It's just too short and not enough to look at!