Honghuang: I Compete with Hongjun for the Taoist Ancestor

Personally, I think the subject matter is very interesting in the prehistoric novel, and the writing style is a bit vernacular, but it doesn't affect it. The idea of ​​competing with Hongjun for the Dao Ancestor is indeed wonderful, but I don't understand why he wants to fight against the Dao of Heaven. See the author's subsequent description. In summary, I think this is a wonderful article with a great subject matter and the writing style can be improved. Worth watching too.

A very nice new book. I have run out of all the books in my history. This book is quite good. The author is a bit funny, but the writing is very good. You can read it. I just found this book today and read it in one breath. It is very good. Qinglian is the protagonist. It is not a system book. I am tired of reading system books.

The writing is good. The four innate treasures, the Four Swords of Killing Immortals, are clearly arranged. The author justifies his explanation, which is wonderful! The follow-up plot is also very interesting. I look forward to the plot of snatching Hongjun's apprentice!

It's perfect. It gives a different feeling. The plot is consistent, and the cultivation and advancement are also consistent. It's not like some prehistoric novels like "Golden Finger" where everything comes to mind, and there are foreshadowings. It's very likely that the great god Pangu will appear in the later stage. This is great.

Good, keep up the good work

Write quickly, write quickly, and have your own ideas. Follow your ideas, come on

Very good, the logic is not messy. Writing a prehistoric novel is to innovate within a fixed structural framework. The plot, spiritual treasures, techniques, and avenues can all be used, but you can't write blindly. At least it must be logically smooth. It is best not to have a system, and the quality cannot be too low.

Very novel, innovative, step by step towards success, better than systematic writing 👍

Wonderful, beautiful

In Honghuangliu, it is considered a good book and very interesting.

That's a good idea, come on

Can Chaos Qinglian, the protagonist's mother later, be resurrected? I want to see the resurrection [almost crying]

Did the author not refine Buzhou Mountain? Only Zhou Shan is left?

It's worth a look, come on

Creative, good

Hmm... It's impossible to follow the original route, but you have to incorporate new elements, such as a magic machine similar to a mobile phone, a concentrated cannon that uses spiritual power to return to the world after being fired, etc.

Good! Quite pretty! The update is just unstable! ! If only it could be updated and stabilized! That would be perfect! !

This book is very good. Although the general idea is not new, it can be regarded as opening up a new ancient school.

I don't know if there is a female protagonist

Come on, I'm looking forward to it

Very good idea

It's okay. You can take a look.

Very good, worth watching

Very interesting and cleverly conceived

It's really good, the plot is new,

Diary of the growth of the second son of aristocratic family

Honghuang Wenli is quite good.

Interesting, okay, come on!

Very good, good, come on✊

Very interesting hahaha 😁